

Date: 01/03/2007 - 04:21 am Title: Words to My Soul
Fabulous as always. Buffy's progress was good. This is just itching for a sequal.
Immortal alibi could have been better, but by all means there was nothing bad about it.
As always, great work.

Date: 12/27/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Words to My Soul
Ohhh, that was so good! I loved seeing Buffy's journal entries. And the fact that her "relationship" with the Immortal was fake. Ha! And Spike... aw.
I've love to see a follow-up to this story. :)

Date: 12/27/2006 - 10:57 am Title: Words to My Soul
I think that Buffy would probably say things like that. She thinks Spike is dead so it is easier for her to say how she feels. I'm not saying that those words are not true but she always had a hard time with her feelings when it came to Spike.
BTW - Buffy did treat Spike like dirt and her own punching bag. All Spike was trying to do with be there and love her the best way he knew how. There were times when Spike got a little confused. Like saying to Buffy that she belongs in the dark with him. But the way Buffy was acting then she sure did belong there in the dark more than Spike.
Sorry, for going on and on. Keep up the good work. Sequal please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the support! Glad you liked it

Date: 12/27/2006 - 10:12 am Title: Words to My Soul
As for the small minded souls who have nothing better to do than flame people? You don't have to read these fics and as I was always told, if you can't say anything nice, dont say anything at all.
Now I've said my bit, on with the review. I enjoyed this the first time I read it and I've read it several times since and I still really love it. Who cares if it's not canon Spuffy? I don't it was great,'sides thats what fiction is all abour isnt it? creating scenarios that never happened on the series! Now about a sequel......
I have hot chocolate with those little marshmallows *winks*
Author's Response: thanks sweety :D

Date: 12/27/2006 - 09:36 am Title: Words to My Soul
Great story, I really enjoyed it! :D

Date: 12/27/2006 - 08:57 am Title: Words to My Soul
How small minded of Angel to keep the diary and not giving it to Spike; he, Spike, can be lucky that Angel did change his mind.
Good that the journal came to the right person at last :)
And because it ended here: Sequel? :)

Date: 12/27/2006 - 12:34 am Title: Words to My Soul
very well done. more please

Date: 12/26/2006 - 10:54 pm Title: Words to My Soul
That was really well done. Very emotional. I think it really needs a follow up though. Please?

Date: 12/26/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Words to My Soul
Hey Ari, how about you keep your opinions to yourself since no one really gives a crap what you think?

Date: 12/26/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: Words to My Soul
Jeez, Ari, campaigning for bitch of the year, are you? Take your negativity elsewhere, no one wants that. Anyway, this was a good fiction. I would love to see them meet up, but I think it was a good place to end it. Nice work=)

Date: 12/26/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Words to My Soul
This is so good but its almost like there should be another chapter, you left us hanging; but I still enjoyed it

Date: 12/26/2006 - 08:00 pm Title: Words to My Soul
Loved it !!

Date: 12/26/2006 - 07:19 pm Title: Words to My Soul
hmm, this was good, but i admit the journal entries were a bit strange. it didn't sound that much like buffy most of the time, but i hope you would think about continuing this. it's a good oneshot, but it would be cool to see their reunion.
Author's Response: It's hard to write fluffy journal entries post/chosen about Spike and keep true to canon Buffy. I wasn't really expecting it to stay true, although we never really know what she may have been like after the show. Imagination at work, I guess.

Date: 12/26/2006 - 06:52 pm Title: Words to My Soul
"when I treated you like dirt when you were alive."
Kill me now, please Buffy wouldn't think that because she knows he wasn't a total innocent either and sometimes deserved the "dirt" treatment (You are what you act like) Oh honestly, botias sums it up perfectly here: http://botias.livejournal.com/81803.html#cutid1
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion, but just a reminder, this is fiction. I don't pretend that my version of Buffy is the same as the show, and I'm not trying to duplicate the show. Neither you or me have any realistic idea how it would have actually gone had they met during season 5. I'm sorry if you didn't like it, but there is no reason to be rude,