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Date: 05/19/2007 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

finally one of my old favorite fanfics updated. Yay! I wish we could of heard Miss Edith's secrets or catch more daydreams of Spike having about Elizabeth. I'm surprised Spike didn't see some similiar qualities that the slayer had and what Elizabeth was like.

P.S i know you getting as much done as you can but do you think the third part will be up sometime in this summer? I can't wait. But i'm still having a blast reading your version of William's journey with Dru and Angelus.

Author's Response: So far, I'm averaging one chapter a week (give or take) and if Part II will be as long as I think, then I will probably start Part III in as early as 10 weeks. Of course, this is barring any unforseen problems that prevent me from writing. I'm glad to hear you're so eager to read the third part, but I hope you continue to enjoy the one we're on. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: spuffyfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

I love this story. I like spike and dru. Of course not as much as spuffy. But I always thought spike and dru were special. Cause here you have two vampires who seem so into each other.

keep up the wonderful work.

Author's Response: I agree with you. Although I'm die hard Spuffy, I really liked the relationship he had with Dru. Although she was broken and unfaithful, they obviously had a huge amount of affection for each other. And I loved how he took care of her and protected her. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five

Love it more please.

Author's Response: I'm working on it. Just keep your eyes peeled. Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

“Of course, it isn’t something even to be considered,” continued Darla. “Drusilla, surprisingly enough, had a rare moment of lucidity."

Hee. I love Darla. Did she say this on the show or was it something you made up? Because it's definitely a Darla-esque thing to say. Overall though, I really am enjoying how you're writing her. She's one of my absolute favorite characters and you're definitely doing her justice.

This story is really taking shape and with the help of Angelus, Drusilla, and Darla, William's transformation to Spike is coming along quite well. I can't wait to read his take on the slayers,especially since little does he know in a matters of years, he'll realize the love of his life is one.

Besides loving this story, I'm also loving the fact that you respond to the reviews we post. It makes the story more real to me, reading your insight. The story itself seems difficult to write because of it's rich detail, so I just want you to know how grateful I am that you're sharing it with us, and that you're taking the time to write back when we review :)

Author's Response: I made that line up. I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks so much for mentioning my responses to the reviews. I was wondering if anyone actually read them, lol. I love how you guys take time to break down the chapters and tell me what you like (or, even dislike) about each one. My new chapter is at the Beta's right now, so hopefully it won't be too long until I can update. I hope you like the new chapter when it comes!

Reviewer: Constance Truggle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2007 - 05:16 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

Awesome! Brilliant chapter. Them leaving as they did was wonderful. Does he find the Slayer? Or does she pass before he gets to her? Is that how he ends up in China during the Boxer Rebellion? Because the Italian Slayer died? Hmmm.. More great transitioning into Spike becoming his own vamp. His reputation is becoming increasingly well earned, and Angelus.. ouch! That's hilarious, how Spike put him down and all, unmanning him, after a fashion. He's such a pussy! LOL! Love it and waiting for more.

CT.

Author's Response: Not many people have mentioned Spike mocking Angelus' manhood (I think the North London scene garnered more attention) but I laughed at Spike's cockiness there. He could have let the rape cow him, but instead he's using it as a weapon against his grandsire. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 04:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four

So Spike found out about slayers... and is willing to try to fight them. He fights for the joy of the fight, to pit his strength against the slayer. And so it begins...
~ Caught up at last. Looking forward to Part III because Part II is harder for me to read; I don't like S/D even if this is endurable and I'm sure Part III won't be walking straight into fluffy spuffy.

Author's Response: I'm sorry it's harder to read, but I understand why. I promise it will be worth the wait when Part III comes. Althought you're right, it won't be fluffy. ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three

Oh my.. it almost seemed as if William had a death wish. And regarding the names, William died that night.
But it's easier for him to make Angelus angry for not obeying.

Author's Response: A death wish is a good name for it. He's a man with nothing to lose at this point, and he's acting accordingly. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

William likes to read himself in the papers... he plays a dangerous game. Too dangerous; Angelus happened. *big sigh* And this is the start of Spike the mastervampire. In this way that he doesn't want to do what Angelus says any longer, nothing more.

Author's Response: Yeah, Angelus doesn't temper his punishments when he's angry. It's a hard thing to recover from, but Spike ultimately learns from the experience, which it good. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 03:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One

And William is becoming more and more Spike. I'm sorry for him he lost the book. I'm not sure if the ring is save either.

Author's Response: Possibly not, but he's going to guard that ring carefully in the future. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty

I'm glad too he hasn't forgotten Elizabeth, even dreamed of her. I wonder (but I'll read I guess) how the third part will be, if he'll recognize Elizabeth in Buffy when he sees her the first time. But Buffy from the past (the younger version of her) who didn't go back in the past, how can she knew him... and so on.
I know I should but I can't feel sorry for Archer. He deserved to be punished. Too bad for him it happened in this way.

Author's Response: It would take a lot more than vampirism and the passage of a few months to make him forget Elizabeth. And like I said, despite the darkness of this part, in remains a romance at heart. I'm glad you liked that scene. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine

I'm glad William kept the ring and the book (and doesn't intend to share (give) the ring with Drusilla.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

And I fear that is were the Spike/Dru part will take place. Yeah... unavoidable. ~ I'm glad that William still remembers. His past life and Buffy. Yet that will it make harder for him to accept what he is now. I wonder if he still has the ring.

Author's Response: Yes. Although the dynamic of their relationship has changed from the canon of the show, Dru and Spike will be together. I hope it's not too hard for you to read. I know some readers are getting a bit squicked out by it. :P Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Uh-huh... William did go overboard with the thought of Buffy gone. If the other had only knew that Buffy was his fiance *sigh*. And now we see Drusilla. I guess we all know what is about to happen. William will think that Buffy is dead. What will Spike think? *one more chapter for now*

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 12:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Awe, cute (William selecting ring after ring but not one is good enough *g*).
Oh noooo now it happened when nobody did think it would. They (Willow probably) brought her back. I wonder if William, Anne and the others will keep their memories of Buffy. And good there are more chapters. (So no saving of William now to become a vampire, huh?

Author's Response: Unfortunately, not. :( Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:54 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Oh she explained and said yes :) That's what William wanted. And he is making sure that she has no other chance then marry her :) Loved it... I wonder if it will ever be a problem for William that Buffy isn't a virgin like he things? Guess not, because he will think he is the reason. ~ The poem? That was scary... (if you know the background of Buffy here). I wonder if Buffy will vanish before William becomes Spike (that being part of the reason).. ~ Till later.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:31 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Four

Oh that's it: Buffy said no when William wanted to marry her. And he doesn't know her reasons, maybe he would have understand and then tried to changer her mind *sigh*
I wonder if she can make it right like she thinks... not as easy as washing the glasses.

Author's Response: She does a fair job making it up to him, I think. A litte orthodox, maybe... Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three

Buffy overheard Anne and William? Ah well you know the saying. Good compromise to improve her behavior. A small prize.... Oh Buffy slipped, she told him of cars. ~ Oh I wonder what Buffy did do know.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2007 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Anne is very much Victorian. What she thinks is old-fashioned but not for her, for her it is the right behavior. If William only knew what Buffy was really hunting and what she wants to prevent.. It's hard for William to find a balance between the way he thinks because he was raised in Victorian times and his wish to let Buffy be herself.

Author's Response: You're certainly right about that. William loves Buffy for who she is, but he has a hard time reconciling that with his training of what a woman should be. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oh yeah for sure the man that talked to William. Seems they did more than talking considering the state of his face. But Buffy is used to playing nursemaid :) I wouldn't say they are better now after talking but at last better then the day William went away.
Till next time :)q

Author's Response: No, they needed a lot more than a few words to fix what was wrong between them. But at least in this chapter, they set their feet to the right track,

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

William is there now but who was talking to him now? ~ So William made his way home. I'm glad Buffy was able to talk to him. Ah that's his secret. Didn't expect that. But something is still off. The man that talked to William at be begin of the chapter maybe.

Author's Response: I'm glad you didn't expect it. That was one of my little secrets, all along, and I was hoping no one would guess. :P Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh my.. Buffy hasn't patrolled or trained too long. Angelus is better then her. William noticed in his dream? So what about Buffy's dream of his turning? Only a dream....
Oh bad... the girls are there too. She can't take three vampires (this vampires) alone. She was lucky, daylight was fighting with her. I wonder how things regarding four vampires have changed now from the future (past) Buffy knew.

Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy had a hard enough time with Angelus in season two, when she was in relatively good fighting form. Without the daylight on her side, I doubt she could have escaped him here.

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Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

I wonder what William thought about, what he has to confess. Oh things don't go well for Buffy when she had to stay behind. She never saw before how different she and William are, their background. And now she is going slaying again? Does she intend to kill Dru to avoiding William's turning? *reads on*

Author's Response: No, Buffy, unfortunately, was judging him by modern standards. Victorians, of course, handled sex much differently. ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

A lot changed for William but Buffy didn't notice because he didn't tell. Closed doors or loosing money. ~ Things changed? Oh this changed. Buffy underestimated William, he is still Victorian. Oh my I wonder what that will mean. For once that he went away immediately.

Author's Response: Poor William. He tries to protect her from unpleasantness, but I'm afraid this might come back to haunt him in the future. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Livvy acted oddly? Oh William ordered to be quiet. I wonder if that will be bad for Buffy's position in the house. ~ And he told her he loved her but Buffy wasn't able to say something similar back.. must have been a disappointment of sorts for William. He is indeed breaking several rules for her. The 'Higher Society' won't accept this behavior. Won't that make William's life there harder? Though I hope not. ~ Oh Archer.. the first to disturb the happy bubble. He had it coming even if it will things worse for William. Oh! Buffy said it back; I wonder if William did hear it.

Author's Response: Yeah, he's getting himself into a whole mess of trouble, flaunting her around society when they so obviously consider her beneath them. I think he's just reached the point where he doesn't care about anything except her. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I hope William will talk to Buffy again and tell her what he told Anne. Because otherwise their stories will be different :) Yeah, Buffy was indeed the talk of the evening. Anne didn't say a word yet if they like the thought of William courting Buffy. The rose was very romantic.q

Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so. Thank you. :)

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