[Report This]Date: 01/02/2007 - 10:44 am Title: Chapter 4
ouhh liked it, especially the erotic dance :)) haha I really can't wait for Buffy to start this new 'job'... excellent chapter, thanks for the update ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed, and hopefully more will come soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/02/2007 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter 4
I loved the scene on the dance floor, Spike was so wonderfully mysterious... great song choice by the way. Can't wait to find out what happens when Buffy and William are officially introduced to each other. Great chapter!
Happy New Year!!! :D
Author's Response: Happy New Year to you too, and thanks for the review! :) I'm glad you liked the song, I was worried about it fitting... :)
[Report This]Date: 01/02/2007 - 09:17 am Title: Chapter 4
Well, nice intro...but wouldn't most girls taken a peak ? I know.. cliff hanger. Update soon.
Author's Response: Haha, she was caught up in the moment! She tried to take a peek at the end, but he was gone. Alas... Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
well, that's definitely good...poor Buffy, her father was really cruel...can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Yup, I took that from the episode "Nightmares." It was her worst fear, you know? Thanks for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2007 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
ooh, yay, she broke up with Riley! and now on to the audition...love this!
Author's Response: Haha, I said "yay" when she dumped Riley, too. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2007 - 08:33 am Title: Chapter 3
Man, he just had to step out for a phone call. You're killin' me. And I don't like that shiver that Liam gives Buffy. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Haha, I hope it's a pleasant torture. :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
good update
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
I liked it and can't wait for the next chapter .
Author's Response: It'll hopefully be out soon. :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, wow. This story is so good, and I can't wait til the meeting of Buffy and Spike, that should be interesting! More please!
Author's Response: Working on their meeting right now. :) More will be out soon; thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm guessing that Liam isn't the only one who will be wanting Buffy Summers :)
Author's Response: Haha, well-put. :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh still the old year :) I didn't think you would post again before the new year. So I was a bit early wishing a new year but it still stands :)
Oh, Willow is totally supporting her decisions (regarding Riley and the job) but look there, Tara did a similar thing before. So Buffy shouldn't worry (at last if it's done tasteful but the trusts William Pratt with his work.
But Buffy has a bad feeling about Angelus. Will he be around for the painting anyway? But that he was a business associates from her father when Buffy doesn't like him any longer / what he does, that's not a good sign either. She must be careful.
And it seems as if Buffy has the job now. Looking forward to the meeting!
As for songs? I don't know. But I think about it.
Author's Response: Awww, it was still nice. :) I didn't expect to update, either, but I couldn't resist. Angelus is definitely going to be a problem-- he just gets that way, doesn't he? Thanks for the review, and Happy New Year (again)!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Angelus knows Hank - the snake! And you didn't even let her (us) meet William! Such a fun story - don't know just how its gonna go with Angelus in the mix.
Author's Response: Yes, Angelus has a way of messing everything up. :( I'm glad you're enjoying, and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
I had a feeling that Harmony would be one of the prospective candidates!
I do like this Buffy, she really has her head screwed on despite the blows she's been dealt in life and I'm already so anxious for her and any further travails she may face.
Your introduction of Angelus was suitably creepy - great update!
Author's Response: Yay for the suitable creepiness! And I'm glad you like how my Buffy is; she's a really strong character, but she is that way because of the crap she's overcome, you know? Thanks for the review! Oh, and Harmony just had to be a candidate. ;)
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
And we all know what he thinks about passion. Hee hee hee...
Poor thing didn't get to meet William, yet. I hope his phone call wasn't bad news.
Ooo, we have evil in both Liam and Hank! And Buffy's determined to rise above.
I liked the little inclusion about Tara....Willow's support was just what Buffy needed today.
Author's Response: Ah, so you noticed the phone call? It may just be significant.... And yes, he does have a penchant for passion. ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Postponed the meeting between Buffy and William I see? That was kinda evil. ; ) I was looking forward to that. And Angelus was even creepier than I had imagined. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad to have made him creepy. :) I just watched season 2, so his evil was fresh in my mind (and not the lame evil that he was on Angel.. that was just totally unbelievable, haha). Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 11:39 am Title: Chapter 3
aww great chapter once again, although I thought Spike would be there for the interview. Poor Buffy, I felt bad for her when Angelus asked her about her father.
So, she got the job... Can't wait for some spuffy moments!
Author's Response: They'll be coming soon! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Waiting for the Spike/Buffy meeting. Glad Buffy has that "fire". And hopefully ...smart enough to stay away from Angelus.
Enjoyed the update.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter 3
I liked how supportive Willow was about Buffy's possible job as a nude model, and the info about Tara was an interesting surprise. Angelus looks likes he's definitely gonna be trouble, im glad Buffy didn't feel an instant attraction to him. Now that Harmony in the mix i'm wondering if she's a part of the Spike/Other mentioned in the summary? Can't wait for Spike and Buffy's first meeting. Fantastic chapter!
Now about the sexy songs, you could try searching Spuffy on YouTube. Maybe watching some vids will help you with your writer's block. :D ~ I always liked the music from the door scene in the ep. "Dead things" You can find it here... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ErZVO2NlZw&mode=related&search=
Author's Response: Oh, yeah, that song is "out of this world" by bush-- I was totally considering something by them. :) And thanks for the suggestion and review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 09:26 am Title: Chapter 3
well....angelus likes her but what will william think????? loved it lots post soon. great job.
Author's Response: Haha, yes, that is the question.... :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 3
You evil author you! William's not even going to get the chance to meet her beforehand, is he? lol! I'm glad Buffy hasn't lost that fire of hers because of her nasty father, even if it's that same fire that attracts Angelus.
Really good chapter! Looking forward to more!
As for the sexy song thing... I checked through my iPod, but the only thing I could find that comes close is Placebo's 'Post Blue'. Which, while it's a great song, I'm not sure it's what you were looking for, lol. Good luck on your search! =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion, I'll definitely look into it. :) And I know, I was a bit evil with the phone call, haha. I'll update soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 07:13 am Title: Chapter 3
Love it! More please! Happy new year!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! Happy New Year to you too!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2006 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 2
This is an intriguing premis and I'm certainly hooked thus far...
I love the way you disposed of Riley; Buffy's imaginery discussion with her mum was sweet and touching and I'm more than a little wary of Angelus' motives.
Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) I'll be updating soon!
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2006 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
I don't know if it is my excitement over art or my enthusiasm over second jobs OR THE FACT THAT BUFFY HASN'T MET "WILLIAM" YET, but I'm diggin' your story. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Eeek, an art enthusiast. I'm not exactly knowledgable in a lot of art stuff, so if I do anything horribly wrong, please don't hate me! :) But I'm so so glad you like this fic so far! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good, she dumped Riley!
Funny convo with imaginary Joyce.
Hmmm....will Angelus ask all the girls to remove their clothes so he can see the body? I could see him doing that, if he's going to be evilish here. Probably be a good idea to put a bikini on under her clothes, just in case.
Very sweet that Giles liked Buffy on the first impression.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks! :) Yup, Angelus is going to be... Angelus, so much evilness ensues. And I'm glad that you liked the Giles/Buffy liking. I know it wasn't like that on the show, but hey, she was a teenager when they met then, and now she's a (somewhat) mature college student. :) So like-ness all around!
[Report This]Date: 12/30/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Buffy's conversation with Joyce? Maybe it could have gone this way. After all Joyce admired art, earned her money with it.
The other that could have objected is now out of the game (YAY nothing against it). ;-)
And now the interview is soon to be. Looking forward to it. Willow doesn't know what Buffy is applying for, huh? Maybe she can spend some time talking about it *g*. Looking forward to how Buffy will react (like) Giles and William (oh, and if she likes Angelus or dislike him). Till next chapter and Happy New Year :)
Author's Response: Happy New Year to you too! :) And thanks for the review!
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