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Reviewer: Shay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2007 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter Forty-Six

This one of the best story I have ever read. You are great writer I hope this not just a hobbie for you. But I do hope Buffy wakes up and see the the light plus kick Willow and Tara free loading asses out. Not without paying back RENT up first. I didnt know u can live rent free?

Author's Response: How incredibly sweet of you to say! Right now, writing is just a hobby for me, but I'm working on an original novel, and I hope that it will turn my hobby into a career. Thank you so very much for your support and encouragement. I really appreciate it! :-D

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2007 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Forty-Six

You know that the idea of Buffy becoming pregnat came to my mind in the previous chapter. I thought what better way to hurt Spike more will be for Buffy to get pregnant and the latter to refuse to let Spike claim his child? It will surely add salt to the deep deep deep wound that Buffy gave to Spike. And now this cliffhanger came.....

I think i better hold on to my seat and get my heart check i might get a heart attack in the coming chapter. LOL!

Author's Response: lol. Well, you never know what might happen next ... At least, I hope you'll never know. I love pulling those unexpected punches. Thanks so much for the review! :-D

Reviewer: jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2007 - 12:15 am Title: Chapter Forty-Six

OMG you are SO evil! This is one of the best stories I've ever read! I LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Evil, but in a good way, right? ;-) It's really flattering to hear that you think so highly of the story - thanks so much for taking the time to tell me so. :-D

Reviewer: nae Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Excellent! I have no words for your excellence. You reign supreme.

Author's Response: How sweet of you to say. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Oh! Oh, please let her be preggers! I do hope that's the direction you are planning on going in. Let Angel stew in those juices for a while! HeHe! Love that Dawn is forcing Buffy to realize who Spike really is, someone needed to. And, as for Willow...geesh...bitch much? If the house is in so much dispair as far as money goes, help out and quit mooching you louse! Grr! That aspect pissed me off on the show also. Anyway, Great chapter, I am eagerly anticipating more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :-D

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Let us hope it is a preg. test and not a TB test with the answers we all wanna hear. It would suck to be a Slayer with TB it make it hell on the running away part if your hacking up a lung.
I am wondering on how Willow got access to Joyces accounts if Buffy did go missing I mean if shes taking funds out of checking I don't see how they would just let that happen unless Willow did a mind warp on them at the bank but if that is the case she so shoulda just taken someones elses cash then Buffys. Tara nad Willow seem to be living it up at the Summers house I think they need to go let those two go find jobs and make them pay their own bills for a bit I'm sure the Double Meat is hiring.

Author's Response: I think Willow is too morally upright to steal someone else's money at the bank, lol. But it's a good idea. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

I see I'm gonna have to Google a PPD and just pray its a funny answer lmao.
A little Spuff-muffin on the way would not be such a bad thing.
I don't remember what chapter it was but wasn't that all what William wanted in life was a wife and little one to look after?
I hope somehow he gets it!

Author's Response: lol. I'm not sure how funny you found it when you googled, but I hope you liked the chapter anyway. Thanks so much for the review! :-D

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Am I getting the Angel leaving town vibe? I think I am!
God knows what Willow will do with that prehnancy line info let us all just hope she does not do a locator spell on Buffy's uterus!

Can't wait till you write more

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked the chapter. :-D

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

I can see where Buffys thoughts here on comparing Angel to Spike but she seems to be missing the major point here that unlike Angel who enjoyed his badness Spike never really did and most of his actions based on this story come from pain inflicted on him.

Love reading this and trying to figure it all out.

mozza



Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad that you like it. :-D

Reviewer: vampid cupcake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Buffy stop fighting fate girl!

Author's Response: We'll see .... ;-)

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

LOL
I love the idea of Dawn off doing a B and E to get to the truth of Spike and Buffy. Shes smart and going outside of the Scoobies to find her own answers. It was very Summers woman ballzie for Dawn to go and confront Buffy the way she did. I think I loved the part best with Dawn leaving and Buffy picking up the book and how she reacted to that. I thought the Angel part was pivotal in the sense that he just figured it out that he was not her greatest love.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the book scene with Buffy; that was my favorite part of the chapter when I wrote it. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :-D

Reviewer: Popcorn Papoose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Mutant Enemy needs to hire you as a writer and go back in time to the WB for your great!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm really flattered you feel that way. :-D

Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 09:12 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

His eyes
Sooo she did notice him and his reactions and his pain when she looked at his eyes that is a start.
More please and sooner the better ~ spoken like a spoiled fan I know

Author's Response: Yep, there's hope for her yet. And for them. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you liked the chapter. :-D

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

This is soooooooooo good!! I just have no words to express how much!!!!! Go Dawn! I'll be doing that cheer until the next update. Loved the Angel jealousy. It's always entertaining. And the PPD and pregnancy test.......I'm just bouncing in my seat!! This is a "page turner" if ever there was one! And not being able to turn the page.......well, I've got ants in my pants!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really happy to hear you're enjoying my story that well. I hope you continue to do so. :-D

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Aww poor Buffy is defensive and hurt and in mounig of her man but maybe with Dawns probing she will begin to see not all is lost in Spike.

Author's Response: It's great to know that you're sympathizing with Buffy as well as Spike. The way she treated him the night before was wrong, but it was due to pain and confusion, not a real desire to hurt him. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Is it just me or do Tara and Willow seem completely oblivious to their own part in Buffy's financial drain? What kinda friendship is that?
Oh...While you were gone in a spell we totally screwed up we spent all your savings and lived off of you!
I hope Buffy says or does something to them both.
I really laughed at Angel's line to Willow at the end of this I just burst out laughing over that.
I am loving your version of Dawn in this and not making her all uber-teen stupid like so many fics do I am really enjoying her.

Please more as soon as you can
Yes I know demanding much lol!



Author's Response: Nope, it's not just you - they're oblivious, lol. I'm glad you liked the line at the end. My beta wanted me to change it, and I understand why, because a lot of readers probably aren't familiar with the PPD reference, but I'm glad I left it in. It seemed to flow so well as it was. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: Sunshine Blind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Oh how good Dawn and Buffy talking she will give Buffy the flip side of the coin in things to think about regarding Spike. And I think at the end Angel realizes just how much Buffy did love William in a love that surpasses any teen girl romance she might have had with Angel. This was just mind blowing to read cause you touched on a lot of things. Now I will have to go back and read it again and study on it more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's great to know you enjoyed it that well. I really appreciate your taking the time to review it. :-D

Reviewer: Minerva Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Yes! I was waiting for the pregnancy twist to come about! Buffy and Spike can be so stupid sometimes, and you make it great writing. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :-D

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

B?uffy seems to want to seprate William from Spikes past but really you can't take one from the other it is gonna be cool to see how she has to face him and what happened to him head on at some point.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it and are looking forward to more. :-D

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Hehehe seems Angels not too happy and darn if it don't make me giggle

More pretty please more!

Author's Response: More very soon, I promise. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

You’re imagining things, she told herself firmly. You’re seeing the things you want to see; you’re seeing William in Spike because you want to see him, not because he’s there.


I loved this part if I was Buffy I would go with this feeling!

Breath taking story!

Author's Response: I'm so flattered you feel that way. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: BensLilBug Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Ahh!! A wee little baby on the way?! I love love love love love this story! I seriously check every day for updates, and when they come, I'm never disappointed! Thanks!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and I really appreciate your taking the time to review it. :-D

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Sorry forget to point out that Willow and Tara need to be helping the comment about well its Buffys house she will have to get a job, doesn't wash, what were they doing touching that money anyways, if Buffy wasn't around then it would go to Dawn and I bet Dawn doesn't know how bad it is either.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

I was thinking that, too. It would be interesting if she was pregnant by William.

I am not sure what a PPD is.


Author's Response: A PPD is a skin test they give to check for tuberculosis. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: LuvsBitch Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2007 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Six

Great Update!!! I love this story and it keeps getting better, your a wonderfull author! You write in a way that always throws emotions at me, also keeps me on the edge of my seat!!!

With love, Charlie xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :-D

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