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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 05:49 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

More please, Wonder what will happen will Spike try to rescue one of them if he does who, Cordelia or his buddy Faith, Are Faith and Spike getting together. More please.

Author's Response: Nah... definitely not Spike/Faith; strictly Spuffy. I don't really think Faith's in need of saving right about now. ^_^ Thanks for commentin'!

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 03:34 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

Hmm.. I don't suppose Buffy's got a semi-automatic in her pocket or something?

Author's Response: Nah, sadly she didn't bring hers today. :( She does have a noose, though. A pretty noose.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2007 - 12:21 am Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

more please

Author's Response: More soon. :)

Reviewer: blax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 10:26 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

ah dammit, are you trying to kill me?
you can't just STOP after "Faith had a gun."
That is so not okay ;P


Author's Response: "You're killing me Smalls!" Sorry, little Sandlots there. Can you believe that at first I only pinned the party for one chapter? It was one big, ginormous ride that never ended and climaxed several times... didn't work very well. This way, we have the suspense and the killing of readers and the total lack of Spuffiness that becomes Spuffiness that really shouldn't be Spuffiness, but then you're thinking "Hey, that's Spuffiness!" and wondering what it means for the Spuffiness because, well, who doesn't want Spuffiness? Ramblin' on. Thanks for commentin'! :D

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 09:43 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

omg!!! (must know what happens next)

Author's Response: *grins* Soon... next chapter needs some revision still. Thanks for reviewing! ;D

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 09:33 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

oooh you just keep bringing out the big guns...he he literally this time. Still loving this fic, so glad you're updating regularly. Can't wait to see the next installment!

Author's Response: Hahaha... wait until you see how the night is capped off. ^_^ Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

This story is really maturing nicely! Can't wait for more!!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! =D

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 08:52 pm Title: Smells Like Teen Spirit

If buffy get shot then she should just die cause her life just couldn't get any worse haha just messin buffy cant die because this is spuffy not sp.

Author's Response: :D Definitely not gonna kill her. If I killed Buffy, it'd probably be suicide more than anything. Just being shot on the whim by crazy Faith... not symbolic enough, sadly. :(

Reviewer: amandamanda3 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 03:15 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

So my friend sent me the link to this story yesterday :) I'm so happy she did!!!!! I love it :) I can't wait for you to update.

Author's Response: One yay to your friend and one yay to you. :D You read all the chapters since yesterday? If so, I'm beyond flattered. ^_^

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 11:20 am Title: Whole Lotta Love

..that.. that.. oh, that's so, so, so sad.

Maybe Buffy will attempt suicide?

I know, I know, morbid suggestion.

Author's Response: I was going for sad, so thanks! ;D And I'm not gonna comment on the suicide thing as I might reveal too much future plot. >_> Am I kidding or am I not kidding, that is the question. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 12:54 am Title: Whole Lotta Love

you are truly evil...is it terrible that i wanna hug you? :) awesome story...can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: :D :D :D I'll take a hug. Spike might need one more right about now, though. Or maybe he could have used one all those years he was William? I don't know. It's confuzzling. Thanks for commenting, and yeah, more soon! :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:44 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

Damn. (That's all I've got.)

Author's Response: *grins* I'll take that as a compliment! :D

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:32 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

Good GOD! I think you're having FAR too much fun with this. Evil authors and their evil writing. *sigh*

And yet! Here I am, drinking it all in, desperate.. er.. not desperate, just wanting, yeah, wanting more.

And how the hell ARE you gonna fix all this? Cause... I know you will, but I can't think of how. I guess that's why you're the author of this story huh? That'd make sense.

And sheesh! I just realized I'm not feeling horrible bad for BUFFY! You are good. It just snuck up on me. First I was al GO Spike!! Now I'm all... awwwww, Buffy! When did that happen? Sneaky devil.

Screw the damn homework, give me my update!! =D

Author's Response: Hahaha, funnest chapter I've written, actually. I had a blast writing the "moment" before Spike's blowout. It was really fun, especially paradoxing "needless hope" with the scenery, which just came to me like a vision. As for fixing it... it's a sssssecret. But I've known where I've wanted to go with this since the beginning... at least the part where things go bad (if you thought it was black now...), then fall apart, and finally stop breathing. Then it gets put on life support, bleeds and heals a little, but is inevitably seared again. Yay for vagueness! So I guess you could say I'm nowhere finished telling my story. We haven't even gotten to the smut or breaking stereotypes or making flat characters (Cordy, Riley, Davis, etc.) dynamic or fixing Buffy's life. First of many epiphanies from Spike, too. And yay for feeling sympathy for Buffy. I'm diggin her out of the hole I put her in, trying to make her an appealing heroine. And the homework... *cries* the homework must be done. *weeps in corner*

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 05:41 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

oh that was a beautiful chapter . Spike is being realy evil to Buffy, she shouldn't take that crap fron him. Just a suggestion, liked everything you wrote so far so just ignore the suggestion and keep up the good work.
i would also like to say how wonderful it is thatyou update regularly because i realy look forward to your updates.

Sorry if that did not make sense

Author's Response: It made sense. :D I get it, you wanna see where this is going, not necessarily where you want it to go or where I (really) want it to go, but where the story goes. There WILL be a point where Buffy won't take crap from him, where she'll stand up for herself, so you can look forward to that. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

yes I enjoyed that but I think Spike is really mixed up & doesn't know who he is, trying to be the Big Bad but remnants of his old life are still there, but he is trying to repress

Author's Response: Spike's overly confused, that's for sure. We must have hope in the Spuffy by believing that. I don't think he was trying to be the "Big Bad" in this case; he was just trying to protect himself. He doesn't want to need Buffy, and he thinks his emotions went haywire. But he will learn, only maybe a little too late... thanks for reviewing! =]

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 04:21 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

That was some extremely beautiful writing. Thank you.

Author's Response: Oh no, thank you! People don't normally compliment my writing, and I cherish the reviews that do even more than the ones that don't. Which is quite amazing, considering I cherish all reviews like I cherish... uh... reviews? Haha. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 04:20 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

Poor Buffy! She doesn't deserve half the crap Spike is putting her through no matter what she did to him in the past! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm sure most of us can agree with that, at least on some level. But can Spike? Can he see passed the looking glass? And si, mi amiga, mas es otw. w00t! I got a coherent sentence out in Spanish! Used acronyms, but oh well. Thanks for commenting! =)

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:23 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

OOOOOOO, you are evil!!!! Hee, but I love it. You know, I don't know what the HELL Buffy is crying for, she is the one that tormented him for so long and she seriously expected a profession of love??? Gurrrrrrl pleeeeze! I do love a little Buffy bashing when she deserves it. Bring Faith in, and on with the Buffy bashing!!!! Please update Friday! To hell with your homework! Just kidding! But I do hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Just one tear; she was caught in the moment. And it isn't so much of Spike as it is the idea of Spike. I believe I touched up on that with: "Attending college, having a decent home, a life expiration date that leaped past graduation. A good job. A family. A person who cared for her. A person who loved her. Did he? Did Spike love her?" Faith en route. Thanks for commenting! :D

Reviewer: lyla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:09 pm Title: The Things That Should Not Be

nice update... looking forward to the party

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:32 pm Title: Whole Lotta Love

aww poor buffy....although she did put spike through hell. good chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, she kinda did. And he's kinda doing the same thing. :( Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:56 am Title: Whole Lotta Love

Ugh!!! Did he really have to do that. suc a prick!!! I look forward to reading the next chap on Fri.

Author's Response: He kind of is. :( And yes, Friday is a lock now. Thank you for reviewing! =D

Reviewer: Jenna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:29 am Title: Whole Lotta Love

Oh I love this story! Spike is SUCH a PRICK! LOL I love it! Please continue soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support! And yes, prick is definitely a shade of Spike right about now. Past or not, he's a big meanie. :(

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 07:21 am Title: Whole Lotta Love

Love it, but it was sad, I was waiting for Buffy to get up and leave.
Wonder what happened downstairs.
Will Spike and her actually get together.
Since I'm from Canada and we learn French your Spanish is just fine to me.
More please.

Author's Response: Yeah, I was thinking about Buffy getting up and just leaving Spike alone on the roof. But that would have been too symbolic, it would have suggested that she was her own person and didn't need/want Spike. And, for this scene anyway, Buffy is totally dependent and interested in Spike. Thanks for commenting! And no, my Spanish sucks. Teacher said muy muy mal. :(

Reviewer: blax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:27 am Title: Whole Lotta Love

arrgh! stupid spike.
my heart is almost bleeding after reading this, and even if i am in serious need of some fluff right now it was beautifully written. nicely done.


Author's Response: Thanks, tells me I'm doing my job and making this as... well, bad as possible. When the fluff comes, it won't be cotton candy, but very, very filling. And all the worth it. ;)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 02:11 am Title: Whole Lotta Love

wow totally didnt expect spike to say that

Author's Response: Unexpected and sad; it actually looked like they could be together for a little while. :(

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