

Date: 01/19/2007 - 07:41 am Title: Chapter Twelve
A perfect morning of tea and toast and a sweet update. More please I'd like seconds and thirds of this.
Author's Response: I'm so glad I helped make your morning better. Thanks so much for taking the time to review.

Date: 01/19/2007 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Lovely and charming - they both are. At the moment. That terrible time is coming, isn't it?
Author's Response: lol. That isn't very optimisitic of you.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
It's cute to see Buffy trick William into wanting to go with her and Buffy's dislike of Cecily and her knowing of Williams crush on her but the woman but knowing his feeling for her were more. And then thet both were checking each other out. I really hope we see more of the actual ball and get a dance scene. I really dig the old timey geel of this story it makes me think not all romance is dead.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
“It is rather nice,” he admitted. “And the ballroom is beautiful beyond compare. Yet I think I prefer the simplicity of our home.”
“So do I,” she told him, and he smiled.
Awwwwwww "Our home"
Author's Response: You know...I do believe you're the first person on three sites that ever noticed that line. Give yourself a pat on the back. ;)
Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the story.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Oh!!! this made my night! 5 dances! 5! Ok get your arms aroung the girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the show of enthusiasm. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Aww! That's so darn cute! I love it! I hope that this isn't the night in which William is supposed to be turned. That would be so sad! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you can! I love this story so much! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review. :)
I'm going to try and update the story this afternoon, so just keep checking back.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Every girl in real life or a Spuffy fan-fiction needs that moment where you walk down the staircase in a killer dress to your Spike er...William. With every new chapter in this story I never know what to expect and once again I am blown away with Williams every action for every small detail to Elizabeths needs it's nice to see that side of his character in a story. I hope to enjoy more of this soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Charles Archer now there is a guy just perfect for vampiring or worse marry Cecily!!! And a waltz is coming so William dance with your girl :)
Great update
Author's Response: Marry Cecily? I think that's a fate too cruel for any man. lol.
I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I started on this and just couldn't stop reading it
This is so beautifutly written I can see it all in my head like were there Excellent story
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate your taking the time to review.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I find Elizabeth not knowing things and William explaining them so endearing and him filling in her dance card and him realizing she wants him to dance with her was such a sweet moment. And he wanted her to be pleased with her dress so she felt she fit in. Love Love Love this fic.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review . I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I love the fact he doesn't want to go but will go to please Buffy and the fact she knocked his socks off!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
OMG HOW CUTE!!!!!! i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i think its so sweet that williams jealous when she talks to other men and that he wanted to dance with her. im so glad that theyre growing closer and that shes starting to see william for who he is and is starting to like him. i really hope that cicily or anyone else doesnt do something to hurt william or make fun of him and that william and buffy have a great time. also i hope that everything works out well and that dru doesnt turn william. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read more. thanx
Author's Response: I'm hoping to update tonight or tomorrow, so keep your eyes peeled. And thank you so much for taking the time to review.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Yippee - another chapter so soon. I get such a warm, glowy (if that's a word), happy feeling when I read this story - although I'm not sure how long that's going to last! I love it when it's so well written that it's as if I am watching it all unfold rather than reading. Please keep up the excellent work and update very soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking the time to review. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Love it, more please.
Author's Response: I'm hoping to update tomorrow or if not that day the next. Keep checking back and thank you so much for reviewing. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 03:41 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
So is this the ball he is turned at.
Author's Response: Could be. ;)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
There is much intrigue wrapped up in this version of William each page you get a little tidbit about him. From wondering if Anne picked out Buffy on purpose for William for some secret reason and "Yes, she's nice Mother" in a sad tone makes me wonder if something here is going on like he needs to be married or something and Buffy will do? And then too he's always hot, Ok now sure Spike is always hot but I mean in a different sense here. And what went on with the family friends that the Mom there doesn't like him. Lots of little things make me wonder with him to the point I'm almost taking notes. Hats off to the writer on this for you hve me guessing.
I give this story a 10 out of 10 everyone should read it.
Author's Response: 10 out of 10? I am so flattered you feel that way. Thank you!

Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Why does Ellen dislike William? Makes me think something happened in the past and also the reson he looked so panicked when they arrived. Man now I am just dying to see what comes next!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I got behind not 1 update but 2 but it made it extra great to read both together. I get a laugh every time Anne notices Buffy and William getting along I think she hopes that when she dies that she will know William has someone. Love your work and I so want to see the ball now.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm hoping I will have time to post Chapter Thirteen tomorrow, so keep checking back. I'm glad you are enjoying the fic so far.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Hello.
I began reading your story this morning, and just checked in again and noticed to my delight that there was a new chapter waiting for me.
Some of the language reminds me a bit of Jane Austen, which gives it a perfect touch of renaissance and romance, but not too much so that it becomes faux and 'wannabe'-ish.
William is so sweet, and I'm struck by the strong feeling I get just from reading it of what's beneath the surface. All the small hints andclues of something greater, expressed in his behaviour and slight insight to his feelings.
I find myself wishing that Buffy will never return to the 21st century, and that she'll settle with William and have several children with sparkly blue eyes, but I have a feeling you have other plans with this story, and I'm sure anything you'll do is great! I haven't figured out where you are going to go with this fic, which is a good thing - I mean, the plot is not cliché or transparent.
I'm looking forward to the next update, hoping to see sweet dancing and William/Buffy closeness.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 02:13 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
ahh slow & romantic, great chapter :) more please
Author's Response: Soon, I promise. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:24 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Oooooo! A ball like a actual date of sorts! Ok now how do I get thru the rest of the day at my job knowing theres a ball about to happen lol. Evil fanfiction writers you hook me in and now I'm like waiting on a new episode.
Author's Response: To be compared to the actual show is the best praise I can receive, so thank you very much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:21 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Faastly you are becoming my new favorite writer and I want to see more. Does she have a ball gown though? Or does whatsher face know she won't have one and invited her on purpose for that reason to make her look bad?
Author's Response: How flattering to hear, thank you. :)
The problem of the ball gown will be addressed in Chapter Twelve, which I just posted. I hope you enjoy it.

Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter Ten
Oh! Yes! A great updat to read on my morning break. I think with every new post I fall more in love with this story. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm trying to update every day, so hopefully I can continue to brighten your morning breaks. :)

Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:13 am Title: Chapter Ten
Awwwwwwwwww I'm glad they discussed the bracelet and Buffy wanting him to know she loves it. I think it's good for him to see she likes him for him. I don't think I've read a fic before where William plays a piano it was a nice touch and set the storyline perfectly.
Author's Response: The idea for the piano came to me when I first heard the song Standchen. It seemed like such a perfect song for William that I had to include it in the story. I'm glad to hear it was a unique idea as well as a well-received one. ;)
Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)