

Date: 12/13/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 17
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D

Date: 12/13/2006 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 16
YAY And there I'm able to read the update :)
No one was home? That sounds as if Buffy it out with them, a good sign I guess. But Spike still thought the worst. Good that Xander drove back this moment. And Anya was fun :)
Loved Spike taking his heart in his hands and started to tell Buffy what he sees in them, couple-wise.

Date: 12/12/2006 - 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
This is awesome! keep up the awesome writting.

Date: 12/11/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 16
thanks, great story

Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 16
Hehe...I thought she was with them! Poor Spike was freaking out! So is Buffy okay with them being boyfriend and girlfriend? I hope so! Update soon please!

Date: 12/11/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Date: 12/11/2006 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter 16
He is in Loooove!!! and admitting it too... how nice. Can't wait to see (read!) her reaction...

Date: 12/11/2006 - 09:18 am Title: Chapter 16
*giggle* Together, boyfriend-girlfriend... wow, good to see he's being stronger and taking this road. Great update!

Date: 12/11/2006 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter 16
Loved the way you closed the chapter. Fantastic update!

Date: 12/11/2006 - 05:59 am Title: Chapter 16
He's brave and foolhardy at the same time, but it's almost like he's spent forever treading water and not going anywhere with anyone - and along comes Buffy. He's passionate and forthright and she's young and shy. Great combination. Will he lead and she follow, or is it the other way round? Great chapter.

Date: 12/11/2006 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 16
This is wonderful. You're updates always put me in such a good mood!

Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:49 am Title: Chapter 16
Spike's such a little boy :) I'm really dreading when Hank sweeps into their lives; hopefully they'll have built up something he can't break before that. Oh, and can you write my into your script so I can kick Hank's ass? Just a thought... lol

Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter 16
Love it, was expecting him to say lovers not boyfriend girlfriend but that works to esspecially since they have not had sex.

Date: 12/11/2006 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter 16
ouhhh loved, loved, loved that one and big YAY for the final scene, thanks! cant wait for more ;)

Date: 12/11/2006 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 16
Spike has polished off his heart and is giving it to Buffy on a silver platter. Buffy being so young and inexperienced is unaware of the huge leap of faith and love that Spike has made. I really enjoyed reading Buffy's innocent negotiations on just what their relationship is and quite frankily I can't blame her on making Spike spell out the terms of their new found relationship. It is a big deal to commit at so young an age especially when Buffy seems to have not had a boyfriend - is that right? I guess that Buffy will share all her "first's" with Spike who is a very experienced bachelor.
Great chapter - thanks for the update.

Date: 12/11/2006 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter 16
Nah, sorry, I wasn't fooled, but I am a bit surprised about something... I think Spike over-reacted just a tad. I don't mean when he was worried Hank had found Buffy, I mean after the fact, when he knew Buffy was safe. Like how he thought that she wasn't caring about his feelings by not leaving a note. She still had two hours before he was due home, why would she think she needed to leave a note? I am glad that Spike is slowly starting to admit his feelings about her, and to her. Bravo. Overall, really good chapter. =)
Author's Response: Yeah, he did over-react, but I think he knew that. I think we can both agree that Spike doesn't have the best handle on his emotions and while reason would dictate that she had just made a mistake, his overactive emotions and tendency to jump the gun would make him more prone to totally-blown-out-of-proportion behavior. Not that that is a very good excuse for acting like an ass. Thanks for your review, gypsy-jin...you smartie, you. ; - )

Date: 12/11/2006 - 12:03 am Title: Chapter 16
wow great chapter. that one was so interexting and entertaining, god i just loved it. cant wait to see how see how she reponds to him sayin there boyfriend and girlfriend. love this story so much and cant wait for an update. thanks for writing.

Date: 12/11/2006 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter 16
loved it

Date: 12/10/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG SHE BETTER BE HAPPY ABOUT THIS!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. also im so glad that she was with xander and anya and that he was so worried about her, its shows just how much he cares. i really hope that they get together and are happy together. also i hope everything keeps working out well and that hank doesnt find her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter and see wat she says. thanx

Date: 12/10/2006 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 16
Okay, still really loving this story. One thing though -- I believe the age of consent in Nevada is sixteen for girls, so in Las Vegas she wouldn't be underage. In Calif she would be. I suppose it is possible to make a case that he lured an underage girl out of state for sexual purposes and it therefore be considered a crime committed in Calif (where he lured her from -- that would be the assumption, whether true or not, for that kind of charge to be made, if it could be made), whereas if they had just met while both living in Nevada there would be no problem. Other than that quibble, I like where you've gone with the story and anxiously look forward to Buffy's answer. Thanks! :-)
Author's Response: You are correct that the legal age of consent in Nevada is 16 for both sexes and legally, Spike probably wouldn't be charged with anything if he were to be arrested. However, that being said, for the purposes of this fic you have to remember that Buffy's father could almost certainly push for a stiff penalty with his connections...not gonna go any further into than that.
And you know, May-December relationships are still very taboo especially in regards to a teenage girl and an older man, so it is quite conceivable that it would cause problems even though it wasn't illegal.
I appreciate your comments, Mac, and I'm glad you're still enjoying it. ~Jae

Date: 12/10/2006 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
....always worth it. sorry 'bout that.

Date: 12/10/2006 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 16
loved it. really thought buffy would have had enough sense to leave a note for spike but it was an honest mistake. loved it lots and lots. evil cliff hanger here. doesn't buffy want to be with him??? that little "oh" at the end kinda gives me the impression that she's not entirely sure. great update. please post soon. and don't worry about not posting daily. the wait for an update is /
C

Date: 12/10/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 16
"oh"? that's her response?? she wants to, right? PLEASE let her want to!!! excellent chapter, definitely ran the gamut of all my emotions, from worrying about Buffy to emphathizing with Spike to fearing whether his possessiveness would mess them up to loving the happy Spuffy...now all we need is for her to say HELL YES!!!

Date: 12/10/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
Loved it. Maybe we can get some spuffy lovin soon. hehe..
Keep up the good work.

Date: 12/10/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 16
Yea!!!!Spike finally admitted it !! Please update soon !!