

Date: 12/23/2006 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Two
great chapter

Date: 12/23/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter Two
I'm getting really exciting. I can imagine the music (if there was music) for this, right now it would be the slow, tense build up... and ok, I'm weird... but I'm just excited for this story. Good chapter! =)

Date: 12/23/2006 - 09:08 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh cant wait to read more!

Date: 12/22/2006 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Two
I was excited to find another story from you. It looks very promising so far. And the prophecy is perfect, so beautiful too. Looking forward to more of it.

Date: 12/22/2006 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Two
good update

Date: 12/22/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter One
good update

Date: 12/21/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter One
Well, this is freakin' promising! :-) What a great start, can'r wait to read more.

Date: 12/21/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter One
Sounds great so far, looking forward to see where you go with this. =)

Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter One
Great story, I just finished watching Becomming Part 2 so this is a great alternative after story.

Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter One
Good so far, Please update soon!

Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter One
Interesting start!

Date: 12/21/2006 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter One
this sounds good, more please.