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Reviewer: nicky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 09:07 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Thanks for updateing, been waiting ages, update again soon, love the story.
nicky

Reviewer: minkholly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 08:52 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

I love stories like this. this time in history is my all time fav. i love reading anything to do with the old west and the cilvil war. keep up this awesome work. you have a gift. if at anytime you need something or just a question about this time i'll be happy to help but i dont think you'll be needing it LOL your good.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 08:05 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Nobody (neither Buffy nor William) talked about what had happened... at some point they have to.
Unexpected.... new twist. Elizabeth gets bossy; looking forward how she'll handle the new situation.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 06:39 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

ooo interesting:) cant wait to read more

Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Great that you have updated. Brilliant action sequence and now they will have to work together as equals to save the men. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 12:28 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

YAY IM SO HAPPY THAT U UPDATED!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. its so sad that she left him, and that he wants her but cant have her, and that hes hurt she ran away. i really hope that they get the troops and make it out ok. also i hope that she learns to forgive him and that they end up together and happy. PLEASE update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. tahnx

Reviewer: albie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2007 - 12:15 am Title: Hell Breaks Loose

I devour every new chapter when it's posted. Beautifully written, great characterization, always looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 11:36 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/20/2007 - 11:05 pm Title: Hell Breaks Loose

Been missing this story SOOOOOOO much !!!!!!! Loved this update!!!!

Great chapter of building their individual characters as well as their chemistry together. I can vividly picture the time period and the environment. Love your style and story. Bring it on.

Reviewer: rogue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Reckless

now that was great it had me in tears please let
there be more i loved it

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2007 - 02:04 pm Title: Reckless

I love this story and that was a great update.

Reviewer: smclspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/05/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Reckless

OH that was good, I just read all your chapters. Now I am ready for more.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 - 06:56 pm Title: Reckless

well they finally did it. Only a respite from the tension. I can imagine more stress for them from other quarters.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2007 - 02:36 am Title: Reckless

great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: Reckless

GOD WHY CANT ANYTHING WORK OUT WELL BETWEEN THEM!!!!!! i was happy when they got together but then it ended so baddly and now everything is to hell again. i love this story and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that they get closer and eventually get together. also i hope that buffy forgives spike for wat happened and that she sees wat kind of man he truely is. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 08:33 pm Title: Reckless

Wow, that was intense!!!

So glad to see this story again. I was just thinking about it the other day and revisited it to see if I perhaps has missed an update. Lo and behold, days later ... This is a great tale that you are weaving. Hoping that your muse is feeling really well and very creative!

Thank you for two awesome chapters!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 06:22 pm Title: Reckless

Unexpected turn; in a way it was Spike's fault that Buffy continued to run; he haunted her.
Loved the spuffyness; looking forward what will happen next.

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 04:27 pm Title: Reckless

Hurrah! Spuffy!!! More angst to endure but I see a small light at the end of the tunnel. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 02:37 pm Title: A Changing Wind

I was wondering when everything would catch up with Buffy. At least she gave that young soldier a new outlook on life...

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 02:36 pm Title: Reckless

hoo boy. The ramifications of this should be pretty spectacular. Great update.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2007 - 02:11 pm Title: Reckless

brilliantly written, loved the way they parted. looking forward to more

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 05:32 pm Title: A Changing Wind

Oh, I hope you''ll have another chapter for us soon. I was so happy to see this one after such a time. Can't wait for interaction and have no idea what is in store for them now that Burbank is in desperation mode.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 12:42 pm Title: A Changing Wind

Bad news.. Burbank thinking of using of Buffy as a weapon. Can get dangerous for Elizabeth to run into the woods. Looking forward to more; it was good to see the update.

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 10:38 am Title: A Changing Wind

Brilliant original story! Looking for some spuffy next.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2007 - 04:06 am Title: A Changing Wind

so glad to see an update. Hopefully more soon?

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