I wanna cry but I won't because I know there is a huge plot twist here in effect. Love your story and style!

Poor misguided Spike. Now it's all hitting the fan and what is he to do.

He's running to check on her I just know it! Bring on the happy :D

hold up wait a minute
GILES!
Giles did this? He set in motion all of this stuff in a way if I was Buff U would not know who at this point not to be angry with.

I'd fallen behind on this fic and now that I'm all caught up I can't wait to find out what happens next! You're doing an awesome job of showing the obssessive slope with glimmers of hope and love and it's all confusing and wonderful.

Sadly I've read that we're near the end with the story. Looking forward to how it will end but it's still sad to see the story go.
So Dawn is save now; bad (but expected) that Buffy thinks the worst first. At last she doesn't think that Spike did it himself on purpose.
And Giles suspects... (Spike's job). So he knows that Spike is the one that helps. More than the others did.
Grrr for Giles giving an ultimatum.
Good that Willow informed Spike, he was so worried.

Sorry, have to hurry because of a thunderstorm now! Enjoyed it.

I've been searching for you next in this and it did not disappoint so much going on I love it great as always.

“Don’t follow me.”

I feel so bad for both Spike and Buffy in how they deal with one another and just how Buffy won't even hear from him what happened just rejects him fully.

This was a vivid, exciting chapter. Spike's obsession grows and now he's dragged Dawn down with him. His anger and hysteria were awful to read. It's no wonder Dawn freaked. The eggs hatching was terrifying and exciting. Spike's claimed her, taken what he wants, and even that is not enough.

This broke my heart: "Borrowed time, that’s what this was, and he couldn’t enjoy a second because of that. He kept telling himself that he could make it under the wire, that one more paycheck would make all the difference, and she’d never even have to know about any of it. But he didn’t really believe that." Now Spike really has a reason for Buffy to hate him.

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^LOL^
Ok as scary as the opening was I had to laugh at the thought of Spike getting a ride to the hospital from a stoner in a wagon going 80.
Spike was so lost at the hospital ans riddled with fear and then Buffy just shuts him out like shes writing him off as just a evil thing. I want Spike to run to see on Dawn and for Buffy to at least hear him out everything he does is for her and then Dawn just open your eyes a little Buffy and see it.

((((((Right. Of course you did.” He was sarcastic. “Because that’s, like, the best idea I’ve ever heard. Give the insane, soulless vampire a little slayer’s blood to get him revved up. Bet he’s a real demon in the sack after that—”))))))

Why is it Xander can always say these crude things and no one really calls him on it but Spike is just soul-less and evil? Spike was in the wrong but his intentions were good I just hope Buffy can see that and not run away from it.
Excellent!