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Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 09:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I'm always so excited to see more of this story come up and its as excellent as ever I cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's always a pleasure to read your reviews. :)

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Fantastic read as always. You never disappoint.

Very well explained the reason why he doesn´t want to continue torturing his victims. Make very much sense with the Spike from canon.

I like very much the way you are creating Spike. Before I read your story I had always wondered why he changed his name to Spike. I mean I new from canon that it had to do with the railroad spikes he put through his victims head, of course. But I couldn´t understand why he didn´t remain William the Bloody. I mean why he had to renegade from his name. But the way you explained it, With the loss of his own identity where Angelus is telling him that he is not William anymore, his confusion and at the same time his search for a new identity.
He is so acting like at rebel teenager... The change of image, the change of accent, the cigarettes, the cockiness , the giddiness, and most of all the not thinking about the consequence of his actions.:

When Angelus says:

“You dumped that Havisham person in a manure pile outside a livery less than a block from here!”

William had forgotten about that.

“Well, I’m willing to admit that one was rather reckless—”

It almost made me laugh. I could just see Spikes face in front of me with that particular expression of his when he just found out that he made a mistake and his "ups" attitude about it.
And there is nothing that angers a parent more than when a "snotty child" answers back and doesn.t have respect for his elders.

And here Angelus was the angry father, who just got struck by his disrespectful son...

It´s said that most of the times rape is more about dominance than sex, even though it was creepy to read. Specially afterwards when William thinks about it as something not planned but anticipated, Like that Angelus was waiting for an excuse to do just that to him... The times he woke up and Angelus was starring at him. "Uff"

The last sentence of the chapter was very interesting:
"I don´t have to do what you say, anymore"
Can´t wait to see what happens next!!!!!




Author's Response: That rebellious teenager analogy is absolutely perfect! In the early weeks, William was like a wide-eyed boy following Angelus' lead. Now, he's starting to think for himself, explore his own indentity. Naturally, Angelus isn't really pleased about the burst of independence. He liked having a *student* but he wants to avoid having *competition.* And you're right, rape is about dominance and control, not about sex. Sex is just the most extreme way to control someone...you're taking their most intimate act and taking it by force. I know it was not the most pleasant thing to read about, but your grasp on the dynamics of it is perfect. Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I always love hearing your thoughts. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

GROSS!!!! WAT A BASTARD!!!!!!!! but of course angelus was going to be a bastard. im so glad that spike/ william hates him, i didnt like him liking angelus, it was unnatural. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. im so sad that william has put buffy and the ring to the back of his mind, but as long as he holds on to the love he feels for her its all good. i really hope that william/spike continues to get stronger and go against angelus and not love dru. also i hope that soon enough spike and buffy will meet again and that wen they do things work out well. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: I know it was a hard scene to get through, but I'm glad I didn't chase you away. :) I think it was only natural for William to cling to Angelus at first. After all, Angelus played "father" to him in his earliest days as a vampire. But it couldn't last. William/Spike is much too intelligent to allow himself to be bullied. Although he's struggling to put Buffy into the back of his mind, you're right, he does love her. In a way, he's showing love even when he's trying not to think of her, because he doesn't think he's worthy of her memories now. I'm glad you liked the chapter and thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

And here ends the "friendship" between Spike and Angelus...

Author's Response: Couldn't last forever. :P

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

An undeniable event. So well placed into the history. Still so very dark. A marvelous chapter. Anger can be such a strong motivator. I wonder how he will change now.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2007 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Poor William, Angelus is such an ass. William sure is changing.
I am loveing this story, it keeps getting better and better! Your doing a great job!

Author's Response: William is adaptable, which is probably a good thing, considering how different his life is now. I'm glad you like what he's changing into. Since we all know that the end result is Spike, I'm really glad to hear that I'm doing the character justice. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Spike revelling in the notoriety was beautifully described, and you conveyed his sense of pride in his accomplishments without making me lose sight of his sense of William. His disconnect from Drusilla makes sense and is working in the context of the story. Angelus' brutality was vivid and awful, but its aftermath, Spike realizing the attack was calculated, chilled me to the bone.

This is a wholly different portrait of Spike, Angelus and Drusilla than I am used to reading, and I'm enjoying your take on the dynamic.

Author's Response: I actually really had a hard time coming to terms with this chapter. I finished it several days ago, but the scene between William and Angelus disturbed me so much, I had to take a step back before proof reading and sending it to beta. I know it was a hard thing to read about, as well. But things could go no other way between them. I'm glad you see that, and that you are still enjoying the story. As always, thank you for the wonderful feedback. :)

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

i honestly hope that spike/buffy meet up soon. i'm really glad to find that spike has finally realized that he doesn't have to be the obedient puppy to angelus dru or darla, more power to him. you are doing an excellent job with this story and i can't wati to read more, update soon? i'll give you a cookie!

Author's Response: Ooh. Cookies? I like cookies! Thanks for the review. ;)

Reviewer: You_gotta_love_bite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

With all stories there are the higest highs and the lowest lows when you wanna snatch the people right out of the book and keep them from being hurt and this was one of those pages. You took a horiffic act and made it into something that will make a change in William to take a stand for himself and make some changes. This was hard to read with his morning Elizabeth and his exceptance of his current life and then end it on a tidal wave but all bad things can lead to better times a head.

I love reading this it is a huge underdating and you never disappoint.
Four stars in my book

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm incredibly flattered that you feel that way. :)

Reviewer: Burns2Touch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 09:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

That is right you do not have to do what anyone says! Leave them Spike they are gross!

The more he is with them the more he sees hes not one of them and should never be.

Evil or not hes not like them no rshould he be.

More please!!!



Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter, now. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: SaundersFrench Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

THat was a lot to take in and go through and it left me feeling so bad for new Spike I hope he comes back and gets even.

Author's Response: I know it was difficult to read (it definitely wasn't fun to write) but there was no other way it could have gone. I'm glad to see it hasn't scared you off, though. Thank you so much for your review. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Such a fantastic chapter. The writing is so real and its so easy to picture everything in your minds eye. There are sort of no words to describe Angelus but a soft burning hatred wouldn't be far off. It was heartbreaking to read Drusilla finding that he mumbles Elizabeth's name in his sleep. Love that he fought back when Angelus was about to say her name.
Great update, was so happy to see it there, can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, squawks. :)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I haven't left a review in quite some time I think, but I tell you right now your story still has my utmost attention. I really love that you are going into detail about William's transformation into Spike. His thoughts and dealings with Angelus are spot on--a great account of a character going from point A to B. Thank you for taking the time to do it.

Plus, great savagery . A personal highlight for me as it helps illustrate character change.

Author's Response: Thank you, B. I'm glad to hear from you again. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Hohoho-- so there's where Spike and Angelus' friendship ends. Quite makes sense-- seems to be the style of Angelus and that violation could have made Spikek go either way (into submission or insolence). Didn't expect that until about 2 paragraphs before, but it fit perfectly in. This story really could have happened-- I'd rather Buffy taken this route!!! Can't wait for more, love this fic so much and it's impossible for me to tell you just how amazing it is. Have to go, hope to see an update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Devin. I always love reading your reviews and I hope I continue to meet your expectations in the future. :)

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 07:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

This is fascinating! What a compelling story!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

Wow! This was an exceptionally well written chapter. I look forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I was wondering when they will stop being the best of pals. good chap.

Author's Response: Well, it definitely couldn't last forever. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

good chapter, look foward to his reunion with Buffy

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

"Unlike Angelus, who employed the method quite often, torture was something William reserved only for those who deserved it. "

Oh yes this makes William so much better than Angelus. Fanfic cliche #99483936859958

Author's Response: Flame: reviewer cliche #1 Unless you have something interesting to say in the future, I suggest you keep your mouth shut. Otherwise, I will delete your review. Interesting that you should think that I believe William is "so much better than Angelus." I actually love Angelus; he is one of my favorite characters. Yet CANON shows that he enjoys torturing and playing with his victims. Does this make him "worse" than William/Spike? Not necessarily. But it does make him different. If you can't distinguish the difference, I suppose that is your own problem.

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

yay. more please. i love you!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Inarra Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 04:52 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I knew this was coming... but it does not make it any easier... great great chapter... update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it despite the dark content. :)

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I dont' know what to say but wow.

Author's Response: Wow works for me. Thanks :)

Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

The poor horro and shock lying there on the floor as to what just happened to him even I wished someone would save him from having this happen. I knew sooner or later Angelus would go after him but I did cry for this to happen I hope lighter times are coming for him.

You always make me have a emotional reaction to reading your work and I want to thank you for it. Thank-you!

Author's Response: I know it was a hard chapter to get through, Gutter Glitter, but I'm so glad you are continuing to read. Thank you so much for the kind review. :)

Reviewer: agora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

wow. that was bloody fantastic. you're a great writer!

Author's Response: Thank you! How nice of you to say! :)

Reviewer: inkstained Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two

I'm not sure who makes me want to throw up more Angel or Darla, and Drusilla is just everyones victim so it is hard to feel anything but bad for her I hope this hate for Angel fuels Spikes fire and he comes into his own. This was horrrible to see happen to William but that is the thing he isn't William anymore it is Spike with only small pieces of William left inside. I like your story of the William to Spike process and how you tell it. Great job :)


Author's Response: You're right. Dru is just a hapless victim in all this. For the moment, it's Darla and Angelus who are calling all the shots. Whether that continues or not remains to be seen. Anyway, I'm really glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review. :)

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