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Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 09:43 am Title: Epilogue: The Sweetest Need

Very nicely done. I like that she saw the claiming initially as penance, and then as a beautiful thing. I'm sad to see this story end! ;)

Reviewer: Yash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 08:00 am Title: Epilogue: The Sweetest Need

Fantastic story! You're an excellent writer and I enjoyed every chapter.

Reviewer: Kim63 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 06:59 am Title: Epilogue: The Sweetest Need

Wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us. Enjoyed reading it very much, but I'm sad to see it come to an end. Great job. Will be looking forward to your next story.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 06:07 am Title: Epilogue: The Sweetest Need

Thank you so much for a great story. I'm sort of sad that it's over - Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 06:05 am Title: Epilogue: The Sweetest Need

Wow. It's finally, finally over. It was a great story. There's just a tiny problem I have with it and most of your other stories (It's not really a big deal and you can ignore this criticism if you like). You tend to overuse the -- symbol a lot. Most of the time, when you use it, it can be replaced by a comma or a period. In dialogue, overuse of the dash makes the speaker sound like their stammering. Maybe that's what you were going for, but it just seemed like they were stammering all the time. That part's not really a big deal, though, but the -- was also used throughout the non-speaking parts and THAT kind of breaks up the flow of the paragraph. As I said, it doesn't really matter and feel free to ignore this,... it was just something I noticed that kind of bothered me. But it was a GREAT story and I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 05:54 am Title: Epilogue: The Sweetest Need

Oh I loved it.

Reviewer: Inarra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 01:22 am Title: Epilogue: The Sweetest Need

What a great ending for this fantastic story... congrats!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: With Feeling

Yay!! More progress! That's good! I'm glad he's getting better. Update soon please!

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: With Feeling

*applause!!!* best ending to a chapter EVER.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 05:47 pm Title: With Feeling

:) That made me smile. Hopefully, they can start healing together now.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: With Feeling

Great chapter

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 02:54 pm Title: With Feeling

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!! :D

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Date: 03/20/2007 - 02:08 pm Title: With Feeling

Sorry hon, that was the wrong review I posted (copied from word) here. The right one is:
Good to see Spike doesn't regret letting Buffy touch him, that their friendship grows stronger. I wonder if Spike really doesn't know that he hurt Buffy's feelings. Like with the non-date. It's time Buffy talked with Spike. She's right, I think he would never feel ready for a very long, long time. Right now it seems as if they have a chance together.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 01:45 pm Title: With Feeling

Making a video? That must indeed have been a sight to see :) And William is getting independend; not only singing, acting ans teaching too. [Dru learning hypnotherapy? *gg* good idea.] I'm happy to see William open up to his children.
Robert Angus asked her out? He doesn't know her well when he doesn't know that she still has feelings for William. I hope Buffy takes the risk and is going to go back to him. :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2007 - 10:12 am Title: With Feeling

lovely. i have really enjoyed this story. and am lookking forward to the rest

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Date: 03/14/2007 - 12:20 pm Title: Let Me

I'm glad Buffy went to look after Spike. And that Buffy convinced Spike to let her be a friend for him.
Now she is fighting his nightmares. I hope only good comes from that.

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 11:30 pm Title: Let Me

This is the Spike that im really not familiar at all. He is so weak and pathetic. Not like the strong and reliable one that i knew and loved in the original story.

Your story is very emotional and well written. However it is too dragging and sad for my taste. Cant you make it more lively?

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: Let Me

This was a really great chapter. It really resolved any questions about Spike's motivations with the rules-- in fact, questions about everything that he's gone through. It's all working in really well together, and it's great that Spike's finally letting Buffy love him-- instead of shutting her out (although she now knows what he went through all the sixth season-- very good way of making her learn that, yeah?). Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: Let Me

Great chapter

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 09:14 pm Title: Let Me

I'm so glad that Spike unconsciously called out to her, so that Buffy had some sort of sign about the right thing to do for his nightmares. And good for her, with her anger and her frustration and tears, telling him she can be there for him, but urging him to allow her to help. Well done chapter!! My heart is still breaking for the both of them.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 08:18 pm Title: Let Me

I hope he continues letting her hold him. Update soon please!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:32 pm Title: Let Me

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:17 pm Title: Let Me

WOW, they both needed that ,the comfort from each other and i think we readers needed it too. Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 03:04 pm Title: Let Me

I am so glad that he let her hold him.

Reviewer: Inara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: Let Me

Lump in throat again... tears arghhhhh!!! Update soon!!!

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