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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:35 pm Title: A Cause for Hope

Dawn isn't mad at Buffy for not being told because she understands the reasons behind it. For Spike, he has trouble because he can't understand the reason why everybody is so nice to him. But I'm happy that he showed signs of learning. And Dawn wants to teach him? He trusts her the most. (This reminds me on the film with Harrison Ford. He was able to recover but he was he new man after. But he was only human.)
And yay for payback :) That is no way to treat someone even if it is a vamp. That person needs to be punished.
Good chapter again.

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Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: A Cause for Hope

i'm glad dawn understood buffy's reasons... cuz given spike's conditions, it was the right thing to do.
i hope spike will react to buffy soon... i like dawn in this fic but i can't stop picturing her like a whiney brat! but i do understand spike's fears... he can feel buffy's power, and he is afraid of it. and, considering buffy's treatment of him before, he is totally justified to not trust her.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 01:35 pm Title: A Cause for Hope

yes i can't wait for buffy to find out it's that disgudting Riley , bu t please don't let spike get taking by him again , let buffy exact revenge soon.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 10:19 am Title: A Cause for Hope

Great update, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 07:52 am Title: A Cause for Hope

great chapter

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 06:57 am Title: A Cause for Hope

Poor Spike! It will be interesting to see how he reacts if he doesn't remember his feelings for Buffy! Please update soon !

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:38 am Title: A Cause for Hope

I really like your story

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:34 am Title: A Cause for Hope

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!! :D

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Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:30 am Title: A Cause for Hope

I love the story. You do powerful emotions pretty well. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 05:11 am Title: A Cause for Hope

Love it, more please.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 03:17 am Title: A Cause for Hope

another perfect chapter. You have really captured Dawn, Buffy & Anya beautifully in this fic

Reviewer: anon462 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 03:11 am Title: A Cause for Hope

Oh, this was really good. So many little things in this chapter were 'Oh, so good'. I liked where Dawn knew how to heat up the blood just right. That Buffy told her that she was glad that she woke up. That Dawn was able to calm him down and prevent him from a panic. That Anya was ever so practical about not over feeding him. That Dawn realized that Spike wasn't brain dead, that he could learn again. And that Buffy was determined to get revenge for Spike, and for herself!!!

This was a Most Excellent Chapter!!!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 11:06 pm Title: Not Alone

Very nice scene-- all of the women helping the vamp. Looking forward to seeing his regenerative powers after getting some blood in him. I like how you write Buffy struggling with her jealousy of both Dawn and Anya-- very true to reality-- the fight between what one should "logically" feel, and the gut-level pain of what one feels. Very well done! More soon, please!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 10:44 pm Title: Safe at Home

Aww....so very sweet. Love the innocence and pure love that Dawn can have-- probably her truly redeeming qualities. Very nicely done.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 02:14 pm Title: Not Alone

loved it. please post soon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 12:41 pm Title: Not Alone

I love your quick updates :)
Maybe Spike remembers in his subconscious... because he feels save with Dawn. Buffy did break up with him so his memories aren't "pain free".
He felt safe enough to cry.
Yet it isn't easy for Buffy to notice this behavior (that Spike clings more to Dawn, trusts her, than he trusts her).

Reviewer: Ekips Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 11:17 am Title: What He Deserves

A great story. Canīt wait for the next update . I hope Spike will be his old self at the end of the story.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 08:49 am Title: Not Alone

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!! :D

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 03:35 am Title: Not Alone

my heart aches every time I read a chapter of this, but its like a drug, I cant stop!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 12:14 am Title: Not Alone

Great chapter

Reviewer: lv_heath Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Not Alone

Good work so far. Angel could give some vamp advice to help Spike, if you want to include him in the story. I'm hoping Spike doesn't have evidence of rape, but with the amount of torture so far, it's more than likely...

Reviewer: anon462 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Not Alone

Excellent chapter! I really liked that Dawn was able to calm his fears and make him feel safe. I hurt that Buffy was feeling guilty for not thinking about Spikes injured back, especially since he was injured so badly in so many places. I also felt bad for her that she was having thought that Spike had know reason to trust her.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: Not Alone

Awww Spike! I certainly hope Dawn won't be in the room when they need to tend to any wounds below the waist. As comforting as she may be for Spike, I'm not sure he would like know she's seen.. uh.. him.

Good chapter!! :)

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Not Alone

great chapter

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 07:52 pm Title: Not Alone

Thanks for another great chapter. Please, update soon

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