[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Take your time, I know that I am willing to wait for more. I'm just happy you posted this. Because after the last chapter I was thinking that William got caught by Dru... I'm loving the story buy the way. When you can keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you for the support, Sara M. I really appreciate it. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
How could he resist her indeed. I do hope he does not try too hard. I'd much rather Buffy entertain him at night that Drusilla. Pleasure for him alone. I dool forward to the next update. Whenever that shall be.
Author's Response: He is struggling, but I do think he will eventually succumb. Thank you for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I'm so glad for their reunion and that tidbit of truth about her coming to be with them. But what did she notice of his face...
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
OHH HE LIKES HER TOUCHES, HE SHOULD JUST ADMITT IT AND GIVE IN!!!!!!!! i love this story and am so happy u updated. im os sorry to hear that youre having a personal crises and i hope that everything works out well and take your time in updates. i love that hes home and that he had a fight to protect her honor. i really hope that they keep getting closer and that their relationship keeps progressing well. also i hoep taht angelus, dru or darla doesnt find them and hurt anyone. please update as soon as u can, in cant wait to read more. thanx
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support, sarah g. It means a lot to me.
In regards to William, he is struggling so hard to reconcile what he feels with what he was taught. Given his nature, though, I do think he will eventually lose the battle. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I fthink these thoughts he is having about Elizabeth will come up in a argument and then she will think he does think lowly* of her as a girl. A guy can never have these kinda thoughts without them surfacing later at the worst possible times and I think when he thinks of what she did with him and then finding her outside the house barely dressed and then hears of her attack he will blow up at her.
PLEASEEEEEEE ADD MORE SOON :D
Author's Response: He hasn't had time yet to really process the fact that she was outside in clothing that was, for the era, was basically indecent. You're right, though. It will be addressed in the future, though in what way I can't say. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
How in tune they are. The way he knows her danger. No need at all to send for him. He will be home soon. Love that we ran into the three of them, how deep this story becomes now. I love it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way, BuffyRat. Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I'm not sure if I am thankful he was only beat up and not turned or more happy with his need to defend her and fighting and having her care for him after. Really a cute bit there about his glasses and so hot watching Will try to fight off his poet lusting for her cause you know if he gives in he wil blame himself I hope Elizabeth will notice that.
Author's Response: The Victorians were so intent on suppressing natural human urges that, for a passionate man like William, it is pure torture. I think if Buffy takes the time to really talk to him before acting, they will get through it. But whether she will or not remains to be seen.
Thanks for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I am so very addicted to this lovely story! I hope your life gets back to normal soon and wish you every good thing.
Author's Response: Thank you, Toni. I really appreciate your support, and I'm glad you like the story. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I really like how you write the longing of the time. How it was possible to want someone to distraction and be completely lost without them while they were away. A lot of work has gone into the fic and it is so worth it as a reader to come across something so unique in style and depth. I look forward to your next chappie.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, waS_A_wEnch. I did research the period to try and make the characters and setting realistic, so I appreciate your noticing that and commenting on it. I'm so happy you are enjoying the story and I thank you for taking the time to review it. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
He was slumped in his chair, legs spread so that she, on her low stool, sat almost in between them. Six inches from his crotch, five buttons and a lapse of self-control from taking that growing evidence of his arousal into her mouth. The eroticism of the pose seemed to occur to him belatedly, and he pulled himself upright, shaking his head slowly.
Soooooo William is capable of bad boy thoughts lol. I thought this was rather good
Author's Response: William is definitely a naughty boy at heart, he just works very hard at suppressing it. I'm glad you liked the story and thanks for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
There goes that not talking thing reaking havoc with their lives. I hope he returns soon. I don't imagine the staff is quite prepared for an irritated Buffy.
Author's Response: You're right, BuffyRat. The biggest problem between them is the lack of communication. William, especially, has never learned to really open up to other people. And he is so afraid of losing Buffy, it makes him that much more reticent.
Thank you for continuing to read and review. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
See I'm picturing Elizabeth on the other side of the door thinking about William in the same way both lingering not to leave. Beautiful and well done.
Author's Response: You really know the characters well, GutterGlitter, because that was exactly what I was picturing as well, although of course William did not know it. Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
I hope all of your real life issues work out okay, and I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter! Great, great development-- love this story so much!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way, Devin. I hope the new chapter won't be too long, and I appreciate your willingness to wait for it. Thank you so much for your support. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Two posts in one day I feel so spoiled with the Sunnyaction. I hope your problems are ok cause I love your work. Take care
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the support, Ula. I really appreciate it. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Hehehehehehehe he wears his glasses cause he reads alot that so made me giggle. I think it was sweet she cleaned him up and he let her and the fect they are talking is a good sign. I think it is good for William to experience his urges for the first time with someone like Buffy for she at least talks things out with him and he does not have to hide from her how he feels.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that line, Little Sea_Horse. It sort of just wrote itself, and I actually laughed myself when I realized what he said. You are completely right about Buffy being good for him. He has been struggling so long against his passionate nature, and she is just the person to help him understand it's nothing to be ashamed of.
Thanks so much for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
A little fantasy don't hurt a boy William it will be ok.
Author's Response: Well, he did have to grow up in a time where masturbation was thought to induce madness, hairy palms, all sorts of illnesses, and eternal damnation of the immortal soul. So I guess it will be hard for him to realize that fantasies are not wrong. ;)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Oh no he's wondering why she knows things that she does and does not think its right but can't help wanting her still. Excellent as always :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much tanamore. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!! Total fan-girl moment there and now I'm dying for mlore!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, I have a fan girl? That's so nice of you to say! I will be updating as soon as possible, although I'm afraid it might not be so quickly as you are used to, due to some problems in my personal life. But I will do my best, and I thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Gracias!.....Por favor no Angelus.....ese personaje es demasiado desagradable.
Much más romance....y dulce....Por favor!.
Author's Response: Gracias yourself for the review. :)
I promise I will update as soon as possible. I'm glad you are enjoying the romance of the story. I'm trying to ride that line between sweet and saccharine, and I hope I am doing a good job.
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 04:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Simplemente brillante.
Author's Response: How nice of you to say. Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Wonder what she say, who was that that talked to William at the train station. More please.
Author's Response: I just added a new chapter. I hope you enjoy it and thanks for reviewing. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
So this is what was his secret guilt I was wondering what more he was hiding but ahhhhhh you ended it leaving me hanging and trying to will the next page to appear. Loved this.
Author's Response: I'm glad you did. Thanks for reviewing. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
“No!” His voice was hoarse, as distressed as her own, but twice a soft. His arms went around her, one hand combing through her long hair as he repeated “No, no, no. You are not loose, or disgusting or unwanted. Please do not think I see you as such. I love you. I love everything about you. I love your impulsiveness and your spirit, your way of speech. I love all those other indescribable charms you possess. I feel as if I have loved you forever. All I have wanted—all I want—”
(((Best William moment ever)))
Author's Response: Wow, it can't get much better than that, can it? Thank you so much, Starlee. I cannot tell you how flattered I am that you feel that way. Thank you so much for reading this story and taking the time to leave feedback. It means the world to me. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I hope someday he will feel he is worthy of her love before he is turned for that will make him seek her out in the future as Spike I think. He will have known what it was like to be loved by Buffy so that he will move hellmouth and earth to get that kind of love back from her . Once again I have my socks knocked off with reading this wonderful story.
Author's Response: The problem is, if he does finally feel worthy of her love, then she is taken away from him, it will destroy him...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to read the story and offer feedback in the future. :)
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2007 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
I liked the part where he was so over come with emotion he does have a breaking point with Elizabeth and manners where he lets himself go and has a Spike like reaction. I was hoping/thinking there was more to their connection in meeting then just his Mother needing a nurse and them hiring anyone. It was nice to see William saw her one day and felt an instant connection to her for unknown reasons and just knew instinctively he had to do something to help her and then fighting his own feelings of not being like other men of his position of taking advantage of the situation and the guilt he had over his growing affections over her and to try to fight his feelings and do what was right. I believe he knows she is different from all the women in his own time and that too is part of his attraction to her. I really loved how you put the part in he felt he knew her for years and how hearing this Elizabeth realizes how much he has done for her it was really a touching moment.
Author's Response: He felt a connection with her long before she felt one with him, which I think shows how much more open and sensitive William/Spike is than Buffy. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I hope you like the update as well. As always, thanks so much for reviewing. :)