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Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh but you've got me so ready to yell at you...he just found her the ring and now.... :(

but now there's the question of what Spike will know about things and....if perhaps he'll have the ring (what? I can hope for things). I'm interested to see how things will be between Buffy and Spike now.......I really hope you can update soon

and now I want someone to go give William a hug...of the non romantic variety of course

Author's Response: Well, my beta took care of that when she sent me back chapter. So at least he's gotten a little comfort. lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I was hoping that she'd go home and have a confrontation with spike. William will be heartbroken. ~sigh~

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Holy crap, did she finally get sent back to her time? A part of me wanted that to happen, but another part of me wants her to stay there and hopefully have a happy life with William. Now I'm hoping that Spike will remember everything, but I'm thinking not much time has passed for them. Oh, this is so sad, I know how much Buffy didn't want to leave him. I can't imagine what William will think about this, unless something else happened entirely. That means you really have to update soon, the suspense may just kill me...lol! I love your story to pieces, can't wait to see what happens next=)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it that well, TammyAsh. Thank you for taking the time to review. :) I am definitely hoping to update a little sooner this time. Just knock on wood that my Muse behaves itself.

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

AW i love this story! I've been waitting forever for the update! I can't believe buffy is going back home. william will be crused! Plase update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh, this is heart break time isn't it? *Gulp* I better make sure I have plenty of kleenex for the next chapter. Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks, Fran. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: mwfte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

OMG! *Momentarily incoherent* :-O

Okay... Now that I'm over that little spell...

An amazing chapter, as usual. I was going crazy waiting for you to update! ;-)

I'm happy with the way you handled their relationship, and that they both recognise the need to be apart sometimes, even though they want to be together constantly.

I also really enjoyed William's ring hunt. ;-)

I am very much anticipating the next chapter. It will be interesting to see how the alternate timeline of William's life as Spike will be different. And I admit, I'm looking forward to their reunion, however pleasantly or unpleasantly it may go.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review mwfte. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm really sorry the update took so long, but I just couldn't get this chapter written to suit me for some reason. I think I rewrote it a dozen times or more! But I'm glad to see that the work paid off. Next update will be as soon as I can get it written, I promise. :)

Reviewer: spuffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

ho my god!!!! you have 2 choices one send her back , 2 make that spike will remember her , kidding do what you want but pleas update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hmm...I think I'll pick door number three. :P Thanks for the review, Spuffy. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and I promise, I will update ASAP.

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

ohh!! no poor william, they were so happy together and now.... well thats where you come in!!! cant wait to know what happens next, please update soon!!

Author's Response: I'm working on a rough draft of chapter 27 now. However, given the fact that I wrote and rewrote chapter 26 a dozen times before it was ready to post, that doesn't really say a lot. But I will try my best to be more prompt this time. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MadBrillianT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh, God NO!!!!! Poor William will be devestated!!

Author's Response: Unfortunately...yes... ::ducks and waits for rotten tomatoes to be thrown::

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh God, please no. I knew it was coming but that doesn't do anything to diminish the shock of it actually happening. I can only imagine how awful they will both feel when they realize that Elizabeth is not coming back. .I'm at the edge of my seat, waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, Dusty. I'm hoping the next chapter won't take as long as this one did. But who knows what the Muse will do. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

Oh No!!! Not now! They were so happy and now William will have to wait sooo long to see her again; he'll probably 'hate' her by then. So very sad.
I am really enjoying your story, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to tell me so. :)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

opps, sorry, I should have waited before I posted, so I would get all my thoughts in.

Of course, Poor William! The worst thing that could have possibly happened. I think Buffy jinxed herself...

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2007 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Six

I know this will sound rude, but It's About Time! eek, sorry, I've waited for this update! Oh boy. Well, better now she disappears then 5 chapters latter, when she still hadn't told William. If that makes sence. Now I'm waiting to see if the timeline changes. Then of course I'm thinking it would have been funny if she disappeared during sex. Don't mind me, I'm just sooo happy, a new chap!

Author's Response: lol. Sorry for the delay, this chapter was really difficult for me, for some reason. I think it was just my subconscious working against me because I didn't want to hurt William. lol. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, though. And thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2007 - 10:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Breath takinf story telling I have never read anything like it. I will say this is a must read for any Will and Buffy fan.

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2007 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! Its been too long and i gotta know what happens!!!

Reviewer: spikette55 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2007 - 04:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I've been away also, and have some time to read a little catchup. Oh poor William, he must see her genuine feelings for him truly and really not believe the lies. Must move on the next chapt. thanx luv.

Reviewer: Alia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2007 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I can't tell you how much I love this story. Your language, your characters, your setting--it's absolutely mesmerizing. You have a real gift. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: Dee81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2007 - 06:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Gah, I love this story so much. This chapter was just perfect in every way. Your writing and descriptions are excellent.

I'm so eager to read what you have planned for us, that I could barely contain myself. Wonderful job!

PS..Happy Belated Birthday :)

Reviewer: mellissa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

What a beautiful chapter. Their first time together was so sweet. Though the passage Will read at the end of this chapter has me worried. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: cereza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 10:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Wonderful. Update!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2007 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

I just sat down and read this story for the first time. I really think this is an interesting idea. I have a feeling there is going to be some major angst in the future. If Willow were to actually pull Buffy back now she could well be on the way to having Spikes child. I am kinda surprised though, that Buffy hasn't tried harder to some how get a message to the present dimension. Maybe by placing a memory for Spike to recall or something similar. Thats just my active imagination getting the best of me. Your story is really great! One more question ? How long do ou think your sections are going to be?

Author's Response: Each section is going to be comparable in length to the first...that's all I can really say without giving away any plot secrets. ;) But I'm guessing this story is going to end up being very long (think "Gone With the Wind). I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: jackson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2007 - 12:17 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

wonderful! love this story... cant wait for more.....please....please....keep writing!

Author's Response: Don't worry, I am writing steadily and I hope to have an update for you very soon. I'm glad you like the story and thank you so much for leaving a review. :)

Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 10:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

Great Chapter! Is it bad that I want them to marry and Buffy never to return to Sunnydale?



Author's Response: I don't think it's bad at all, Serenity. In fact, I want that myself. ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Barfoot-Spuff-tessa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 03:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

My friend has been threatening me for days to read this and now I know why it so good when your the reader you just eat up the pages and never want to come to the last page. I love the setting and the fact you made their romance believable and human like in their reactions to one another. I really am looking forward to what ever is coming next.
This should get the best fic award cause it stands alone.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, BarfootSpufftessa. I'm glad you like the story that much. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2007 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Five

So many amazing things happening in that chapter, with a most masterful and lovely reconciliation. Though I must wonder if smooth sailing there means for trouble elsewhere. There have been inklings of sensed trouble between those two before, how I do hope he is wrong again. And he will have her for his wife. Gosh, I just loved it and can hardly wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, BuffyRat. Thanks as always for taking the time to review. :)

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