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Reviewer: ZzzHollowSleepszzZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Wow see I was not expecting to see him wake up on the other side of the coffin and you went the cool route and should his exact confusion in being turned. I'm sure this is the hardest part of the story here to write because you want it perfect but this is just fantastic I look forward to your nex edition in this. Great job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm flattered you feel that way! :)

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 07:53 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I thought your portrayal of Dru was right on the mark in this. Some writers hate trying to write out Dru and tend to over do it on her crazy or only stick to her lines from episodes but I thought you played her well.

Author's Response: Dru had quite a few lucid moments, as I recall. She just had a knack for making herself look like a basket case even when she wasn't behaving like one. For myself, writing Dru is fun, because she has such an unusual take on language and description. And I was always intrigued by the character, anyway. I'm glad you like the way I wrote her, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story in the future. As always, thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 07:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Aww poor William not realizing his demon side or that he's no longer human and still wanting to get back to his life and mother and his concern of her being worried about him and wanting to get home. More please!


Author's Response: Hopefully, it won't be too long until I update. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thank you for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Entropy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I begin to see why Spike seeks out slayers when your the dead and sentenced to a life forever without the girl you love you would seek out someone who would be the one person to kill you.


Author's Response: Very astute observation, Entropy. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Oh I love the fist days of his wakening, wonder what else is to come, where is home to his mother or with Elizabeth. Won't he be surprised when he finds her over 100 years later.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 02:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Your story is great.!!!
I was a bit disappointed in the beginning , that we weren´t going to see anything about Buffy in part two. But it´s true, you did write that the story would be of a novel length and what it would involve. So even though I´m the impatient kind of person, I understand completely your point of view. And something very important for the ones who hate the relationship between Dru and Spike. The only way he is going to appreciate what he had with Buffy and what he can have with her in the future when he meets her again is to experience what he´s going to go through with Dru, Angelus and Darla. They were the ones who made him "Spike" after all. So please update soon. Can´t wait to see where you´re going to take this fic.

Author's Response: That is exactly how I feel about the Spike/Dru relationship as well, akarinacj. Spike can't become Spike without Drusilla, and, because we *need* this glimpse into his past to understand him in the future, Dru is a necessary evil. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me so! :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

brilliantly written as always. I know this is going to be a hard part of the story to read but am looking forward to your interpretation of it.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are, jamies_lady. Thanks for letting me know. :)

Reviewer: Alex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Ahhh, the making of Spike... can't say I love it, but it's necessary in order to have him live until Buffy's time. Very graphic, but nicely done. Can't say I am looking forward to the "William meets Angelus" part though...

Author's Response: I'm sorry you aren't enjoying the metamorphosis of William into a vampire, but it really is necessary to the plot. Maybe you'll learn to enjoy it? lol. Anyway, I appreciate your willingness to stick with it. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Randie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2007 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

More please!!

Author's Response: Soon, I hope. I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

i love it! can't wait to read more on how william becomes spike, so please, be merciful and update soon?

Author's Response: lol. I'll try. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jordy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I was so happy to see this updated. Can't wait to find out what you do with Spike now. Especially seeing his reactions to Dru here. There are so many possibilities. Yay. Update again soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

I don't have any brilliant insights or anything at this point :), but just wanted to let you know how excited I was that you updated and how I'm really enjoying the story. I know this part is probably hard to read for a lot of people (and maybe for you to write), but it's absolutely essential and it's amazing to see William's journey to becoming Spike. Without this part, we wouldn't be able to really understand all the layers of the future Elizabeth/William reunion.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way, Anne, because that is exactly how I felt when I began writing it. I love William; I don't want him to be unhappy. But to be honest, he can't become Spike unless he goes through this uncomfortable process. And, as you said, we wouldn't be able to really understand him if we weren't there to see the transformation take place. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Inarra Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Just loving this story so much... I'm glad that William has no feelings for Dru and that he still has his feelings intact for Buffy... Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Hopefully, an update won't be too far in the future. But with my Muse, you never can tell. I'm glad you like the story and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

And right at a moment when no one is there to witness what happens to our girl. How beside themselves everyone should be. Tragic indeed, but not without it's brilliance. I cannot even imagine the aftermath this should bring. And Buffy's little inking as she said she would never leave him... I loved it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

EWWWW I HATE DRU AND WILLIAM TOGETHER!!!!!!! i mean im glad that she made him so that he can one day be with buffy, but i dont like them together. i understand that this is how it must be to get to buffy and willaim, and im glad that he doesnt love dru or care for her, but still i dont like it, im sorry i cant help it. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i really hope that william doesnt lose his love for buffy overtime and doesnt fall for dru. also i hope that everything works out in time and that william and buffy will meat up again soon enough. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: lol. Now, how was it that I knew your reaction would be "ewww"? I completely understand your feelings on the matter, sarah. Just keep in mind that this remains a *Spuffy* romance to the very end. Thanks, as always, for the feedback!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

You are doing such a fine job of this. The missing bits to all my imaginings of the story of Buffy and Spike, the way I would like them to be. I am finding it better to read than watch the show as it turns out the same every time but the reading is always different.

Author's Response: What a nice thing to say, Toni! There is no greater compliment than to be compared to the show. Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

interesting...i'm glad that william doesn't really love dru in this...or does he later? Hopefully not. Now that he says he wants to go home...he will soon realize that he can't go back...only forward. It would be interesting to see if you make William leave dru and be a vampire in sorrow for a hundred years alone...or does he give in and just accept that Dru is in his life now. The possibilities are endless here. I was really hoping to see something about Buffy here but i'll wait. So is this the last chapter of the past then? I mean or is there flashbacks? Once you go into the presend day stuff will you stay? I kind of want to see the evolution of Spike...well, your take on Spike and how if he never forgets Elizabeth OR just goes on killing and trying to forget. Update soon. PLEASE!!! This weekend or something? Can you give us a ballpark of when the last part will be?

Author's Response: Part Two will be exclusively in the past, no alternations between time periods. Part Three will be exclusively in the present day. I hope that clears things up? I'm very glad you like this story so well. I am going to try to update soon, but since I haven't even started on Chapter Twenty-nine yet, I can't say when it will be ready. I'm glad to hear you are anticipating it, though. Thanks so much for your feedback!

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 10:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Oh, poor William, this will be so hard for him, and I see he still is William, in his entirety. Do wish you would get thru this part relatively quickly, becasue it can't lead to anything good - except part 3.

Author's Response: lol. I know it will be a bit hard, Cas. But I promise, this part is integral to the plot. And don't let the warnings fool you. This story is still a Spuffy romance...with or without Buffy's physical presence. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

this is very upsetting. it pains me to say this, but i can no longer enjoy this story. i can't read about sweet william as a killer and with drusilla, it's too hard to get through. i might continue once you start writing about buffy in the present, hopefully that wouldn't be too long of a wait. i was hoping that the last chapter would have been the end of the past, that we wouldn't have to witness william after he was turned. i don't know why, but i was thinking it would just be buffy and spike from now on. this really sucks, i always look forward to the updates of this story, but now i'll only feel dread as long as he's with drusilla. i can't stand her and never will, but i do wish you luck with the rest of it. you are a great writer and i will miss this story dearly.

Author's Response: Well, all I can say is I'm sorry you feel that way, tasha. However, I refuse to change the direction of this story for anyone. William's relationship with Dru is pure canon...as is his birth as a killer. Without this, there would be no Spike. Let us not forget...Spike was once the "scourge of Europe.". As I said it my author's note, this story is and will always remain a romance at heart. But it is not a simple, one-shot fluff piece. True love is not that simple, and I'm not planning to simplify so that people can get their spuffy fix more quickly. If that loses me a reader or two, then so be it. But I am very sorry to hear that you won't be seeing it through to the end. I think you would have been pleasantly surprised. Thank you for your feedback.

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Oooh! Suspense!

Lovely update. I can't wait to see how the relationship between these two develops.

I think you captured the way William's turning took his soul but not his heart very well. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2007 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Eight

You are brilliant! Your story is very descriptive and thorough. Its like watching a movie, im so caught up with it!

Please dont take too long to update again!

Author's Response: Hopefully, not, Ochit. But with the muse, you never can tell. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for telling me so! :)

Reviewer: KitKat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/27/2007 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

::Leaves chocolate Spike candy at Unbridled Brunette muse statue::

Hoping for more chappie's

Reviewer: beanbeans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

This. is. BRILLIANT. Perfection. I LOVE how you've brought it back to canon. Oh, goodness, it's wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us.

Reviewer: ZzzHollowSleepszzZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 08:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Reading him blame himself for her disappearance was hard but so good too I can see how it changes him before he's changed by being turned into a Vamp. Very well written and exciting story here.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Such a bittersweet chapter to end William's life, he really had a death wish when Drusilla found him. Such a good way for Spike to know that Slayers harbour a death wish - he should know from his human past. I love the way you describe the surroundings, characters and emotions in this chapter. Looking forward to the next.

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