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Date: 05/26/2007 - 10:48 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Oh no. At least we know buffy can handle herself.

Author's Response: Yeah, she couldn't beat the Order, but at least she could escape them. :)

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Date: 05/26/2007 - 10:29 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Uh oh trouble in paradise. Awesome chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Date: 05/25/2007 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Thank God william did that. I didnt think he had it in him. Liked buffy and william having a day for them.

Author's Response: Buffy's definitely becoming a powerful influence on him. Bad, in the eyes of society, but certainly good for his relationship with Buffy.

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Date: 05/25/2007 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Great ending to the chapter. Damn his mom for interupting them though,. lol

Author's Response: Yeah, bloody mothers. They always pick the wrong time to talk. :P

Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I loved the poem. It was so sweet and beautiful. Im really happy that william told buffy how he feels and im glad buffy finally realizes her feelings aswell. Awesome chapter. I cant stop reading!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the poem. I wanted it to be in canon with William, but not silly, so it's nice to hear I achieved that. :)

Reviewer: Lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

What bitches! And what an asshole. I was so happy when buffy slapped him.

Author's Response: I have to admit, I liked writing that scene, too.

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Date: 05/25/2007 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Aw very sweet. Loved it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you did. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Yeah I def. dont like Cecily. Not that I ever did in btvs. Im wondering if shes gonna do something to Buffy during the party.

Author's Response: I've never met a Cecily fan yet, lol.

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Omgosh i loved it. I loved how william can speak different languages and how he can play the piano. I really like the sweetness between them. its so much fun to read.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you for taking the time to let me know. :)

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Nine

so william gave her the bracelet. I cant believe buffy didnt have the balls to talk to william about it. But im kinda glad she didnt. I love how shes starting to feel for him or at least it seems that way.

Author's Response: She almost surprised herself with her unwillingness to hurt his feelings. You're right, her own feelings for him are starting to develop. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Eight

lovin this story. great job.

Author's Response: I'm glad you do. Thank you. :)

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Date: 05/25/2007 - 04:17 pm Title: Chapter Seven

aw that was so cute. I loved how he didnt even care about the mess. Gotta love the shy type. awesome chapter

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter Six

I really like seeing the sensitive nervous side of william/spike. Its a character you dont get to see much in stories.

Author's Response: I'm such a William fan, and there are so few fics about him. I'm glad you like mine. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 03:19 pm Title: Chapter Five

Great chapter. I love how william was staring at buffy. Makes me wonder if theres gonna be a crush forming. Cant wait to read on.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter Four

Awesome chapter. Im so glad that theyve finallty meet. Im just hoping she doesnt tackle him. lol

Author's Response: Don't worry. She will manage to restrain herself for the sake of her job, I think. :)

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter Three

Oh im so glad she got that job. I cant wait for her to meet william and see her reaction.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter. :)

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Date: 05/25/2007 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter Two

Aw poor buffy. Im really curious on what shes gonna end up doing since she doesnt have the right skills,

Author's Response: Yes, she certainly isn't the domestic type, so to be stuck in a century when women were expected to have only "womanly" skills is not going to be easy for her.

Reviewer: lissababy4life Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2007 - 02:03 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter One

Wow this is a great start. I cant wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: HeldfastHope Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2007 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

This story truly grabbed at my heart from page one to the last posted page. This is a real jerker and a beautiful story of the most endearing form of romance. Even in his death and turning William aka Spike makes you want to love him in his pain and suffering and make if he has a hope for redemption it would be his love for Elizabeth that could make him change once more. This is a gifted writer and a must read for any Spuffy fan.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review. I'm glad you're enjoying my story. :)

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

No Daddy!
I hate Angelus in how he treats William and his so called lessons and were it fathers day he would so not get a card I tell you. Loved this new chapter it was really great and I cant wait for more.
My only complaint is its sort of hard to tell storyline wish how much time has past for far is it weeks or months?
I'm looking forward to his Flower child eating and Sex Pistols years :P

Author's Response: ROFL. Your "Father's Day" comment was just hilarious! I called my hubby over to read it, and we were both cracking up. You're right, though, if Angelus were my daddy I certainly wouldn't be sending him any cards. ;) Oh ... and in regards to your question ... I actually fiddled with the timeline a little after posting (I made this chapter begin in summer instead of spring). But, to answer your question, here's the sequence of events: Buffy arrived in London on November 5th, 1879. She was hired by Anne a little over two weeks after this. She met William a few weeks later, in early December of 1879. Cecily's ball was on January 11th of 1880. William's thirty-first birthday was on March 31, 1880, and he and Buffy became engaged very late that same night. Buffy disappeared on April 4, 1880, and William was turned on April 5th. William rose as a vampire on April 8th. He spent the spring of 1880 with Angelus, Darla, and Dru in London, before they had to flee to Yorkshire, where he began to call himself "Spike". He stayed in Yorkshire two nights, and then he and Dru went to Italy. They arrived in Italy in early summer (I didn't specify an exact date, but it would have been after June 21), and he met the Slayer ten days later. He and the Slayer fought most of the summer, and then she was killed. Spike remained in Italy until late Autumn, 1880, and this is where Angelus arrives and Chapter Thirty-Five ends. Phew. That took a while! But I hope you found it helpful. :) Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I liked how you had the Slayer show Spike respect in fighting and how it changed him in how he fought with her the principals and good fighting ethics when taking on a worthy opponent. He never went for a dirty move or a spineless tactic he fought her head on learning the dance. And he knew if he was going to learn from anyone he should learn from a master and right away you can see his admiration for her much the same later on as it would be in Buffy's time how Spike admired her for her heart and fight. Really a super job in writing this I and a huge fan of your William.


Author's Response: I admit I did draw on the very early Spike/Buffy interaction when I was writing the scenes with Emiliana. In "School Hard" Spike actually congratulates Buffy on a job well done (for dusting one of his henchmen, no less). He also was very complimentary of her when he watched the videotape of her fighting vamps in "Halloween." Even though his objective was to destroy her, it didn't mean he couldn't admire her abilities. I wanted this to be a part of his relationship with his first Slayer, as well. I'm glad you liked that scene. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 09:54 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

It is so sad to see Spike still thinks of Elizabeth in his fantasy of what their life could have been and how he wanted to bring her here and the life they might have had but I do not lose hope on these too to quote The Princess Bride "Death cannot stop true love it only delays it for a while"
I am glad he has Dru to be there for him even if she is not who he really needs at least he is not alone in this.
I think with Angelus coming to Italy it won't be such a bad thing cause show wise we did not know the exact location he got his soul back so it could be here and if so it will be interesting to see how his souling and treatment of William may or may not change.
Great updateonce again I am dying for more

Author's Response: In season two's "Becoming" they did actually name Romania as the location where Angelus regained his soul. Romania is in southeastern Europe, bordering the Ukraine. So, canon-wise, Angelus would not be regaining his soul in Italy. However ... I'm not exactly following canon here, so you never know what might happen. ;) I agree completely with your assessment of the Spike/Dru relationship. She can't replace his true love; he can't fall in love with her. But she offers him affection, comfort, and companionship; that's something he sorely needs right now. I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying that aspect of the story. Thank you for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: inkstained Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 07:38 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

This has such a extensive plot line it has to be a impossible undertaking to turn out a chapter each week and yet you do and it never fails to please me.

“Be sweet to me, pet. Love me a little while.” it is like they both know their not the loves of each others un-life but for a while they let each other pretend that they are as a comfort thing to two damaged used to be people.

Angelus will never let Dru go for the simple fact of her "gifts" that was the reason he so destroyed her to begin with. I always wanted Dru to get revenge on Angelus for what he did to her family and friends.


Author's Response: You're certainly right about Angelus not being willing to let Dru go. He always considered her his magnum opus, his great work, and to have her snatched away by some young upstart must be maddening for him. ;) I want to thank you for offering your appreciation of the frequent updates. A lot of people ask for frequent updates, but few seem to realize just how much work that takes. It really gives me the warm fuzzies for you to make mention of that. :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2007 - 06:09 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

This update is, as usual, awesome. I can't wait for the next one.

You know, I was never a fan of Drusilla or of the Spike/Drusilla relationship. However, the way you've written their relationship has really made me love them together and see how they need each other.

Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm very glad you said that about Spike and Drusilla. A few people have told me how uncomfortable they feel about this relationship. I think some readers feel that William/Spike is being unfaithful to Elizabeth's memory by having a relationship with Dru. In reality, it's his grief for Elizabeth that makes him seek comfort from Dru. Also, I can't imagine that someone as tenderhearted as William/Spike could look at someone as broken as Drusilla -- someone he lived with, someone who loved him -- and not feel some desire to protect her. Spike always struck me as a very nuturing person on the show, and I really wanted to convey that here. In my story, his relationship with Dru is more familial than romantic, but he does love her, and he wants to take care of her. And that doesn't diminish his love for Elizabeth at all. I'm glad you appreciate that and enjoy it. Thanks for taking the time to let me know. :)

Reviewer: vampid cupcake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2007 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Fantastic new chapter in watching William grow up into Spike!
Please more
:D

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it won't be too long until an update. :)

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