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Reviewer: jules Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 12:32 pm Title: The Backyard

This could have very well happened in the six season. It was like it was taken out of the season. Though it ending very abruptly. I think maybe rework the ending. Other than that, very good story!

Reviewer: Manda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2006 - 07:19 pm Title: The Backyard

Nice idea. Do you have a beta? Cause if not I think you should get one. Also the ending is a bit abrupt... is there meant to be more chapters, cause if it is just a one shot it could probably do with a less abrupt ending. And try to vary how you start your sentences (you have too many starting with he or she). Nice ficlet for a first try, tho. Get a beta and keep writing, you will only improve.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2006 - 08:48 am Title: The Backyard

The story is a nice little one-shot. It definitely fits in well with canon. My main advice to you is to find a beta because there are some grammatical issues that are a little distracting.

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2006 - 07:57 am Title: The Backyard

not bad...nice little fic that was short and to the point...

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: The Backyard

great story, very hot

Reviewer: TestaALT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 05:54 pm Title: The Backyard

I liked this; I thought it was an accurate representation of season six sexcapades. I nice little story to add to the gaps of Buffy/Spike's relationship on the show. It doesn't try to force love or close feelings onto the reader; it doesn't try to make everything better like we wanted. It's something that I believe could have really happened. Good work. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. thats what I was going for. I hate it when non-fantasy fics go to out of character/ You made my day.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: The Backyard

good story

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: The Backyard

Oh yeah, you should write more.

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: The Backyard

Loved it. But is it only meant to be one chapter or longer?

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: It's a one-shot. Just seeing what people think so I kow weither to take a shot at a real story.

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