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Reviewer: dreamsofapoet Anonymous
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Date: 11/06/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: one

Date: 11/06/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: one
Good story! This is a great start to your series. You don't have to use them all but here are some words... desire, laughter, lonliness, peace, silence, secret, dirty, rain and ice... ( remember Spike said Buffy liked it on the back of her neck ) Happy writing! :D
Author's Response: THANKYOU SO VERY VERY MUCH! Those words are perfect!
Reviewer: Cas Anonymous
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Date: 11/05/2006 - 11:36 am Title: one

Date: 11/05/2006 - 11:36 am Title: one
Nice Buffy POV.
Author's Response: thankyou for leaving a review! do you have any word I could focus the next peice on? It can be anything.