I think she just blew his whole world and everything he thought he knew apart.
Explosive and intensely emotional page I loved it.

Author's Response: You're certainly right about that - she did! Thanks for the review. :-D

Spike is gobsmacked and I am gobsmacked and this just got more delicious.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :-D

I go and give up my Doctor Who / Rose fanfic reading and come to find this on my break and now I am ruined for the rest of the day and need either my hubby or a chocolate bar or a chocolate hubby. Wonderful I simply dont have the words on how good this is other then to just say wonderful over and over again.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know! Oh ... and if you find a place that sells chocolate hubbies, let me know. They sound good! :-)

Oh gosh neither one can look at the other and the both are peicing it all together at the same time. I don't know how Spike will react when he does pt it all together and realises she must have known it was him and had a relationship with him or how he suffered after she left him. All I can think is wow that God I'm not writing this lol and am just the reader because I get to sit back and enjoy it all the more. This is the best story on the planet.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's great to know that you're enjoying reading the story as much as I am enjoying writing it. I hope that trend continues. :-)

Well you have gone and done it again I'm misty a misty eyed Unbridled falling apart and needing a tissue fanfic heap. She's in the exact outfit he lost her in and his eyes lock onto the token of his affections his braclet to her. No wonder he left I think his whole world just exploded. It is taking all that I have to hold myself together for when they come face to face.

Author's Response: I know this will sound mean -- but I'm glad the chapter left you in a misty-eyed heap. That was exactly the reaction I was hoping for. Thank you so much for letting me know that the emotion I hoped to convey came out in the characters! :-)

You always top your last chapter and just when I think you can't make it better or make me want another chapter more you write something this good and I'm falling to the floor. This whole thing takes my breath away.

Author's Response: You're going to spoil me with all the sweet talk, because I am seriously flattered to think that you are getting so much enjoyment out of something I wrote. Thank you for the review! :-)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! And Ahhhhhhhh!!!! And Ahhhhhhhh!!! And a OMG!!!!!

She's back!!!!
Dies and then wants more!!!!!

Author's Response: Don't die yet! How will you read the rest? lol. But I'm glad you liked the chapter - thanks for letting me know! :-)

I give a hearty six thumbs up for part 2! Thanks for sticking to your original plot as I feel it gave a lot of insight. I will say I am happy to see them meet in current times though.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :-)

Oh My Goodness!!! That was just amazingly good. I loved how Spike suddenly realized that Buffy was his Elisabeth. Hate you a little for not letting Buffy say anything to him - can't wait to see what happens. I hope she puts the Scoobies in their place like they totally deserve - it always bugged me how they felt they were the only ones who knew what was right for Buffy. Please! Let her chew them out somehow.

Author's Response: Hey! Don't hate on the authoress, it causes writer's block! lol. But seriously, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing it. :-)

It's like Christmas whenever I see an update, for this story and I slowly try to unwrap the paper of your shiny chapter, only to get impatient and rip right into it, devour it, then go back and read it 3 or 4 more times to fully admire your brilliance.

Seriously, I feel like I should send you a cake or some other baked good in gratitude.

;)

Author's Response: Ooh, a muffin basket wouldn't be unwelcome ... But, uh, that's not why I'm writing the fic. Not for rewards or baked goods. Your review, and knowing that you like the story, is payment enough. Thank you! :-)

Hey. Great chapter.

I know I said that I hoped Spike will recognize Buffy earlier, but I pretty much expected things to turn up like you made them to in this chapter. After all, you had to take into consideration the entire story of S/B that took place in BTVS, and kept unfolding all those years.

I just think that if you didn't have it all already planned for this fic, in actuality Spike would rather sooner than later recognize Buffy as Elizabeth. I mean, when you live in a world of supernatural, time travel is not a thing too impossible to take into consideration.

Plus, you can also recognize a person by the words he uses most often, overall behavior, and some stuff that can't be copied - like moles or freckles in a certain place.

But I understand that you have chosen a drift to send this story to a long time ago, so I'm not surprised that it unfolded this way. I guess I just hoped that they will be together sooner. :)

Hmm... I wonder what happened between Spike and Angel in your version of the story?.. After all, if Spike thought that Buffy "looked' a lot like his lost love, he must have been pissed at Angel for making her fall for him, and I believe he should've been really jealous...

Hope you're gonna get to it somewhere in your story, which is still great.


Regards, and have a lot of inspiration.

Rouge.


Author's Response: In [my] Spike's defense, it had been over a century since he last saw her, or heard her talk, when he walked in on her in the Bronze in 1997. Also, I seriously doubt he was all about the mole checking. lol. I will be addressing some of this in the following chapters, though. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing. i know that the one aspect of the plot is bothering you, but I hope the rest will keep you interested. :-)

Really, You´re giving me one shock after another.
First the jump in time, again and then they never have the chance to talk to each other!!!!! Please, please, update soon!!!!!! This is evil.
My stomach ache is back.... LOL. ;-))

Absolutely loved this chapter, a lot!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oops. Should I send some antacid with the next update? :P Thanks for reading and reviewing -- and I promise, the next update will come as quickly as possible. :-)

Oh I can't wait for her to go and talk to Spike. Yes he remembered her at the Bronze but I knew it would not really make a difference till she came back because she would not know.

I wonder if the love they had back then will pick up, or if he will be mad at her for everything she knew.

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing! :-)