Ooooo! You almost have me crying at work this is soooooo good!!!
I keep sneaking every day here to see if you added more. I really love how you made William desperate for Elizabeth's loving or just to be near her in a room that he sensed something was coming and did not want her out of his site for a minute. I hate to see the pain they will go threw but it has to occur to get to better times ahead I think. As always you blow me away with this.

He's afriad she will leave and shes afraid she will go and then boom its happening just when everything was going so good. This is the best fic ever I don't know how I will wait for your next chapter. Have pity of a Unbridled fan0girl here and add more soon.

I thought it was so sweet he wanted the perfect ring to symbolize his love for her and searched until he got it right. It will be heart breaking for him to find her gone and I fear he will blame himself.

I'm begging for more after the ending of this page

PLEASE!

Nooo! Oh please update as soon as you can please!

I’m on such an emotional rollercoaster whenever you update this story: first, when I see the update I almost start jumping up and down, I’m so happy; and then when I actually read it I want to cry! Thank you for the update though :) (this is one of the few stories I keep up with—usually I wait to read them until they are finished).

I’m not sure if you mentioned this before, but I’m really curious to see how you will structure the rest of this story (I think I remember you mentioning somewhere that it will have at least 3 parts?): are we going to see William/Spike and Buffy on their separate journeys first (I feel so heartbroken for William!), or will we return to “the present” right away and see the relationship between William+Elizabeth transform to the relationship between Spike+Buffy.


Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, Anna. I really appreciate it. :) In regards to your question, yes, the story will be at least three parts (probably four, considering how my mental outline is going). We won't see Buffy right away, which I'm afraid might discourage some readers. Still, this story is and will remain a romance at heart. Part Two will be just as romantic as Part One, although it will have a decidely different tone. I hope you continue to enjoy the plot and, again, thanks for the review.

oh my god! nooooooo poor william. I've been waiting for this chapter to happen!!! poor buffy and william. Looking forward to the buffy and spike interaction now! love this story so much! more more more please! x

poor Buffy and poor William he's going to be devestated. looking forward to the next bit

NONONONONOONONO EVILEVILEVILEVILEVILEVIL


see, you've broken my brain! its all mush!! oh god i knew this time would come....okay, calmed down now.

let me tell you how much i love this story - at work today i sneakily logged on and saw that it had been updated but didn;t read it because i didn't want to have to do it in a rush, so i struggled through work, went to the gym and cut my workout down by a half hour cos i just had to rush home and read it...

yes, either this story is insanely magnificent or im just sadly obsessed. Both i think.

anyway, back to the review. What a fantastic update - this is one of the 2 stories i actually check to see if its been updated - and now i'm gonna be going out of my mind until the next one!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oooohh please soon.

sorry about the psycho review, suffice to say i love this story.

great update, great writing as usual. Thanks!!!!! : )

Aww, Aww.... Now, you´re making me cry... That was so sad... Is she going back to the future, leaving William alone????
The chapter was so nice and tender, with their interacting, You really potrait William as I think he would have been.... I don´t dare to imagine how he´s going to react when he finds out Buffy is missing.... Please update soon!!!!!!!

Oh noooooooo!! What happens now?!!! The waiting is torture!!! PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!!

Darn! Just when things were going so well, fate steps in and plays with Buffy's happiness. Just when she got her wish to have a relationship with a man and be a normal girl, she is only to have a brief taste of it. Good reading, really am enjoying this story, looking forward to more.

I KNEW IT! I KNEW THIS WAS GOING TO BE THE CHAPTER THAT SHE WAS PULLED BACK! Oh no. OH no! Oh NO!!!! We need more now. Oh PLEASE we need more now! I am hopelessly addicted to this fic of yours, this AMAZING fic of yours! Definitely the best "Buffy goes back in time and meets William" fic I have read-- and I have a feeling what's going to happen when William finds out that Buffy's disappeared.... Oh more. More PLEASE!!!