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Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 09:36 am Title: Chapter 16

That panic he's feeling is incredibly intense. And that fear, when it's realeased turns to anger, but he handled it wonderfully. Good chapter.

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Date: 10/01/2007 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 27

Gotta love this story :)

More, soon, please?

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 15

His panic is palable. . . and I love the Cordy/Spike interaction. Cordy's another character who's so great to write.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 14

No ball dropping at all, just the vagaries of -- well, I started to say life on the hellmouth -- *laughs* I think you know what I mean though. Sometimes the reviews are slow in coming, but never fear, you are still doing your job and writing wonderfully. I love, love this story.

Reviewer: Nia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 13

There's something so liberating about a character like Anya. Blunt, honest, and full of common sense, she's a joy to write and when she's written correctly, a joy to read. You've captured her so damn well. I love this Anya. Thanks for including her.

Reviewer: Nia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 12

*sighs*

Sweet, honest, hot, tender, hovering-just-at-the-edge of exploding. Gah. Good stuff, sweets, really good stuff.

Reviewer: Nia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 11

Well, so much for bloody friendship.

It was a pipe-dream, pie-in-the-sky hopes that they wouldn't cross that line. But worth a shot, in any case.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 10

He did kind of overreact, but then, it's completely in character for him to react that way. Honestly? The caveman bit is so very typical, in some respects. He had this overwhelming need to protect what he looked on as 'his' that it was always there, under the surface. I liked it.

Reviewer: spikes_vamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 27

Need more.
I love this story, More please. ; )

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 9

Friends. He was well aware that they could never be friends not with the sexual tension running like a current between them.

Current? A current of sexual tension? How about a deep, fast running river, which is way more like what's between them. Good chapter sweetie, really good.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 8

I know you're wondering why I'm reviewing now. I know you are, so don't play like you aren't. I'm going to explain. Why -- well, because I was bored (between cleaning bouts) and I wanted to read something. And your name popped into my head. So that's why I'm reading and reviewing all over again -- see, because it's just as good (maybe even better) the second time around. So there. That's your answer.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 7

Well, he wouldn't be our hero if he didn't harbor more than a few nasty thoughts about that girl, now would he?

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Date: 09/30/2007 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 6

Um. Actually, that was spuffy interaction -- the kind we never got on the television, which really sucks because the obvious attraction was so there -- moreso than some other pairings that are currently being touted as "the pairing of the show".

Oohhhhh. . . I just snarked, didn't I?

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:49 am Title: Chapter 5

“I really hope that you can find it in yourself t’ tell me the truth in morning ‘cause I can’t really say I appreciate being lied to.”

And boy did he call her on it. I love it when he's put his foot down and won't take anymore of her nonsense. Love the resolve -- she's not going anywhere until he he gets the truth. Oh yeah, that would be him. Totally.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:21 am Title: Chapter 4

See? He just does what's right. She knew going to him would be smart. And he's gonna protect her from everything. Including that evil father of hers.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:15 am Title: Chapter 3

Poor little mite. Got no place else to go, no one else to care. . . poor baby girl. Best person in the world she could ask for help though. . . coz that's what he does. He protects the people he loves.

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 11:10 am Title: Chapter 2

That last bit? With the bus driver? For some bloody reason it made me cry. Real tears. I could see it, the fear and desperation and terror that Buffy was feeling and I'm sure the bus driver picked up on it. Some great writing there.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 09:22 am Title: Chapter 27

brilliant update. hate alistair. looking forward to next update

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 08:50 am Title: Chapter 27

Glad to see an , update and as usual it was great.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 27

Oh I would be leaving to if I had a father like Spikes, I feel sorry for Buffy Hank not allowing her to keep pics of the family.

Loved the spuffy .

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 27

This chapter really had a nice mixture of hotness, romance and drama... loved it! Good update! :D

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter 27

AWWW THAT WAS SOOOO CUTE AND WONDERFUL!! LOVED IT, CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! THANX

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 27

Poor Spike. Now if only he could tell Buffy that he loves her as well. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter 27

*swoons*

Two in one day! I won the lottery! Whooot!

And you are so very worthy. Truly

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2007 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 27

loved it sooo much. great job. more soon.

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