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Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 20

That was a fun chapter lots of spuffiness, can't wait to see what happens next. This story is really good and so well written , luving it.

Author's Response: Thanks Jo! Love hearing from you guys, really gets the Muse going!

Reviewer: nichole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 20

great chapter and update...i look forward to more...N

Author's Response: Thanks Nichole. As I have said previously, I am training a new person at work and will probably not be able to update as much. Thanks again.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter 20

Love it, more please.
So it Buffy trying to say that she doesn't want Angel to pay him anymore.


Author's Response: Thank you! Actually, Buffy pays Spike. Angel just gets the contract going. So, Buffy feels totally weird paying Spike to protect her if they are having "the sex".

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter 20

Nice and smutty. The chapters are just getting better and better - hope you bring Riley back soon though cos he needs his ass kicked.

Author's Response: Thanks. This chapter started out as a fill in the gaps thing, but in the end I really liked it. Riley will be here shortly, just haven't quite figured out how I want the ass kicking to go down. Trust me, he will get what he deserves!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 20

great spuffy! im glad psycho riley hasn't come in yet! his last comment about their relationship is soo cute! hope you write more soon its great!

Author's Response: Thanks! It took me several days to get this chapter just right, or as close as possible. I am going to try and write some this weekend on both of my stories, if all goes well! Thanks again.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 06:06 am Title: Chapter 19

good update

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter 19

A great story so far. Hope you update soon on your off nights, i cant wait to see what happens next especially with Riley

Author's Response: Thank you Squawks! I am currently working on chapter 22 and hope to have it out before I leave work. I don't think Riely is going to make an appearance, but there is some Spuffy! Thanks again!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 19

good update

Author's Response: Thank you! In all honesty, it took me a while to get this chapter out! I started it almost 2 weeks ago, but I just couldn't seem to get it how I wanted it. Not quite sure it's what I had intended it to be anyway! Thanks again!

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 19

Serenity - Thanks for your praise honey, but this story is all you. Wonderful chapter and I can't wait to see what face Riley has next. I hope you update real soon.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. I hate that my MUSE has taken a break from this story! I know where I want it to go, but can't seem to get it there. Grr...maybe she will show up this weekend. Thanks for the review, as always, I love hearing from you!

Reviewer: CutieSaiyajin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 11:26 am Title: Chapter 19

Huh, I thought Riley had been arrested? Did he get out? Oh well, great so far, as usual! I wanna know what Riley's going to do next. Keep it up!! :)

Author's Response: Riley had been arrested, but that was like 2 months prior to this. I guess I should have explained the warrant situation, I normally assume that everyone knows how that works since that is what I do for a living is deal with warrants and what not! Thanks for putting that out to me and I will try and add a section to explain that all in the next chapter, ok? Thanks for the review, i love hearing from all my readers! Hopefully, my muse will show up this weekend and I can get another chapter out soon. Thanks again.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter 19

Love it, so Riley found them, wonder what will come of that.

Author's Response: Ya know, I have no idea what Riley is going to do at this point! It's funny that as I type each chapter, the story unfolds to me as well. Thanks for the review, I am praying that I get a chance to work on this some over the weekend. Thanks again!

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 18

nice update, more please :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully work will be relatively slow since it's cold outside and I will be able to post another chapter this week, maybe two if all goes well!

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 18

That was great, with your permission , i'm printing this story at work once it's completed , i know i'll want to reas and reread it . Update soon please

Author's Response: Hi Jo! Print away my dear! I am totally thrilled that you are enjoying my lil story so much! Thank you for the great review!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 18

Loved it more please.

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I will have an update out before this weekend! Stay tuned...

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 10:38 am Title: Chapter 18

Oh my god. Could that get any hotter? I'm just off for a cold shower. Update soon please.

Author's Response: Why thank you, Sam! I have to say that after reading some of these fanfics, I often feel like a very icy cold shower!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on your award. You truly deserve it and many more. Keep on writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much, DK! I was very surprised when I got the email. I am hoping to have some more chapters out soon, thanks!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 17

Love it, more please.

Author's Response: thanks! I am hoping to get another chapter out by tomorrow morning, that is is my muse will cooperate with me! :) If not, I should have something by Wed. on both of my stories! Thanks for reading, I love hearing from you guys.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh my goodness - cold shower please. Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: Hey Sam! Thanks for the review. As a reward for your patience in the smuty/spuffy area, the next several chapters should make you need a very long cold shower ! Thanks again and stay tuned...

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 16

Love it more please.

Author's Response: Thanks, should be posting another chapter shortly. Stay tuned...

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 16

Yayyyy Spuffy Smut! Great job! Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you! Luckily for all my readers that the next couple of chapters are very much smut oriented. Figured that I made you guys wait so long that I would reward your patience with SPUFFY!

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 16

I would do the same with Spike in the dark. Love the update

Author's Response: Exactly! Where do you think the idea came from? gotta love those in depth daydreams....LOL!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 10:20 am Title: Chapter 15

good update

Author's Response: Thank you, as always! Should post again tonight!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter 14

good update

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter 14

more please. I finally managed to read it. Love it.

Author's Response: Check back in the morning, I should have another chapter posted by then. Thank you for the review, I am glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

Another great story build up sweetie - just love reading it again.

Author's Response: Thank you Thank you! By the way, can I have another chapter on your story? Pretty puh-lease!

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