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Reviewer: Hana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

KEEP UP THE STORY IT'S REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thaaaanks! =D

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 11:21 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

Can't wait to read more! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:46 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

I love this story! Please keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

A pep rally, who cares? I double if anyone would notice them not there. What they are up is much more important to this story, than reading about no neck jocks.

I think everyone is trying to catch up on stories due to Christmas events not letting people read. This is a very good story.

Author's Response: Yeah... just trying to use "suck" as many times as I could there. ;)

Reviewer: Chari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:41 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

Oh yea! Closet luvin!

Author's Response: Closets are just the beginning.

Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:41 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

Loving the Spuffy! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! This story needed physical Spuffy.

Reviewer: Bren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

More Please soon!

Author's Response: More came. And more from that soon.

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:40 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

Sexy and Smart!! Thata my Spike!Please update soon!

Author's Response: Heh heh heh... Spike's character to a tee.

Reviewer: Mollie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

Great update! Don't sweat the lack of reviews it's the holidays! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm starting to realize that. ^_^ Thanks!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

Spike teaching the class like that was freaking awesome! His line about the how the poem just IS, GOD!! I felt that way all through high school. I still remember how people wold pick apart and try and figure out why Frost repeated the last line in Stopping by Woods on a Snowing Evening. Then he finally told people that he simply thought it sounded good. HA! That's priceless that is.

And oh yeah, HOT scene in that there closet. ;)

Looking forward to more. =)

Author's Response: My favorrrrrrrrite reviewer! =D Borrowed heavily from personal experiences in high school, where my teachers would always ask "what is the meaning of this poem?" and I'd just laugh. It's such an open-ended question; it's different for every person and every mood. Poetry, especially multi-layered deep stuff, can have so many meaning and people can interpret it in so many ways. That's what I was trying to convey, anyway. That and the worthlessness of high school. ;)

Reviewer: Nika Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

This was a really good chapter. Spike was brillant in teaching that class. He's right, live life how you want to.

Author's Response: Definitely cliche, but I felt it related to Buffy's situation. Maybe even his own.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

That was really cool for Spike. Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks. Cool Spike is what I'm going for in the school front.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:12 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!! :D

Author's Response: ty

Reviewer: candace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2006 - 09:12 pm Title: The Road Less Traveled

loved it. please keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

Buffy's homelife is really messed up! Spike's confused if Buffy's background should change his confusing feelings for her! Heck I think I'm kind of confused about them also! Can't wait to read more! Loved it!

Author's Response: Hehehe... everything's confusing, which is why things are about to get worse. :(

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 12:22 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

good update

Author's Response: ty

Reviewer: janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 12:14 pm Title: Tutoring Part 2

aww
i like it tho =)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: sba Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 02:18 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

It's good, but get the ball rolling...get to the point...any point.

Author's Response: I don't really know what you mean. :( The point is that everything is really, really fucked up, and it will take time before we get to the Spuffy loving. It's impossible to make a quick fix with this story; I even tried to give Buffy a terrible life, but I still feel even that is not enough for Spike to disregard the past. There's gonna be some angst and some separation... the night was really just a prelude to how intricate everything is.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 01:58 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

After about three tries, I finally found my pulse. Phew!

Hi.

I'm glad Spike is pushing her not to give up on her life. I'm also glad he's not just saying to hell with everything she's done to him and making with the wild hot monkey sex. There's too much they need to sort through before that (sadly) can happen. As sad as her past is, it's not an excuse to torture William the way she did.

And she better not do anything to mess up Spike's painting plans!!

Really good chapter, looking forward to more. =)

Oh, and Merry Christmas, Hanukkah, Kwanzaa, Saturnalia, etc, to you too. ;)

Author's Response: Haha. :) Yeah, if things weren't cut and dry, black and white before, they sure as hell aren't now. Before I had the whole love to hate her thing going, and I still have that angle (thankfully; I can fully relate to that). But now I have introduced a boatload of plot points and it's hard even for Spike, who was steadfast at screwing over Buffy, to actually do it. Thanks for reviewing! ;)

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 01:45 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

Her life really sucks...that's so sad. Will Spike be able to get over the past or will Buffy just waste away? Happy holidays!

Author's Response: That's one dilemma. Happy holidays to you, too, even though I think they all passed as the time of my writing this.

Reviewer: Li Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2006 - 01:31 am Title: Tutoring Part 2

Haha you took the words right out of my mouth- confusing! BUt in a good, plot-building, driving crazy wiht anticipation way! Lol, great couple of chapter, I really like how it's playing out between them and how it seems that it's not just going to be a quick and easy solution. The work out scene was written very well, though I felt a few elements were over emphasized. I must say I learnt a few things though lol. I'm really interested to see what you come up with next,t his story is a great read!

Author's Response: Thank you! Comments like these make my day, even if it is Christmas and I get presents. :) Quick and easy isn't on the foreseeable horizon; it's gonna get bad and angsty before it gets better. The exposition puts everything in a bind. As for the workout scene, I really just wanted to set up everything in class so I didn't have to be detailed when I wrote about it in the future. I always use my rage in workouts, so I figure why not have Spike do it? He probably has a lot of stuff to brood about. ;)

Reviewer: candace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 02:06 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Tutoring Part 1

I completely agree with just another reviewer. People are going to start feeling so sorry for Buffy about her life that people are just going to forget about what Buffy did to Spike.

Anyways, keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Not going this way. It might seem like I am, and the tutoring chapters DID kind of focus on the bad that is Buffy's life. But I'm mostly setting up for later here, not for the now. The now is plagued by the past.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

And the plot thickens! Love the chapter update, more please!

Author's Response: Ha! Indeed it does. Thank you.

Reviewer: just another reviewer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/23/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Tutoring Part 1

hey! just saying i love your story, and I love the whole new spike thing. just a word of caution, dont make buffy all of a sudden start being all good, or something, or make her horrible life too horribel, so its unbelieveable. also, dont let spike just throw away everything buffy did to him, because no matter what her lifes like, i doesn't make up for that, and i know alot of people would be bothered if he just passed it all off. Ill keep reading! love it !

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting; it was very insightful. I would like to hear what others have to think about this, too. Definitely not gonna just forget about the past. It might be temporarily shunned so we can have some Spuffy (lust Spuffy and not love Spuffy), but it will probably be a burden on their relationship until this fic ends. By the end, I hope their joking about it. Lots of angst from it, though, might even be a summer-ender. But now... yeah, definitely not gonna let Spike forget. He might show sympathy for her, he might date her, but he will never forget, and it will be the looming grim reaper on their relationship. As for the horrible life... that's where I'm going, I know it's cliche, but it's the only thing I could feasibly think of. I don't plan on having Buffy be "good" at first, in fact I think her mask at school is quite an endearing plot point. But she will, eventually, take the mask off, after the appropriately powerful events have taken place. Thanks again for the review.

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