

Date: 12/14/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: The Deal
good update

Date: 12/14/2006 - 02:04 pm Title: The Deal
I can't wait to see where this leads. I had a huge smile on my face while reading - although I would agree about the beta - but I think this is great and it has huge potential. Keep going please.

Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:46 am Title: Dumped
loved it! please post the next chapter soon can't wait:0)

Date: 12/10/2006 - 08:30 am Title: Dumped
Ohhhh that sounds like fun. Definitely like it, so you can start writing the rest of the chapters. ;-)
No really, I would like to read more. :)

Date: 12/10/2006 - 08:03 am Title: Dumped
Angel's broken! Lol! I love the start! More please!

Date: 12/10/2006 - 08:03 am Title: Dumped
Angel's broken! Lol! I love the start! More please!

Date: 12/09/2006 - 08:27 pm Title: Dumped
Can't wait to read more!

Date: 12/09/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: Dumped
Great start. Yes, please continue to write this story.

Date: 12/09/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: Dumped
Right back at you, honey - Ouch. You have me interested in more.

Date: 12/09/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: Dumped
good so far

Date: 12/09/2006 - 12:00 pm Title: Dumped
Excellent start to a story! Please continue!!!

Date: 12/09/2006 - 07:56 am Title: Dumped
Great start; I'm certainly looking forward to more.
One thing I did notice however: unlike your other story, For You I Will (which I adore!) there seems to be a number of gramatical errors throughout this. Perhaps a beta could help?
I sincerely hope you don't mind my comment; you're stories are such an enjoyable read and I wouldn't want that to be impeded by mistakes such as these.
Can't wait to read of Spike's reaction!

Date: 12/09/2006 - 06:56 am Title: Dumped
Great idea for a fic - am absolutely lovin it! So Spike knows how to please a woman...i just bet he does (down girl!) Please update soon. I would also definately agree with you getting a beta - this story is amazing but the grammar and sentence structure needs a little polishing. All in all a great start and I will be religiously watching out for updates! Go girl!

Date: 12/09/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Dumped
he he....oh yeah. this is gonna be VERY interesting.

Date: 12/09/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Dumped
Great beginning! Hope it won't take long for more chapters...Please, please, please start writing.

Date: 12/09/2006 - 01:24 am Title: Dumped
oooh, great lead up, can't wait to read the rest :)

Date: 12/09/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Dumped
*gigglesnort* Oh the face on Spike's face when Buffy blurt out the last sentence must be priceless! Thumbs up for such a great start, I'm loving it already. I only have a teensy small complain. You need to get a beta to clean up some things for you - it's understandable when you're inspired and you type and you type so fast you don't look back, but when I read it the lack of punctuation and some mistakes jumps out and disturbs the flow of the read. I hope you'll take my suggestion and find a beta, they can be your wonderful friend and sounding board too.
That said, I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work!

Date: 12/09/2006 - 12:37 am Title: Dumped
And then Spike keels over in a dead faint, lol

Date: 12/08/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Dumped
Cute please write more!

Date: 12/08/2006 - 10:46 pm Title: Dumped
sounds like its going to be a good one! i would watch your words though, i could pick a few sentences that i could tell were missing a couple words, no biggie though. keep updates comin! =)

Date: 12/08/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Dumped
OH MY GOD! You cannot just leave us all hanging like that! It will lead us all to speculation... has Buffy's best friend Spike been carrying a torch all these years as cause for his changing girlfriends as much as he changes his socks? Who will Angel move onto and just how hard is Spike going to kick his arse? bugger, Can't wait for your next chapter!!! So update soooooooon!

Date: 12/08/2006 - 07:29 pm Title: Dumped
Ooh, love it!!! Buffy is seriously deluded with all that soul mate stuff, but of course, that's what we have Spike for...excellent premise, can't wait to read more!!!

Date: 12/08/2006 - 06:07 pm Title: Dumped
I'll carry on reading. Would I be right in assuming Spike changes girlfriends regularly because they are not Buffy? and I can't wait for him to give in after he protests. Please update.

Date: 12/08/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: Dumped
Yeah, I like it! Keep going, it's great!