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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

And yeah, the W in B/X marked it more bearable. Still not my favorite cup of coffee.
Gotcha... Buffy just needed the invite for later. Oh like for now. So Buffy is visiting when he sleeps. I wonder if he'll ever notice bite marks or if he is in a kind of thrall and won't notice at all. Till next chapter :)
(PS: Regarding Breathless: You updated too many chapters for me to catch up now. Will try to do it next weekend.)

Author's Response: Ya know, I haven't quite panned out the next chapter. In all honesty, I never know what is going to happen until I sit down to write. It all sorta unfolds to me as my fingers crunch away on the keyboard. I do know that X is going to have a difficult "life" in the next few chapters, just don't know exactly what is going to happen as of yet. Thanks for always giving such excellent reviews! Look forward to hearing from you!

Reviewer: mollie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow!! That was a great chapter!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks Mollie! I really enjoyed writting that last chapter, Buffy was so sneaky! I am trying to get another chapter out by the weekend, but I need to update on my other story first! Thanks again!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 10:21 am Title: Chapter 4

good update

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 09:17 am Title: Chapter 4

I liked the Buffy/Giles scene, for a minute there I was worried Buffy was gonna hurt Giles... it's good to know that wasn't part of her plan. I loved the yummy dream sequence that wasn't, Spike's reaction in the morning should be interesting. Great chapter!

Author's Response: I just couldn't hurt Giles! I have tried to switch the roles of all the main characters from good to bad and vice versa, but I just couldn't do that to Giles. That's why he is still on the good side in the story! thanks for the review, love hearing from you guys!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter 4

Love it more please.

Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully I can have another chapter out by the weekend! Really need to update on my other story before this one. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 05:42 am Title: Chapter 4

Just checked the story on AFF and your missing a few paragraphs at the end

Author's Response: WoW! Thank you sooo much for catching that! How big of a dork do I feel???

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 4

Great update , honey. the story is flowing nicely and the smut is hot

Author's Response: Thank you. My muse was all sorts of stuck earlier in the night. Somewhere around midnight she kicked into overdrive for some reason!

Reviewer: pintsized_bite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 3

love the story so far...please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am still hoping to have another chapter out this weekend, depends on how busy work is. If not, there will be something out Wednesday! Thanks again.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

great story! I couldn't get into other buffy vamp/ spike slayer stories but yours is really good.

btw do you write firefly fic too? just wondering, with a name like serenity i had to ask.lol

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This storyline came to me one night before bed. I decided to write one chapter to see what everyone thought of it. At first, only a couple of my regular readers commented. But then I put it on here and it went mad! So, i am really happy that everyone seems to be enjoying it because I love it. As of now, I do not write Firefly fics. I am currently watching that series and loved the name Serenity. Maybe once I finish the show, I might try to write one. Thanks again, I will try to have another chapter out by morning. I will just have to see how busy I am at work. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 3

Thanks for the update :) I'm not so fond of the Buffy/Xander part of this chapter so was reading a bit quicker. ;-) ~ And Angel is really one of the citizens that know how to behave in Sunnydale.. and that vampires exists. ~ Till next part!

Author's Response: Yeah, the Buffy/Xander aspect is quite icky. That's why I decided to put Willow in the middle so it's more W/B than B/X.Anyway, thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: janica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 06:47 am Title: Chapter 3

oh great one -who-wtires this wonderful plot... please update soon... hear me begging for more.... hehehe please>>>>>>>

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! **Blushes** I will probably not have an update out before next week, depends on how busy work is this weekend. Stay tuned...

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

good update

Author's Response: Thank you! I am hoping to have another chapter up this weekend, have to see how busy work is. Stay tuned...

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love how Angel is in the Xanderlike role... I wonder if he wears hawaiian shirts too... lol! Great update.

Author's Response: You know, I hadn't really thought about Angel being all Xander-like. Guess it just sorta happened. Love the idea about the hawaiian shirt, thanks!!!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter 3

great chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 06:01 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh I love it. Can't wait for more of Spike and Buffy together.

Author's Response: Thank you! There should be some Spuffy in the next chapter if everything plays out correctly from my head to the computer.

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2007 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 3

Great update honey. The smut was brill. Told you this story was the bomb. Have fun with it and let it flow.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was writting this chapter at work and didn't realize one of the deputies on my shift was reading over my shoulder (really into the zone for a bit). When he realized what he was reading, the poor thing blushed and started stuttering. He was so funny!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

So Buffy's sire is Willow. And Wesley is Spike's new watcher but his father knows about vampires too it seems to me.

Author's Response: Yeah, haven't quite figured out the story line for ol Rupes as of yet. I sorta just sit down and type what is in my head at the moment. I thinking of something pretty cool in his past, though. Thanks for all of your reviews, love hearing from you. Also, any thoughts on the story that you might have, please feel free to pass them along.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh I like it, don't worry. Seems like Buffy in the begin Spike as a slayer had some difficulties to notice that Buffy was a vamp. :) *on to part two*

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. As I have said before, I haven't quit planned this story out all the way. Yes, Spike is the slayer, but doesn't quite know what that is. Rupes has some slight knowledge of vamps having read occult books in the library and Wes had given him the rundown before Spike got there. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

good update

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love the continued role reversals

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: Danni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is good, Willow and Xander vampires to. I like this, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks Danni! Totally loved the idea of switching around almost all of the characters for this story.

Reviewer: Spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh yes, I love it. Xander, Willow, and Buffy the vamps. Spike and Angel the good guys. haha..... Good one.

Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love the idea of totally switching around most everyone. Usually, only Spike and Buffy's characters are switched which are good, but I wanted something different this time.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 10:03 am Title: Chapter 2

I like how you made Xander, and Willow into vamps, and Angel, Cordy, Fred, and Gunn into Spike's version of the Scooby gang. The close of the chapter was really interesting. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Good update!

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought this story lay out would be cool. Usually other writers just switch the roles of Buffy and Spike, which is generally good but I wanted to try something new. Please check back soon, I should have another chapter out by the weekend!

Reviewer: Gillypod Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 09:59 am Title: Chapter 2

As I have said before this is a great chapter for laying down the plot. Keep up the good work, love, everyone will enjoy it.

Author's Response: Thank you! As always, love to hear from you and get your thoughts on my stories. Very much a valued reviewer!!!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Great start! I look forward to reading more. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I am planning on getting another chapter out this week, depends on how busy work is since that's generally where I have internet access. Anyway, thanks for reading!

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