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Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2007 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 25

loved the update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Gillypod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 - 08:05 am Title: Chapter 24

Nice chapter, Tori. I hope Riley gets what's coming to him soon. Poor Dawn will need to go through it all again, but I am sure it will be worth it.

Author's Response: Thanks Glynis.My brain has been working overtime on this lil fic and I am hoping to get it done soon. There will be some Riley bashing soon and I have to admit, some angsty Spuffy. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 24

Love it, more please.



Author's Response: Thank you and ok! :)~

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 - 04:56 am Title: Chapter 24

Okay have to do it...

I bet they both get a little 'peckish', LOL lovely chapter......

Kimber

Author's Response: Thank you Kimber. I wanted to end the chappie on a lighter note, so I thought that would be a funny comment. I am going to try and get a chappie out by the time I leave work in the morning, all depends on if the crazies stay in tonight!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 24

Nice update - thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks Sam!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2007 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 24

good update

Author's Response: As always, thank you very much!!!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 08:07 am Title: Chapter 23

Love the show, more please.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I will try to get another chapter out by this weekend if all goes well!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 06:55 am Title: Chapter 23

Oh my........WOW.......Hot does not cover it......blazing more like. it......then again....I'm not sure there is words to describe....hmmmmmm

Author's Response: Thanks Kimber. Originally the last two chapters were to be posted together, but were too long. Glad you enjoyed them, I am going to try and get another chapter out by this weekend, but I would also like to get an update on my other fic out as well since I have been neglecting it. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Gillypod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 23

Gotta love the smut after the serious stuff. Really good chapter and very hot. Bring Riley in soon, I want to see him get his.

Author's Response: Don't you worry your pretty lil head. Riley will be making an appearance soon. Funny thing is that after I got chapter 25 out tonight, I actually wrote the next to last chapter. I had been thinking about it all day long and decided to get it out and saved before I forgot what I wanted in it. Weird. Anyway, thanks as always! Plus, eagerly waiting for an update on both of your stories and hope there might be something to read when I get back to work on Wed! Hint Hint. :)

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2007 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 23

good update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 22

Really nice chapter.


Author's Response: Thank you Sam!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 22

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Gillypod Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter 22

Hi babes, really great chapter. You don't need the smut to produce fantastic writing and this just proves. Keep it up, honey, and we expect more from you soon. And I agree, Riley is a ponce

Author's Response: Thanks Glynis! I wasn't really sure about my stopping point when I letf work this morning, so I didn't know how you guys would like it. So very glad to see it went over well! I am going to try and get the other part out before I leave work in the morning! Thanks again!!!!!

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 22

i love the way thier relationshp is going , they are so good together , makes you wonder what
whedon was thinking on the show coupling her with Mr. broody and Riley the Doofus . Thats the one thing i hated about the show. Anyway this is a great story and i'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter and may i ad that your writing style is great.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks Jo. Totally agree with you on the selection of Buffy's dates. But, Whedon always pointed out that a "happy couple is a boring couple!" so I guess that explains it. Also, thank you so very much for the wonderful comment on my writting style! While I am quite confindent in the storyline, my writting abilities are still questionable in my mind since this in my first fic. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 07:33 am Title: Chapter 22

Oh lovely get together.......the calm before the storm. You might want to go and change your chapter heading....to 24 from 1.....I hate when I do that...LOL



Author's Response: AGH! Thank you Kimber for pointing out the chapter number. I was in such a hurry to post before leaving work this morning that I missed that. And yes, there is a storm a brewing. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter 22

Oh I love this story, Hope Riley doesn't get to them again. More please.

You always say more when you are drunk.

OH and a word of advice don't make steamed seaweed wraps a week after you start dating your husband for your first thing sooking him. 12 yrslater and still snot sure about my cooking.

Author's Response: Thank you! However, Riley will strike soon. Things will be bad and you guyswill more than likely throw things at me! LoL! Just remember, this is a Spuffy story. Also, my husband won't eat anything! Period. It's all plain hamburgers, chicken fingers and french fries. He's 25 going on 12. So, I never have to worry about the steamed seaweed wraps anytime soon. The bad part is that I am a really good cook, other people beg for me to make them dinner but my own husband turns his nose up. Men suck sometimes! Thanks again!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2007 - 07:01 am Title: Chapter 22

"looks like they found the wine" lol. Great update, glad to see its so regular. hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: Had to use that line. My best friends husband actually said that about me and her one night many years ago after our monthy "girls day in" where we got wine, pizza and chick movies. He and his friend came home and found us giggling on the couch. It was funny. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2007 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 21

more please

Author's Response: Thank you! I started working on the next chapter and am hoping I can get it out tomorrow night sometime. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 21

Great update.


Author's Response: Thanks Sam!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 21

The only way to deal with Riley is putting him down and the mad dog that he is........I see things are about to get bad bad bad........


Kimber


Author's Response: That's exactly the way I think he should go out! i have a great deal planned for our fav blonde duo...some good, some bad, some horrible. hopefully, the creative juices will continue to flow and i am able to get another chapter or two out by the weekend. Thanks!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2007 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 21

Love it, so his lawyer made it look good for Riley, can't say I like that to much.

Love the Loose Control one and pls don't take to long you left it in a really good cliff hanger.

More please.

Author's Response: Thanks! Riley's lawyer is a skeeze, what would you expect? There should be some really good stuff coming up. Hopefully the muse will return on LC, she's kinda taking a nap right now. Don't worry though, I won't drop the story...I hate it when writers do that. Get you all hooked, then quit. Really irritates me. Anyway, off my tirade, glad you are enjoying both stories. Thank you so much for the wonderful review!!!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 20

nice naughty chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! For a long time I couldn't write the smut aspect of the story. Now, I can't seem to stop!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 20

good update

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Morbidmuch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 20

I really likeit and I can't wait for teh next chapter :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I am hoping to have another chapter out by this weekend, but real life will be hectic this week. Stay tuned...

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 19

Okay, so Riley's been arrested and is he now out on bail.....and if so how could Spike be so careless.......bad Spike, bad Spike.......

Author's Response: Yeah, Spike has been distracted slightly with all the Buffy-love, but will soon be reminded that letting your guard down can be a bad thing! Thanks again.

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