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Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 12

Steamy! I think I'd die if a guy (especially a Spike-shaped guy) whispered those kinds of things in my ear while he was hovering over me. *sighs dreamily* lol, I'm pathetic. Good chapter! :)

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 12

ouuuu big step (well for me anyway) between Spike and Buffy. At least they know their feelings for each other. Loved it, as usual, cant wait for more!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 12

LOL ANYAS SO FUNNY!!! AND THAT WAS SO HOT BETWEEN SPIKE AND BUFFY!!! i love this story and am so happy u updated. im so glad that their relationship is progressing and that theyre getting closer. i really hope that it continues and that they become a couple. i was so glad that buffy liked xander and anya and that theyre so nice to her. also i really hope that everything works out and that xander, anya and spike protect her from hank if he comes looking for her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

OOHH Very Hot! I really liked this chapter, I'm glad Spike isn't resisting any more! I really like Anya, most stories have her too over the top, in this one she is a good balance! I am really enjoying this story! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter 12

Now that I am officially delurked AND you have written THE best chapter ever I guess i will be reviewing each chapter now. Hey, you work hard on this ... it is the least that we greedy readers can do eh?

First of all, I always adore a story with Anya in it ... her character is a gas and you have used her very effectively so far. I have a feeling that she will play an integral part in the future ... should be good since she seems to know and care for William.

Secondly, you are have really done a wonderful job of creating a very HOT and honorable, multifaceted William and a very innocent yet strong Buffy. This will be a cool realtionship (at least I am hoping so). This was an awesome chapter, one of the ones that I read twice.

Great work, You are very talented, Thank you for sharing!!!

Reviewer: Spuffygirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:55 am Title: Chapter 12

One word comes to mind. Hot! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter 12

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 12

Loved it, More please.
So that is a good question is Cordelia more than just a boss, he was thinking earlier that its been to long since he woke up with a women beside him, does that mean he hasn't had one in a while or just his thinking in this chapter made it seem like he was a just get what he wanted then leave.
Wonder what they will buy on there shopping trip, I see a trip to Victoria Secrets coming on, or what will Spike tell his boss and everyone at work. What will happen to the doorman when they find he left a 16 yr old sleep out side while she was waiting for Spike.
More please.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 12

well this chapter sorta gave me a happy too....lol. great job. loved it. more please. these two are really getting along aren't they. and gotta love that anya. she's blunt but she breaks the ice and that's always a good thing.

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 12

I love this story. I'm always happy to see when a new chapter is up. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12

great update

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 11

Hooo Wheee! ::Tapping foot:: EEEsh now I'm going to be waiting for more...ah well paitence is a virtue and all.
Excellent overall so far. I just can't find a darn thing to be critical about.
::Applauds!::
Excellent, excellent ma belle fille !

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 10

I remember the whole "Feminine hygene products" thing with Papa-san, lol. Do you? If so I must once again say good job of working what you know into what you imagine. Another excellent chapter...

Reviewer: Charley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 11

Great!

Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 11

Loved this chapter!More please

Reviewer: Marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love that they are there for each other. I think Spike needs Buffy as much as she needs him.Please update soon!

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:55 am Title: Chapter 9

WOW!

::Le Huff, Le Puff, Le Pant!!::

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 8

AAAAGGGHHHH the agony of waiting.....is exquisite bliss. Something to look forward to is always a blessing!

::hurries past on her way to the next chapter::

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter 6

::waits patiently:: : ~ )

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 5

Oh the fortitude and perseverence of marchiing forward after having your text devoured into the ms netherworld! I salute you (true confession: i would probably have cried stomped my feet and given up).

Your grandpa (u know which one i mean), is so proud of you,

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 4

How clever of you to walk your story through what you already know and what you can find out through your "connections" (giggle - i mean the bad--assed bartender in your life). Another excellent chapter. I thought the last one was good but this one is...poetic almost. The story is really coming alive now.

Reviewer: Mama-san Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter 3

Another excellent chapter can't wait to get to the next!!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/25/2006 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 11

teehee...yay! She told him the truth, and they talked it out, and then with the kissage!!! yay!!! Love it!!!

Reviewer: Mac 1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

I am completely intrigued with your story from the first couple chapters I've read so far. The idea that Buffy, in her total desperation for relief from the loveless abusive hell that is her home life, would latch onto a years-old passing 'promise' made by a man she'd never met before and would probably never see again is just heartbreaking and totally believeable to me. You've written her despair and her frantic doubts convincingly enough to draw me and in make me believe it. I very much like the story so far and also appreciate your frequent updating. Thanks for sharing your story with us, and please keep updating frequently.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2006 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 11

I'm so glad she finally told him! So...does this mean they're in a relationship now? I hope so! Update soon please!

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