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Reviewer: Janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh I am lovin this it's starting to heat up with the gang showing up I just hope William gets back before something else happens!!!!!! Fantastic story

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 11:54 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

HOLY MOLY!! I didn't see that coming!! More soon please!

Author's Response: If you didn't see it coming, then I guess I'm doing my job as a writer; I never want to be predictable. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: MadBrillianT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

wow. there really isn't all that much i can say here. i'm just so surprised. i get that she's out of shape from a while of no slayage, but i just wanted to see her kick angelus' ass. (i never liked him!)

Author's Response: lol. Then we're different, MadBrillianT. While I never was a fan of Angel (he bored me), I like Angelus, especially in the flashback episodes. I had such fun writing him for this scene; he is just so evil there was no need for restraint. Be warned, he will eventually reappear...and be just as brutal as before. ;) Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: uber_doll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 10:38 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

I really think it's good Anne and Buffy had this talk and Anne could see how much Buffy did not want her to alert William of her being jumped it really speaks in volume of Buffy's feeling she is trying to hide for him. Now if I can just wait for him to get home to see her without doing a **squee** till the next update!!!!

Author's Response: lol. Well, a little *squee* can be a good thing; it might prod me into a quicker update. Seriously, though, I'm glad you are enjoying the story so much, and I really appreciate your taking the time to review it. :)

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

There is something more to their connection then just meeting in another time I think. The fact that William can sense her in trouble and runs to get to her as fast as he can but does not know why and her Slayer dreams of him really says to me that they have some undeniable epic like romance that even time and space can't deny. I mean the fact that even going back in time the person who finds her is Spike, well William really but even as William he instantly feels something for her and goes out of his way to make her feel more at home in his household and treats her more like a guest then a employee says to me he must on some level know she is meant for more in his life then any other girl they could have hired.
I think Ann seeing how distraught over William's leaving is a good thing, not that getting attacked by Angelus is ever a good thing but from Elizabeth's answers Ann can now see her feeling for her son and might say something to William that can help these two back on speaking terms. I wonder if with the servant's seeing her attacked and the gossip they spread with other staff members if this can save or worsen Elizabeth's reputation. But I think William will be extremely angry when he hears of her being attacked and goes looking for trouble.
So many new questions I look forward to seeing answers to. I love this story and how you tell it and look forward to seeing what you have planned for them.

Author's Response: You are entirely right about the connection between them, Kalahara. I had another reviewer on a different site ask me if William is psychic. To me it is just a matter of him being very perceptive and in tune to Buffy's feelings. I'm glad you feel the same way. As always, thank you for your wonderful review! :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

I feel like I've been checking every five minutes for an update and here it finally is. Please make William get back safely so they can sort it out before anything bad happens. Angelus at his best/worst could anything be more terrifying? Great update.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review. :) I hoping to update again tomorrow, so you just check back all you want. ;)

Reviewer: Missytheslayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2007 - 09:22 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Loved the Buffy/Angelus/Darla/Drusilla scene. Can't wait to find out what happens with those three later....

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

ERRR GOD DAMNIT WAT IS WRONG WITH WILLIAM!!!! how can he think that she would act that way becuase she felt obligated to, she loves him and he loves her, its wasnt wrong. i love this story so much and am happy u updated. i cant believe he left and he wont write to her. i really hope that he comes home soon and that he and buffy talk. also i hope that eveyrthing works out well and that dru doesnt find him and turn him. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: lol. Don't be too harsh on William. In the Victorian era it was thought that women were supposed to be sexless creatures--reluctant even to enter into relations with their own husbands. So, for William, it would be almost impossible to believe that she would willingly do it for no other reason than that she wanted to. As always, thanks so much for your review. I am so glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Poor Buffy! Looking forward to the next chapter....

Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: HazardoftheHeart Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Unique in it's telling this story has it all for any SpikeBuffy fan. If your looking for a story that has everything and true romance then go no further this has it all Unbridled Brunette delivers.


Author's Response: Thank you so much, HazardoftheHeart. I'm so flattered you feel that way about my story. :)

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 05:21 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

This was so good because you get to see both of their feeling and how they get along without the other around I think this time apart will be a good thing in the long run for them both. If Buffy does alter time in the past I say go for it because if she helps him unleash some of his passion as William it may change the Spike in the future and all I can say is hot damn to when Buffy and Spike hook back up in the future for it will be explosive.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, SpikesDeb. I appreciate your taking the time to review. Feedback means everything to me. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Love it, more please.
I feel sorry for BUffy in the fact that William would not acknowledge her.

Author's Response: More is coming soon. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I noticed I forgot to review this last time, I love it.


Author's Response: I appreciate you for coming back to say that. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Wonderful writing and I'm looking forward to when Buffy jumps in time again and how she reacts and if Spike will have the same memories as her or if she changed his history.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: Mephisto Waltz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Poor William he feels he has disgraced Elizabeth or made her think she had to do that in order to please him. And poor Elizabeth as well feels like she has molested him and they are both off alone in pain. Anne cant seem to figure out what is wrong other then they must have had a row or that Elizabeth has upset William in some way. I had a lot of questions while reading this like What is Will feeling guilty over? What were the rumors Matthew was talking about going on before Elizabeth got there? Argh! It's soooooooooooooooooooo Tune In Tomorrow for the next episode of Forward to the Past.....

LOL and yet I love it!

Author's Response: lmao. I never thought about that...but it has become rather like a soap opera, hasn't it? But it's a good soap opera? Right? ;) Thanks so much for continuing to read and review. :)

Reviewer: Daffodil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Amazing stuff. You really have a talent for evoking the atmosphere of the story. I do wonder whether what Buffy was reading is an actual handbook from the Victorian age?

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you like the story. :)

Reviewer: entrenous88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:31 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

In a lot of ways they really do not know a whole lot about each other they just kinda fell in love fist and didn't get all the background details. Maybe now that they have had this hurdle he can tell her what he is hiding and Buffy can tell him she's not from this time.
Oooooo! I just itching for more please add more when you can.

Author's Response: There is a lot of dishonesty between them. For Buffy, she is afraid he simply will not believe him and she doesn't want to burden him with doubts about her sanity. For William....well...it's something else altogether. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Janice Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Oh no Buffy! I feel so bad for her she feels he's turned his back on her and shut her out when really he just does not want to face his feelings and something he has done. I hope he comes back before she is sucked back into her own time I mean if he did come home and she was gone I think it destroy him and lead him right into Dru's clutches cause he would just not care to live anymore.

Author's Response: They are so different that misunderstandings are going to be inevitable. And you're right, if she gets sent back now it will destroy him. Whether or not that will happen....you'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for taking the time to review! :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

God this is gut wrenching stuff. This is so brilliant. Now William's all "bad and moody" and Buffy sounds like she's gone off slaying. Please please please update really soon and bring William home.


Author's Response: There will be an update soon, I promise. I'm so glad to hear you are looking forward to one. And thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: RecordBreakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:47 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Such heartbreak and guilt on both of their parts it's so sad to see. And what is this other thing eating at William? And "My best wishes to Miss Summers"? She is so gonna kill that boy where he does come home lol!
Now I feel all moody looking out a window myself waiting till the next new chapter lol !

Author's Response: She definitely will not be happy with him, that's for sure. But Buffy has a lot of guilt and self-blame as well. You'll just have to be patient to see how it pans out. ;) Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:44 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

TELL HER WHAT WILLIAM!!!
WHAT DO YOU NEED TO RELL HER???
AHHHHHHH!!! MORE!!!!

Author's Response: Ah, I love enthusiasm. ;) Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review. More soon, I promise. :)

Reviewer: Little Sea_Horse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Awww poor William he thinks he's forced Elizabeth into being some sort of harlot into his home and he just can't perceive a woman wanting to be close to him without being guilted into it out a sense of owing him. And you see him fight with himself over his own reactions to wanting her and thinking terribly of himself for doing so. I hope in time he will see it not disgusting for him to have thoughts of Elizabeth. Loving this!!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: iiinga Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:30 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Started this this morning over breakfast and a hour and a half later I'm blown away this is too cool of a read and it is different then most stories I come across and in the telling of pre-Spike and his life. by the last page posted here my heart was crying out for both of them. I recommend this story to anyone looking for a true romantic adventure.


Author's Response: Thank you so much, iinga. I hope you continue to enjoy the story in the future. :)

Reviewer: stressfordpoet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:25 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Sure my friend gets me started on this fic and now I am addicted to it. With him away I think Dru will show up or hurt the Mom I feel like she is watching the house or something cause Dru is always the unknown wacky to show up with evil when you least expect it.

Author's Response: Addiction is the best form of flattery, thank you! :)

Reviewer: uber_doll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/25/2007 - 10:21 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Wow and just wow is all I can say pretty pretty please add more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Soon, I promise. :) Thanks for reviewing.

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