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Reviewer: spikekakawilliam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 09:02 pm Title: Reaction

Thusx chapter is messed up. you repeated you self and it confuses people.

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 06:17 pm Title: Reaction

Please, update soon!! We need to read what happens next!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:47 pm Title: Reaction

Great chapter!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 04:39 pm Title: Reaction

oh i knew this grand plan of buffy's would go to shit!!! lol. sorry. just had to get that out there. i just hope she admits later that she was wrong and grovels for spike and dawn's forgiveness when this is all over. cuz locking spike in a room with a crazed xander was not exactly smart. loved it lots and lots. xander so needs to have his ass kicked.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 04:23 pm Title: Reaction

Uh no...why did Buffy continue? She was too selfish. She should have just took Spike's word. I can't believe her! That was a stupid thing to do. Why need further proof? Update soon please!

Reviewer: Abbyland Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: Reaction

Yeah, Buffy pretty much earned herself the "moron of the year" award when she devised this brilliant plan. Her overconfidence in her slayer abilities blinded her to the fact that her enemy, Xander in this case, knew her better than she knew herself. And clearly she didn't really want to believe it was Xander otherwise she would never have underestimated him. Stupid girl. Her arrogance has left her beloved Spike in the hands of a psychotic freak. Did she even consider that? Perhaps not, it was only Spike after all.

I sincerely hope that after Xander meets a slow and painful demise that Angel takes Spike wih him to LA so he can truly be protected and allowed to regain his strength and confidence because that fact that Buffy still doubted Spike after he told her of Xander's treatment of him has got to put a huge strain on their relationship. Buffy is going to have to start from scratch to earn Spike's confidence. Let her make the journey to LA and grovel for a while. Spike's done it long enough. It's truly a travesty.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 01:29 pm Title: Reaction

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: scelto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:27 pm Title: Reaction

so i thought it was weird how this chapter repeated itself.... but other than the accidental cutnpaste, i liked it. it gives them more of a reason to give xander what he deserves

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 09:46 am Title: Reaction

The chapter is put in twice, fyi. I was all... "NO!" because I thought it was extra-long. ;) Oh goddess, how are they going to get out of this one? I mean, Xander isn't going to get away with it IF he actually DOES it, but how is Spike going to survive???? Update soon!

Reviewer: Blazing Fire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 06:53 am Title: Reaction

Pretty good, but I think you might have repeated your chapter there.

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:40 am Title: Reaction

OK, ending the chapter here is evil! I truly hope the chip doesn't function anymore and that Spike will drain him...

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:35 am Title: Reaction

OH I hope they managed to get in or Spike manages to do something to Xander.
More please.

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 05:16 am Title: Reaction

Oh no, Buffy better get in there quick.

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 02:59 am Title: Reaction

Great chapter to load the tension - but it looks as though you have pasted some in twice babes.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 02:56 am Title: Reaction

Yikes! This is not looking good.

Also, it looks like you did a double copy & paste on this chapter.... The whole chapter repeats itself. Hehe. =)

Reviewer: squawks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 02:49 am Title: Reaction

MORE PLEASE!!!!! i cant wait!!!! great story

Reviewer: MOa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 02:20 am Title: Reaction

Moooahhhhh i want to read the next chapter please!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 07:40 pm Title: Alone

Although she was trying to protect Spike, Dawn is starting to get on my nerves! Great chapter!

Reviewer: Keely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: Alone

For the Love of God!!! Finish the story!! You are killing me here!! What a great idea for a story...very original, and you write so well! I was totally caught up in it... and now with this supense! Oh I can't take it! Finish finish please! If you want to write back to me my address is mrs_spike19@hotmail.com. Thanks for writing it!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:49 am Title: Alone

Dawn is overprotective of Spike; but he is influenced by what Buffy wants. Good though that Dawn has a solution if Spike changes his mind later.
Oh my and he did but Xander forced him again. *.... *waiting ...* Now how long will it take Buffy? Hopefully not too long.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:47 am Title: In Motion

Uh-huh... Spike isn't so ready to go on with the plan like Buffy hoped. Yet he'll do it: for her.
And now it starts...

Reviewer: infinite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 07:56 pm Title: Alone

where's buffy?! oh god i'm so nervous for spike right now. you're phenomonal you know.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 07:45 pm Title: Alone

You do an amazing job conveying the sense of panic and dread that Spike feels. Excellent job!

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: Alone

This plan was monumentally stupid. I just hope Spike gets the chance to hit Xander a couple of times...

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 02:30 pm Title: Alone

Oh no...will Buffy get there in time? I hope so. Please let her get there in time. Shouldn't Angel have been able to hear all that? Super hearing and all? Update soon please!

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