[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Forty-One
I have waited so long for this moment and now that its here I think I've read this page 10 times and I still keep reading it. I think I'm gonna cry it is so good.
Author's Response: What a sweet thing to say! I'm seriously very flattered that you think so highly of my writing. Thanks from the bottom of my heart for the review. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-One
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! And Ahhhhhhhh!!!! And Ahhhhhhhh!!! And a OMG!!!!!
She's back!!!!
Dies and then wants more!!!!!
Author's Response: Don't die yet! How will you read the rest? lol.
But I'm glad you liked the chapter - thanks for letting me know! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Wow!!!!!
Another Update!!!!! Thanks for posting so much these past days.....
So glad to see that it seems Spike's realized who she is. Too bad Buffy didn't get to tell him anything and I'm disapointed that she just allowed Xander to make Spike leave, she shoud've stood up for Spike.
I really do hope you'll be posting another update soon, please!!!!!
Author's Response: Buffy was just so overwhelmed in that moment, I don't think she had the strength to prevent Spike's leaving, even if she wanted to. But they'll get their chance to talk very soon, I promise. It's great to know you enjoyed this chapter and are looking forward to the next. Thanks for taking the time to comment. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Wow you are on a roll. How lucky are we readers? I'm gald that we won't have to wait to see if Spike figures out that Buffy and Elizabeth are one and the same now we can get straight to how will he deal with the fact and what will be Buffy's reaction to him.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Oh My Goodness!!! That was just amazingly good. I loved how Spike suddenly realized that Buffy was his Elisabeth. Hate you a little for not letting Buffy say anything to him - can't wait to see what happens. I hope she puts the Scoobies in their place like they totally deserve - it always bugged me how they felt they were the only ones who knew what was right for Buffy. Please! Let her chew them out somehow.
Author's Response: Hey! Don't hate on the authoress, it causes writer's block! lol. But seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing it. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
I just love this line: “Positive energy, huh? We’ll have to tell that to the previous owners. I’m sure they’ll appreciate knowing it, being positively dead and all.”
wow, yeah, I didn't expect this part yet. But oh, Spike recognizing the garnet bracelet.
Author's Response: No one seemed to expect it. I guess that means my plot twist worked? I'm glad you liked the Dawn/Spike interaction. I had a lot of fun writing their scene. Thanks for the review. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
It's like Christmas whenever I see an update, for this story and I slowly try to unwrap the paper of your shiny chapter, only to get impatient and rip right into it, devour it, then go back and read it 3 or 4 more times to fully admire your brilliance.
Seriously, I feel like I should send you a cake or some other baked good in gratitude.
;)
Author's Response: Ooh, a muffin basket wouldn't be unwelcome ... But, uh, that's not why I'm writing the fic. Not for rewards or baked goods. Your review, and knowing that you like the story, is payment enough. Thank you! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 08:48 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
ohhh...so everyone thinks she was in hell...all but Spike. He must be utterly confused at the moment...everything now can fit together about Elizabeths strange behavior of knowing things like cars and stuff and why he was now in love with Buffy. I really wanted him to stay in the house but after seeing what he saw i guess he would leave before he strangled all the Scoobies.
And i like how he did the same reaction he did after Buffy came back to life in 'Afterlife'. I guess it fits the story since he's reacting to see a dead woman that he thought he would never see again. Spike must be mad at Buffy for not telling him the truth about who she really was back in the 1800s. But then again he wouldn't have really believed her until now.
Will William now reappear from deep inside Spike? Does he stll have that ring that was for Elizabeth?
Author's Response: lol. I'm afraid of answering your comment for fear I'll accidentally give away part of the plot. So, I'll just say thanks for reading and reviewing! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 06:40 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Hey. Great chapter.
I know I said that I hoped Spike will recognize Buffy earlier, but I pretty much expected things to turn up like you made them to in this chapter. After all, you had to take into consideration the entire story of S/B that took place in BTVS, and kept unfolding all those years.
I just think that if you didn't have it all already planned for this fic, in actuality Spike would rather sooner than later recognize Buffy as Elizabeth. I mean, when you live in a world of supernatural, time travel is not a thing too impossible to take into consideration.
Plus, you can also recognize a person by the words he uses most often, overall behavior, and some stuff that can't be copied - like moles or freckles in a certain place.
But I understand that you have chosen a drift to send this story to a long time ago, so I'm not surprised that it unfolded this way. I guess I just hoped that they will be together sooner. :)
Hmm... I wonder what happened between Spike and Angel in your version of the story?.. After all, if Spike thought that Buffy "looked' a lot like his lost love, he must have been pissed at Angel for making her fall for him, and I believe he should've been really jealous...
Hope you're gonna get to it somewhere in your story, which is still great.
Regards, and have a lot of inspiration.
Rouge.
Author's Response: In [my] Spike's defense, it had been over a century since he last saw her, or heard her talk, when he walked in on her in the Bronze in 1997. Also, I seriously doubt he was all about the mole checking. lol. I will be addressing some of this in the following chapters, though. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. i know that the one aspect of the plot is bothering you, but I hope the rest will keep you interested. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
:) Great chapt! I love the way you write soo much, Im on the end of my seat!! xxxxxx
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for letting me know! :-D
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Really, You´re giving me one shock after another.
First the jump in time, again and then they never have the chance to talk to each other!!!!! Please, please, update soon!!!!!! This is evil.
My stomach ache is back.... LOL. ;-))
Absolutely loved this chapter, a lot!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oops. Should I send some antacid with the next update? :P
Thanks for reading and reviewing -- and I promise, the next update will come as quickly as possible. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
I LOVED it! This is such a good story I admit, I´m one of those who didn´t review during part 2 but that´s due to my little son who is jealous of the computer
Anyway, great chapter I can´t wait to read more!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for braving the son to reach the computer and leave me a review. I really appreciate it. I'm working on a new chapter now, so hopefully it won't be long in coming. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Oh I can't wait for her to go and talk to Spike. Yes he remembered her at the Bronze but I knew it would not really make a difference till she came back because she would not know.
I wonder if the love they had back then will pick up, or if he will be mad at her for everything she knew.
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
It did seem to be quite a time jump.
Enjoying. Have a love/hate relationship with the "Scoobies"
Author's Response: Yeah, not a lot of people (including my beta) saw the time jump coming. But I'm all about the plot twists with this story. Hope you're enjoying it. Thanks for commenting! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Finally! Very good chapter. And it took me a moment, but it´s clear that Spike in the actual timeline couldn´t have recognized her when they met first three years ago, because her time journey hadn´t occured yet. Only after she comes back the memories are altered and he can "remember" her.
I cannot imagine him leaving, though, or Buffy doing nothing to prevent it. Somehow I would have thought, that Buffy would be different, I mean, it´s all very fresh for her. Wouldn´t she be completely fixed on Spike?
Author's Response: There is a reason why Buffy did not prevent Spike's leaving, and that will be fully explained in Chapter 42, I promise. I can't say anything else without giving away part of the plot ... but thanks for reviewing. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Amazing and I loved it but I need more please soon.
Author's Response: Hey, haven't I been delivering fast enough? Four chapters in ten days ain't nothing to sneeze at ... lol
Yeah, but more should be coming soon. I'm working on it. Thanks for reading. :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
haha-- actually, I *hadn't* been wondering what had happened over the past 3 1/2 years. I guess i just assumed that it followed the same canon as the show-- he knows that there's a resemblance to Elizabeth, but yeras, and dreams have made him confused. Buffy, of course, knowns nothing about it, and they continue just as it was shown on the show.
At least, that's what I had assumed. I'm *assuming* that I'm wrong, considering your author's note. haha
I loved this chapter!!! I admit that I was hoping for a "William!" as Buffy throws herself to him, but I have yet to be disappointed by the way you have taken this story.
Great job!
Author's Response: lol. While I'll admit that Buffy throwing herself into Spike's arms and calling him "William" would be romantic, I just couldn't see that happening in the story. Actually, I didn't see any of this happening. I had my basic concept - her return at the beginning of Part III - and then the rest just wrote itself. Glad to hear that you enjoyed it. Thanks! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 02:18 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
Holy frijoles that was a great chapter! Damn those annoying friends of Buffy's for once again interrupting a Spuffy moment! Can't wait for the next chappie!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 01:50 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
stoopid xander.
Author's Response: ROFL -- that's one way to describe him. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
OMG! Poor Spike--I can't even imagine what he is thinking and feeling right now! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
AHHHHHH OMFG HE REMEMBERS HER AND THEY HAVE FOUND ONE ANOTHER AGAIN!!!! YAY FINALLY!! i LOVE this story and am so happy that u updated. i wonder wat happened between them for the past 3 1/2 years, did it follow the same time line as the show, it seems like it? i cant wait to find out wat happened. im so glad that shes back and that both know what they went through more than 100 years ago. i really hope that they get a chance to talk and get together like theyre suppose to be. also i hope that things work out and that the gang leaves her alone and lets her get situated again. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING!!!, like always to read wat happens next. THANX SOOO MUCH!!! U ROCK!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. And don't worry ... I'm working on Chapter 42 even as we speak. Shouldn't be long ... ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Forty-One
WOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!
HE KNOW!!!!!! finally!
your muse was very busy this weeks, and i'm very hapy for it
wonderful chapter, evrithing it's fallin in his place!
i can't wait to know what happend in those 3 1/2 years
keep writting, i beg you!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol. My Muse has been an ANIMAL for the past ten days or so. But after the on-again off-again bouts of writer's block, I'm not about to complain. And I definitely wasn't going to make you guys wait for the chapters once they were written -- you already did your waiting when I went AWOL a month ago. Great to hear that you're enjoying the new chapters ... and yep, I'm still scribbling away. ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/14/2007 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine
How delightful that our boy is finally having his coming out party. Now he can truly live his unlife. And what will his girl think. I can't wait.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/14/2007 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight
And so it has happened. Angelus has a soul and Spike can see how little it matters. Or, not that it doesn't matter, but that soul or not he always had a choice. So very wise our Spike, even with the memory of Elizabeth haunting him. Ever closer to their reunion we get, always waiting for that moment. Amazing story.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you! :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/14/2007 - 07:05 am Title: Chapter Forty
I just began to read this fic last week, so this should be my first review, just to tell you that I loved this second part: Spike is such an intersting character and to be able to enjoy it from all pints of view: William, the new born vampire Spike and the change he suffred upon himself to become the Spike we first knew in Sunnydale... the journey is just amazing and in no way boring or unintersting. At least not to myself.
So, thank you very much for your fic and for taking the time in it to bring us a complete study in Spike,
Molly.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing it! It's great to know that you enjoyed reading Part II ... I like writing it and exploring William's transformation into Spike, and it makes me happy to know that people liked reading it. Thanks so much for the review. I hope you continue to enjoy the story in the future. :)