Great chapter! I can't wait to read more and I am antsy for the story to get to the part where he finds Buffy again. Looking forward to more!

A wonderful thing to see when visiting this site is a new chapter of this great fic! I like how you incorporated the story of the girl in the coal bin.

I thought you were never going to update again! So glad that you did. I missed this so much!

I surely enjoyed this chapter. You really are sooo good. Even though it is not Spuffy you manage to catch my attention to every word you wrote. I wish every day you have an update. I would never get bored of reading them!

Hey,

Where's the rest?! Lol. What's with the long break between updates suddenly? Inquiring minds NEED & WANT to know what happens next ya know?!! Update ASAP please! Great job so far, don't want it to end.

This is an awesome story! Hurry up and finish it!! I can't wait!!! :)

I just started reading this story. Slow start, but it has me completely enthralled now. I can't wait until Spike meets Buffy again.

Love Spike showing Angelus that he's learned a few things in his time. Fun for all parties. And Dru just being Dru. Glad they get to wreak some havoc together. Please, udpate soon!

Sorry for the delay in my review! I just moved. :-P

I still love this story and look forward to every update. This chapter was full of action. Action is not usually my thing, but you wrote it in a style that made it entertaining to read.

I do have a question about where you're taking Spike. From some of your earlier comments, you said that the circumstances under which William was embraced (having known love and acceptance) would change Spike. However, he seems to be pretty much the same vampire we all know and love.

Am I jumping to conclusions? Did I not pick up on some character changes in the last few chapters? Let me know; I really want to understand what you're doing and make sure I didn't miss anything.

Update soon, please! :-)

Author's Response: Some changes to his character have already been alluded to ... the most obvious of which, of course, has been his ambiguous feelings for Drusilla. However, several other deviations from canon are coming. You'll see what I mean soon enough. ;) Thanks for reading! :)

I absolutely love everything so far. Very good and an original idea at that, making Elizabeth William's first love :)

I can not wait to find out will happen next. I do hope you will do an update as soon as possible on this, please, please, please!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now, so it shouldn't be too long until I update. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! :)

I'll be honest and admit that a lot of times I find myself skimming through action scenes for a number of reasons,,,but with your fic...I couldn't take my eyes away. The Spike vs. Angelus scene was extremely well-written and full of visuals. I was able to picture them fighting almost as if I was in the same room with them. Brava.

And you replied back to my last review that I sound like an Angelus fan. :) I -love- Angelus, and Darla, and Drusilla (especially more in fanfic) so this historical setting you have us in with the fanged four is a real treat. And the fact that Elizabeth is Spike's first love makes it all the more wonderful.

It was great seeing an update from you, and I as always, I'll be waiting for the next installment :)

It is so interesting watching William transform into Spike. Can't wait to see how you will tie this all up!!

Please write more soon! I love this story!

I really Love your story! It's great! Update soon, please!