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Reviewer: stacy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five

why does buffy have to be such a heartless bitch to him? she seems to forget about meeting angelus in the past and what he almost did to her. all because he has a stupid soul now, like that means anything. he's still a prick and i hope he leaves now, he's really not wanted there. i don't know how she could treat spike like that after being in love with william, she's an idiot if she doesn't realize william is still inside of him. i hope she comes to her senses soon, i was hoping this part wouldn't be so angsty. i think i've read enough to last me a lifetime.

Author's Response: She's not being a heartless bitch intentionally. But the story began after the events of "Crush" and before "Intervention", so the last real interaction Buffy had with Spike was when he chained her up and threatened to kill her if she didn't say she could/would/did love him. I know she was terribly hard on him, but it comes more from confusion than a real desire to hurt him. When Buffy is confused and upset, we all know how quick she is to lash out. I'm sorry you're not enjoying the angst, but the story is labeled an Angst fic. I hope you can see it through to the end, but if not, thank you for reading this far. And thank you for your review. :-)

Reviewer: moonchic1023 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five

Dear Buffy,

Get over it. Just as you are the woman Buffy and the Slayer, so too is Spike William and a vampire. A being is a being, composed of many different facets that you can't separate.

In 1880, you got your chance (for the most part) to be a regular girl. Apocalypses were not on your agenda. William fell in love with you as you were, as a normal girl. Now you're the Slayer, a being designed to kill him, yet this does not deter his love. Why can't you offer Spike this same unconditional love?

Tell everyone else to blow off and only listen to Dawn. You'll be a lot happier. I promise.

With your happiness in mind,

The Spuffy Community that is addicted to this story and worships Unbridled Brunette on a daily basis.



Author's Response: Ooh. Worship? I'm worshiped now? Do you have any idea what that does to the Muse? It's doing the happy dance all over my laptop. Thank you!!! :-D

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five

It is always so easy to feel Spike's pain and here my heart is just breaking for him. Stupid stupid Buffy! Please say you'll post more soon!

Author's Response: As soon as possible. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five

I hate that she's being so stubbornly, willfully ignorant!!! And mean on top of it!!

I'd be up for Spike and Dawn running off and taking care of each other from then on. We know what Buffy's parenting skills are like, and Dawn's the only one who truly saw Spike and loved him like he should be.

*stupid do-gooder hero idiots*

Author's Response: I don't think she's being mean intentionally. She's just confused, and it's terribly hard for her to accept that her gentle Victorian lover is the same person who has tried so many times to kill her. Remember, this story began before the events of Intervention, so Spike never had a chance to prove himself to Buffy. Not yet, anyway. Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2007 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Five

Oh I wish it would work all out for Spike.

Author's Response: Don't worry. He's taking it on the chin now, but he's a survivor. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Celia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2007 - 01:43 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

please finish really soon it seems to be ending they both know about each other and are now in the same time so get them together but don't try doing it to quickly and the story ends suckingly, also, just intuition, that Angel isn't going to be happy about Buffy and Spike can you write that realistically and not make Angel the ultimate psychotic sadistic bastard like a lot of others do about him, make it in his character. I also think it would be cool if Buffy was pregnant and it would make sense, in 1880 they did have sex, unprotected.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Constance Truggle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Okay. I definitely need your address so I can come and haunt you until I read the next chapter. This was wonderful, as have all your chapters been. Sad and bittersweet, and painful, and the realisation of Willow's need for control must kill at least Dawn and Spike, if not Buffy, once she realises too. I can't wait for the next chapter.

CT.

Author's Response: I'm having laptop issues, which is why the new chapter is a bit delayed. But hopefully, it won't be too much longer. Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: jessie88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2007 - 02:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

another great chapter. I'm just glad that Spike didn't hear the "It was terrible" line.. he has enough to deal with! lol


Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to tell me so. :-)

Reviewer: Becca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2007 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Your comment to one reveiwer really made me think... how Buffy views the vamipre as completely separate from their human side. I understand how Buffy would separate Angel and Angelus in her mind - she wouldn't want to admit that Angel actually could have been responsible for those horrible things Angelus did. But you are right - if she admit that, then she would also be admiting that her William was a killer. How could she get past that? Wow - I have to compliment you on how multilayered your storyline is here. Kudos, and keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-)

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I'm a few days late in seeing you posted more but it was wonderful

Please more!

Author's Response: I'm working on it, but laptop issues are slowing me down just a tad. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: belledaynight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2007 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

this is so amazing! ack! I wish you had the story completed up here. it was perfect how you blended the past to the present...just absolutely amazing. so much depth to spike and buffy's characters. just...wow

Author's Response: Thank you! How incredibly nice of you to say. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :-D

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Every little step just makes this better and better. The idea that Buffy has decided that Spike is not William, the same way she has decided that Angel is not Angelus. Hopefully she'll learn. And Spike struggling to get to her to only find Angel being a right ass and staking his claim. Not to mention Spikes rant about Willow messing up his life, how very true that is. I can only imagine what happens next. And I can't wait for it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope I continue to entertain you in the future. :-)

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Brilliant and brilliant and brilliant and ((((punches Angel in the head)))) and I can't say enough things about this story ((((kicks Angel in the shin)))) best story in the Realm ((((shoves Angel back to L.A.))))

Alright sorry I had to get a few licks in just for Spikes honor once more you outdo yourself and keep me guessing and crying on a small Sunnydale pillow wanting more.

Author's Response: Ouch! You're really laying into Angel, lol. Of course, after the little smile he gave Spike, I can't say I blame you. It's great to know you're still enjoying the story. Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :-)

Reviewer: TheC Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

A quiver of a smile... ? That does fit to Angelus. I would LOVE to see him appear DO update quick!

Author's Response: Update is coming very soon. I promise. :-)

Reviewer: SaundersFrench Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

No! I get to the end here and just cry out No! No! No! Don't end there I need to see what happens!!

More please its killing me!

Author's Response: More soon. I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: ll_x_x_ll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2007 - 07:36 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Angel really is a wrench in the works alright but maybe if Buffy sees Spike she will stand up for him and send Angel home. I don't get the impression she wants him there shes just like whatever. Spike is falling apart and in a weakened state but still has to go to make sure she is ok because he considers her his even with all that has happened to him and to her. I desperately want Buffy to notice him or his injuries and have some reaction to him even if he is not the William she just lost. Come on Buffy choose comforting Spike over this things with Angel for once just see him and not a monster.

Author's Response: You're right in that Buffy probably wouldn't have called Angel herself. But now that he's there (and behaving in a far more positive and understanding way than the Scoobies) I don't think she's sorry he came. He is, after all, a convenient shoulder to cry on. Thanks so much for your review! :-)

Reviewer: Jahled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I like how Buffy isn't fooled by anyone she is just calling it like it is with Willow and then seeing thru Angel. This whole experience has made her stronger and clearer and I'm hoping that extends toward Spike.
Lovely as always and thought provoking I love finding a new chap. on this it gives me such a delight.

More when you have a chance and have a great weekend.

Author's Response: It's great to know you're enjoying it that well. I'm having a wonderful time writing this fic, and I hope you continue to have a good time reading it. Thank you so much for your review. :-)

Reviewer: inkstained Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I couldn't love this story anymore if I even tried. It is just brilliantlydone.
Spike get your girl!

Author's Response: That's great to know. Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Spike is so tore up Buffy better do something cause Angel plus Spike always equals bad. Spike being jealous was cool though Im really waiting on the next page of this.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Edwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Looking forward to all hell breaking loose!!!!
More please more more more!!!!!

Author's Response: More soon, I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2007 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Brilliant update. I can't wait to read more!!!*

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. :-)

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Angel is always there to twist the dagger in my vamp boys unbeating heart.
Really a deep down juicy chapter though I just did not want it to end please more when you have a chance I love seeing what they do next.



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Man og man Spikes taken a lot of hits lately please dont let Angel be another one I was cheering as Spike was angry and jealous and heading to her house.please God don't let him walk away please let something happen

I'm pulling for Spike!

Author's Response: Spike is really taking it on the chin, isn't he? Luckily, he's a survivor ... a very hurt, confused, and battered one. But he is a survivor. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Awkwardness is right I wonder how much of what went on Buffy will tell anybody I kinda want her to confide in Dawnie just because she's so put off by her friends right now and Dawn would be the most understanding. Willow and Tara need to move out and Buffy needs to take back her life and her Vampire hee hee!

Just love reading this and have to ask for seconds and thirds!

Author's Response: Seconds coming very soon, I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: limpfish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I'm so glad Buffy told Angel she was the gitl he attacked in the past. I think it's great shes not looking at him with blinfers on and I have hope for Spike. I want Buffy to see him and see he is hurt I wanna see her react to pull her out of this gloom.

This so made my weekend love your writing :D

Author's Response: It's absolutely great to know that you do. Thank you! :-)

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