If it was me and I were Spike I'd be in beyond-shock-land. Please more soon I can hardly stand it.
Must have more

Author's Response: More soon, I think. Very soon. :-)

Well I just feel spoiled in so many new updates to this story but at the same time I want to cry out for more. Where do I even begin to reviews this I haven't a clue it has so much going on lets see here.
A room full of people all talking at once except the two I would most likely to hear lol. I thought you gave this a great opening with Buffy being so out of it after coming through the time portal and being very disoriented thinking it a nightmare and then trying to peace together where she is and just trying to get back home.
The guy with the car was very amusing thinking she was high or maybe a Halloween Jane Austin escapee on the crack. And I think I loved best the Dawn and Spike play by play with her letting* him in if he could hold back on the underwear sniffing. And I must remember to stock up on some Totino’s pizza rolls if it could get me a master vampire visit lol. Makes me wonder on his 3 years of trying to kill her and him being concerned of her disappearance to come calling. It was very cute them sprawling out on the couch watching Monty Python and passing the time together. The great killer trying not to nod off on the sofa while Dawn is doodling on her hand. It was a very amusing yet not too cutesie scene laid out there.
It was absolutely fantastic the way you had them first interact with Buffy being out of it and trying to hold herself together and not being able to face him. Then Spike thinking she only came back out of no where and then to realize it was a whole different thing. Now that she knows both sides to him and had loved him as who he was not being able to look up from the floor to face him was perfect. And of course she had to look! I mean what girl couldn't look I mean how could you resist wanting to see the one person you loved just what was moments ago ripped away from you but now is a completely different man. I think my heart stopped while I was reading of him seeing his bracelet on her wrist. Really you had a great choice of words in describing his look as a "greedy look" on his face. I think at that precise moment you could hear a pin drop in that room while the whole earth's axis between these two people shifted. Things are never going to be the same for either one of them. Spike may have stormed off for now but I am wondering at where his mind is and what he is thinking. Meanwhile Buffy recover a little toss those people outta your house and try to think little woman.




Author's Response: "Jane Austen escapee on crack". I love that description, lol. And it's just amazing how many people liked the Totino's pizza roll line, because I honestly have no clue where that came from or why I put it in. Dawn just had good idea, I guess. I'm glad you liked the chapter -- especially the description of his expression, because that was my personal favorite. As always, thanks so much for reviewing. :-D

I can see his need to escape I'd escape myself given the circumstances but holy cow what a enterance and what a first meeting and complete shock to both of them. I lust loved it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you did. Thank you! :-)

oh update this soon!!! Does he remember? how in shock is she?

Author's Response: You'll see .... ;-)

Man!! Sometimes i hate those aggravating scoobies!! Leave the girl alone sometimes!!!

Author's Response: Nah, that'd be too easy for them ... ;-)

He saw the bracelet!!! So he knows... oh wow, I really need Buffy to find her voice and tell the Scoobies to bugger off... and then get with the wild lovin' with Spike!!!!! Oh wow. Can not wait to see Spike's reaction to all this. LOVE this story, so so much!

Author's Response: lmao. Now, Devin. If it were as easy as all that, Part III would be very short indeed. But I hope you like the twists that are coming. Thanks so much for the review! :-)

But still so very, very familiar. A link between them.

"His eyes locked on it; and Buffy, still numb with shock, could see the exact moment when he put it all together.

Dawn saw it, too. The strange and suddenly greedy look on his face. It alarmed her, and she said softly, “Spike…are you okay?”

He shook his head slightly, his eyes still trained on the bracelet.

“I’m…”

This whole part made me cry it was like his heart was ripped out all over agian and I think it is worse then he lost her the first time. I can not wait to see what happens next here.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to make you cry, except ... well ... I'm kind of glad, too. Because that's exactly the kind of intense reaction I hoped the readers would have. So, thank you very much for letting me know that it affected you like that. :-D

Really loved the exchange between Dawn and Spike and their conversation and the idea of them sitting around watching Monty Python with pizza rolls gave me a grin. I always got the vibe Dawn and Spike were two lonely people who made a good set of friends. I really liked how you had Buffy return much like her coming back to life and just how to a outsider our times can be harsh on the eyes and ears and I had to laugh over the Beemer guy in his calvins.
As for Buffy I think Spike is going to feel like she really played a number on him I mean she knew she was not of his time and she knew who he was and she never said anything. Not that he would have believed her but there is a whole lot of pain here to sort thru. Super chapter I am dying to see more.

Author's Response: I see Dawn and Spike that way as well. I love that dynamic between them ... sometimes it really seemed as if Dawn understood Spike better than anyone. I was incredibly disappointed when their relationship was axed by the writers because it looked "inappropriate" due to the age differences. But I'm glad you liked what I did with them, and the rest of the chapter as well. Thanks for letting me know! :-)

We are not in Kansas anymore!
Pain! Lusty looks! Braclets! Retro Wear! And Realizations! Slam! Bang! Boom! Buffy is back in town!

PLEASE
MORE



Author's Response: More is coming very soon, I promise. Thanks for the review. :-)

Oh? I think shock does cover it but.......
I do not think Spike is going to be very happy about this whole thing I mean prepare for fallout is what I'm thinking here. But hot damn could this chappie be any better I think if it were possible Spuffy Realm has flames bouncing off it's pages here cause this just exploded the entire web site

Author's Response: lol. I'm glad those are figurative explosions, because otherwise Pari would probably be really upset with me. ;) But it's awsome to think that this chapter has stirred such strong feelings in people. Thank you so much for your review. :-)

I can see now I'm gonna need a cigarette and a glass of wine after reading this and evil thing is I am at work too. Now the rest of my day I will be in a Time Past coma! Why is this story better then the entire series?
Please more when you can

Author's Response: "...better than the entire series?" Wow, someone is going to have to pull me off the floor, because that comment is about to make me pass out from happiness. Thank you!!! :-D

Eeeep! and a fan-girl scream

THE BRACELET!!!!!!

Author's Response: It was bound to make its appearance. ;-)