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Reviewer: Mephisto Waltz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 01:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Awwww I felt so bad for them both trying to struggle through this conversation they were having. But I do wonder what William will think later on thinking as to why she was outside in her nightgown and then when he learns of her attck plus what she did with him I just hope he won't add it all up and think she is a lady of the night or something worse. Great update!!!!

Author's Response: I think at first he was so bewildered, he did not really register her attire beyond the fact that she might catch cold from it. But once he thinks about it, he will certainly be concerned and confused. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing; I hope you like the update. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh my God. How can you leave it there? It's not fair. I love the way you write them both. I can feel every emotion and at the moment I'm feeling like I need an update quickly!!!! Please.


Author's Response: I was evil, wasn't I, Sam? Well, I have updated now, so hopefully you will enjoy it. Again, thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: tattooedsiren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Lots of hurt and misunderstandings but all the more reason to love William for what he has done. Please please post more when you can. I am curious as to why he is hiding his face from view.

Author's Response: I just updated. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: missouragirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Another excellent chapter! Way to end on a nailbitingly suspenseful cliffhanger! I don't know for sure what's different or wrong with William's face, but I don't think it's a matter of him having been turned (at least not yet!) because his breath is still described as "hot" on Buffy's face, and he's still wearing his spectacles, which he wouldn't need if he were a vampire. Plus, he hasn't had time to raise since encountering that voice at the station. Plus, he still acts entirely William-y. Yeah, I know it took a while for him to beat the poet/human into submission to the demon, but I still think there would have been some difference in how he acted, esp. around Buffy. Like, instead of being all repressed-Victorian about their previous encounter, he would have been pursuing her to do more because the restraints would have been off his mind.
Hm, I don't think I've ever offered this kind of...exposition...on a story chapter before, so sorry about the rambling, but I just had to say this, mostly to reassure myself...Even if William must eventually be turned and/or if Buffy must return to her time no matter what (which I'm kind of leaning toward as they're both so crucial in the world-saveage business), I do hope that the two have quite a bit more time in this setting, hopefully even long enough for Buffy to "deflower" the poor repressed boy and certainly long enough for them to become secure in the other's love for them. Hopefully, Buffy will have long enough to come to love & know WIlliam the man so that when she returns to her time and Spike, she'll be able to recognize the elements of his human self that he has kept and come to appreciate/love the new package of her old flame. Yeah, this is really rambling and really long, so I apologize, but what an awesome chapter and story...you inspire me to write, apparently!!
Keep up the great work and please update soon...I want to know what's up with William too (leaning toward him having been mugged or something like that).

Author's Response: Add all the exposition you want, I really appreciate the feedback. :) I just posted a new chapter, so head on down and see if your predictions are correct. And thank you for reading and taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Ooooooooooohhhh!!! He had seen here before all of this and went about helping her to a better place. Now I get it. Killer way to end the chapter please more and fast.

Author's Response: I just added another chapter. I hope you like it. And thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 08:49 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Now she is living in 2 kinds of fear one for William and 2 for her own safety from Angel I feel scary times are ahead and I'm loving it!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/29/2007 - 01:03 am Title: Chapter Twenty

AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

You are KILLING me, leaving each chapter at such a moment, lol. But I am loving every moment. Can't wait to read the next.

Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying it, thank you. :) I have just posted another chapter, so hopefully I haven't killed you yet. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review.

Reviewer: Ylimpacs23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

He's back and they are talking yessss.
But is he the vamp she was sensing? I am about jumpin out of my seat to see :P

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Just read Chs 19-20, they are both very good and I cannot wait for more. I am curious to know if it is Archer that did something to William or someone else? Eagerly anticipating the next installment!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, serenity. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be updating soon, so just keep a lookout for it. :)

Reviewer: ELLIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

OMG...what just happened. talk about a clif hanger....is he a vampire??? update as soon as posible!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. :)

Reviewer: RedheadedNemesis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I thought I'd go for a light Spuffy read and found myself in a novel ^heehee^ this is just wonderful and thought provoking. It makes you look at both sides of Spike like two sides to a coin the man he was and the man he will someday become. I like the fact you didn't blah over on William you made he human and you made him real, in that he is not dopey or a sap you man him a man of heart with duties and a love for his family with a sense of honor. Too often in fanfiction you see people mess up the characters and you done the opposite you gave them dignity and real romance and paint it in such a way it breaths. I am really looking forward to more of your work on this site you are really gifted.

Author's Response: lol. Light read? What's a light read? I notice a lot of time in fanfics William is portrayed as weak or effiminate, when with what they showed us on the series, I really believe him to just be sensitive. I wanted to portray him in canon, but also as a strong person, because to do otherwise seems unfair to the character. I'm glad you like him. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Dj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Dun sun sun sun sun!!!!!!!!!! Ackkk! What! End of chapter! What ! Noooooooooooooooo!!!! Must know what happened to him!!! Now!!!!

Author's Response: tsk tsk. Where is your patience, Dj? lol. Don't worry though, a new chapter will be along shortly. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Cia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I really liked this and am edge to see what happen next.
::claps:: Intense story telling in this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Deltanighthawk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Ok if I didn't love William before I love him all the more now for he saved her when he did not know her or have to help her. He is a hero soon to be a demon or not he is truly the love of this girls life and maybe soeday she will see it. How can I slleep now wondering if he's turned God I love this it is addictive.

Author's Response: When William said he was a good man in "Fool for Love" I believed him, so I wanted to be true to that in the fic. I'm so glad you like him and the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: GutterGlitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I had gotten a little behind but was finally able to catch up tonight and omg it was so worth it but now I'm biting my nails if William is a Vamp!!! Evil little writer woman you have me captivated.

Author's Response: Glad to see you back, Gutterglitter. And I'm glad you liked the chapter. I *am* evil, lol, but I promise I won't leave you guys hanging long. Thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Bel Canto Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Cliff Hanger!!!
So much to say and love about this so I will simplify and say it's effulgent. Please write more soon.

Author's Response: Effulgent is the best compliment anyone could ask for. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh em gee, what???? WHAT? You're evil, leaving us with that!!! More soon, please! I love this fic! Hot chap, btw-- their romance is great.

Author's Response: I'm nothing if not evil. lol. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story, though. And there will be another update soon. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

OMG WHO WAS THE PERSON TO SAY "WELL, WELL WELL" AND WAT HAPPEN TO HIS FACE!!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that they talked about it and that hes back, although i wished he would believe that hes worthy of her. i really hope that william is ok and that everything stays well well between him and buffy. also i hope that dru, angelus and darla dont find buffy and william and doesnt harm anyone in the family. please update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: I'll update very soon, I promise, and I'm glad to hear you will be eagerly awaiting it. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: B_Mac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

WHAT? What happened? What did she see? Did I miss something. How could you leave it like that?

Love the story. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: I left it like that because I'm EVIL. lol. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing; I'm glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

NO!!!!! Don't stop now, more. Please!!

Author's Response: More soon, I promise. :)

Reviewer: Ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

cliffhanger...
oh my gosh, and it's a good one..

please update before i explode from not knowing!


Author's Response: I have updated, please don't explode. You can't review if you explode. ;)

Reviewer: Ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 07:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

cliffhanger...
oh my gosh, and it's a good one..

please update before i explode from not knowing!


Author's Response: Oh, please don't do that! Don't worry, an update is coming soon. Just don't go and spontaneously combust on us. lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

eeeek! what happened to him? oh god its just too sweet for words!!! he's soooo gorgeous. I'm still worried about her being taken back to the future...heartbreak!!! you write the love between them so well. Can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. One of the great things about writing William is that he's such a romantic at heart, so that makes the story all the more romantic. I'm glad you like the way I write him and the story. Thanks so much for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Finally almost caught up to where I've read before.

Author's Response: lol. Yes, just one more chapter to go in that respect.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/28/2007 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Can not WAIT for more. Btw, loved Drusilla's comment about Buffy's future-- nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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