ho my god!!!! you have 2 choices one send her back , 2 make that spike will remember her , kidding do what you want but pleas update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hmm...I think I'll pick door number three. :P Thanks for the review, Spuffy. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I promise, I will update ASAP.

Oh, God NO!!!!! Poor William will be devestated!!

Author's Response: Unfortunately...yes... ::ducks and waits for rotten tomatoes to be thrown::

Oh No!!! Not now! They were so happy and now William will have to wait sooo long to see her again; he'll probably 'hate' her by then. So very sad.
I am really enjoying your story, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to tell me so. :)

I know this will sound rude, but It's About Time! eek, sorry, I've waited for this update! Oh boy. Well, better now she disappears then 5 chapters latter, when she still hadn't told William. If that makes sence. Now I'm waiting to see if the timeline changes. Then of course I'm thinking it would have been funny if she disappeared during sex. Don't mind me, I'm just sooo happy, a new chap!

Author's Response: lol. Sorry for the delay, this chapter was really difficult for me, for some reason. I think it was just my subconscious working against me because I didn't want to hurt William. lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, though. And thanks for reviewing!

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! Its been too long and i gotta know what happens!!!

I can't tell you how much I love this story. Your language, your characters, your setting--it's absolutely mesmerizing. You have a real gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.

What a beautiful chapter. Their first time together was so sweet. Though the passage Will read at the end of this chapter has me worried. Looking forward to the next update.

I just sat down and read this story for the first time. I really think this is an interesting idea. I have a feeling there is going to be some major angst in the future. If Willow were to actually pull Buffy back now she could well be on the way to having Spikes child. I am kinda surprised though, that Buffy hasn't tried harder to some how get a message to the present dimension. Maybe by placing a memory for Spike to recall or something similar. Thats just my active imagination getting the best of me. Your story is really great! One more question ? How long do ou think your sections are going to be?

Author's Response: Each section is going to be comparable in length to the first...that's all I can really say without giving away any plot secrets. ;) But I'm guessing this story is going to end up being very long (think "Gone With the Wind). I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to review! :)

Great Chapter! Is it bad that I want them to marry and Buffy never to return to Sunnydale?



Author's Response: I don't think it's bad at all, Serenity. In fact, I want that myself. ;) Thanks for the review!

So many amazing things happening in that chapter, with a most masterful and lovely reconciliation. Though I must wonder if smooth sailing there means for trouble elsewhere. There have been inklings of sensed trouble between those two before, how I do hope he is wrong again. And he will have her for his wife. Gosh, I just loved it and can hardly wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, BuffyRat. Thanks as always for taking the time to review. :)

was a little shocked she'd crawl into bed with him to apologies but it does so fit in with the Buffy persona and her wanting his forgiveness and her trying to show him her affections for him in her own way. I think it was dead on he'd have to be a little tipsy to even allow to happen, happen because of his *fastening up* all the time and sense of propriety. It too would make a great deal of sense for William to believe she had fears of marriage and that would be the only reason she would turn him down. With his views on how shy a young woman would be in those times plus in his state he would not remember that she was not a virgin with his own lack of experience in that area as well. I just hope he does not notice a lack of anything on the sheets at a later point in time.
Looks like a tragedy is coming involving his Elizabeth and his new found happiness may be ripped away I was reading the other reviews here and wondered myself if she will fall and then get pulled back in her own time or seem to die in this time and William would be in despair and get caught up with Angel and Dru. I can see him losing Buffy and then his Mothers sickness leaving him with no one in the world so being turned would be a blessing for him and Dru taking him under her wing. Ok I'm running way too many hypothesizes but then again lmao I just will not know till you add more to this great storyline.

Author's Response: Well, obviously, I'm not going to give away any plot secrets. ;) But I will say I'm glad you're still enjoying the story and I hope you continue to do so. Thanks for the review! :)

Very good chapter but then they always are with your writing. The complete and total awe after sex moment with William was very sweet. So much goodness here that I will just get in line here with everyone else and beg for more.

:)

Author's Response: Line? There's a line now? Awsome. :P Seriously, though, I'm very glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter. More is coming soon, so I hope you keep checking back and enjoy it when it arrives. Thanks for the review! :)