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Reviewer: SaundersFrench Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

k first off this was fantastic but I am so worried about Spike and his fighting more again on this same night I have a bad feeling something bad is gonna happen to him.
Dont leave me hanging!!!!!!!!!
Post more soon please

Author's Response: Well, your concern could be well founded ... Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Switchblade Kross Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Nothing makes the weekend like a FTTP chap. to read and it blew me away.

Preetty please add more

Author's Response: You're so sweet! I'm glad the update made your weekend better. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: SpikesDeb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

I got behind on reading this and was delighted to come across it tonight and get caught up you never fail to make each page worth the reading. Truly you are a girfted writer and a asset to this board.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to catch up. I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story and very flattered that you think my writing is so good.

Reviewer: Cryns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

their love is out in full for and effect in this - I cheered!
Glad to see your back and writing again.



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: vampid cupcake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

I loved this part---------------
“Miss me did you?” The words came out low and a little strained; they made her smile.

“Are you surprised?” she asked, indirectly answering Spike’s question with her own.

“Little bit,” Spike confessed. He traced his fingers across her collarbone, following the neckline of her shirt. He added, “Was a time when you couldn’t wait to be rid of me.”

“Yeah, well. Once, there was a time when you couldn’t wait to kill me.”

In their own way its their own version of flirting.
Great job as always you keep me addicted to this fic



Author's Response: Thank you! The paragraph you quoted was one of my favorites, so I'm happy you liked it as well.

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

I'm intrigued with their discussing things but especially with that one Halloween Buffy was dressed in victorian clothes and Spike did see her and they did fight and how Spike kinda didn't talk to her about that. Given this story you would think him seeing Buffy dressed as his Elizabeth would have throw him for a loop completely. I did love him saying if he knew the true he would have waited till 100 years or more if he just knew she would be there again someday.
I think her really would have waited for forever for her if he knew someday they could be together again.
The play by play in the bathroom with Buffy cleaning him up showed great interaction of how far they have come the line "Aww honey you stole for me" got a chuckle out of me in its totally classic Spike sense.
You have done a great job in writing out Dawn and the comical side to Buffy making pancakes and her little sister spin on that. And then moving into the tender moment she caught between Buffy and Spike and her reaction to it. So Dawn knows of what Spike is doing for cash or at least kinda knows, as much as he is willing to tell her.
I likd the wrap up at the end of this with Spike being able to see Buffy's reaction to getting the money and being able to comfort her in her time of relief and for him to be the man he wants to be for her.


Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing the Spike/Buffy interaction in this chapter. They're growing more comfortable with each other and beginning to behave more like a real "couple." Also, it was such a relief to be able to take a break from the angst. I'm happy you liked the chapter. Thanks so much for taking the time to review it. :)

Reviewer: Jahled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

This was so light hearted and full of fun I loved the part on Buffy telling him he looked like the Elephant mans uglier brother and Spike telling her she ran a ghetto too cute and funny for words i liked these past few chapters alot.

Author's Response: Hee. I'm pretty proud of the "ghetto" sentence and you're one of the first readers to mention it. Thank you!

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Warm and fuzzy is how reading this left me
I love what you are doing with the story and your even including Dawn in the good times. I am hopeful for them all and got a kick out of Buffy taking Willows 20 bucks for duck blood of all things and the fact she would tell Spike about it to share in the laugh.
Excellent post.

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a very warm and fuzzy time writing it, lol. I'm sure you guys were as ready for a break from the angst as I was. It was so nice to allow Buffy and Spike to relax and just enjoy each others company. And Spike, at least, was in seventh heaven, the dear boy.

Reviewer: SilentOne2k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

LOL
I had to laugh at the picture of Spike bringing anyone their mail plus being in the shape he is in. But this part killed me

Huh. Maybe that was why they looked at him so oddly at the bank. He’d known it couldn’t be the clothing. Humans wore that kind of odd-fish type shit all the time.

you keep me in stitches!


Author's Response: lol. I've got to admit, I had a great time writing this chapter. Spike was so lighthearted and, after so many chapters of angst, both he and I were ready for a break. I'm sure you guys, as the readers, were as well. Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: HolyMoley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

10 out of 10 I wrote a bigger review but it got eaten when I hit submit.

Author's Response: Gah! Darn review-eating website. Iol. Well, I'm happy you took the time to leave a second one. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Sunshine Blind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight




Breathtaking! Beautiful! Quirky! and closes with a hug! I love it!


Author's Response: You're so sweet. Thank you!

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Yah for less worrying, but it's sad that Spike has to keep that big secret.

Author's Response: I agree. Poor Spike is going to have a hard time keeping something that big from Buffy. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: Park it Peter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 11:03 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Tiger Beat references and cuddle time on the couch I loved this post it was a feel good one with a lot of showing of affection between the two Im looking forward to what will come next.
:]

Author's Response: It was nice to write a more lighthearted chapter. I think you guys were probably ready for one after all those chapters of angst. I know I was! Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: Popcorn Papoose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:57 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

This was a real loely chapter to read with them drawing closer and talking about Spikes past. I do see why he's leave out the parts on Angel no one likes to relive that kinda pain.

Author's Response: Leaving out the rape when he told Buffy about his past was an incredibly unselfish act on Spike's part. Yes, it would have been incredibly painful for him to talk about, but it also would have all but guaranteed a permanant rift to develop between Buffy and Angel. But he didn't want to do that to Buffy; he didn't want her to be hurt. So he kept it to himself. I was so proud of him for that. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:52 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

(Like a shot, Spike was off the sofa. He crossed to the foyer so quickly that it was amazing he didn’t trip over himself. Dawn could see from his limp that he might not be quite as healed as he claimed, but it didn’t seem to slow him down. When he reached them, he pushed her out of the way so he that could put his arms around Buffy.)

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE your Spike
Once again I am left wanting to just crawl into Buffy's house and spy on them. Can't wait for more


Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing Spike because, despite all he's done, he really is a sweetheart deep down.

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:48 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

This is almost a date for them ok ok sure he was all beat up and still bloody but these two never get close to normal it's my hope when she sees all he has done for her she will slip that ring on her finger

Great chapter!

Author's Response: I agree ... normality really has never had a place in either of their lives. And for Spike, it was even better than a date; it was being cared for by the woman he loves. I'm sure he was in seventh heaven over that. And I'm happy you enjoyed it as well. Thanks so much for the review. :)

Reviewer: Burns2Touch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:43 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

I think I'm behind or you posted 2 pages at once but what a great set of new stuff.
I love Spike doing anything to protect his women folk even when it is hurting him. I can see him fighting for cash given his past and I do not think its so bad a thing or too far fetched that Buffy would not forgiven him. Basicly he's fighting demons he is just getting paid for it.
I am dying for more so please spoil me with more of your writing anytime.

Author's Response: You got a little behind, I think. Thank you so much for taking the time to catch up! It's great to know you're still reading and enjoying the story. I appreciate the review. :)

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

I love this!
This was like a giddy fan-girl moment for me to read this it was almost a squee it was so warm and cozy I loved it. Even Dawn coming in and them getting a pizza was perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the new chapter just as much. :)

Reviewer: Starlee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:23 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

I fell in love with this story last week thank you for such a great story i am not sure where it is headed but i am loving reading where you are taking it

Author's Response: You are so kind! Thank you! It's lovely to know that you're enjoying the story that well. I hope I can continue to surprise and entertain you in the future.

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:21 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Buffy stealing twenty bucks and Spike joking with her about it was too cute I love how you are making them into a couple it is just how they world be on the show Joss would be proud of your use of his charaters.



Author's Response: I would be flattered to think of Joss enjoying my characterization. Thank you for that compliment!

Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

That’s what you get for ordering things out of the back of Tiger Beat,” Buffy answered.

LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I have to admit, I was rather proud of that one. lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Edwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:18 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Financially this is great news for Buffy but at what cost to Spike? I know he's a champion but I feel he is pressing his luck fighting again so soon with his hip not healed. I guess we just gotta hope all his 100 years of training keep him safe - cause its only a matter of time before Buffy notices his beatings and follows him or finds out - which will lead to some kinda fight. As always I love this story and how it leaves me dying for more splendid job


Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. :-D

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

Another fight so soon? Is that a good thing? Buffy pay attention to your boy cause he is gonna need you if he continues on this quick money fix path.

More more more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review. Oh, and I hope you like the new chapter. :)

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

OK Spike is giving "self-less acts" a new name and still I love him for it even if he is going about it the wrong way. I see why he is lying because he knows she wont take it from him and their new relationship is just that, it's new to both of them and both are trying to find their footing back to one another so I can see his unease in wanting to save her and trying to find a means how.


Author's Response: Yes, he might be doing the wrong thing but he's doing it for the right reasons. Somehow, I think that makes the deceit not quite so bad. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2008 - 10:14 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Eight

I'd be just as shocked as anyone finding Spike checking my mail box and then ordering a pizza how cute is that. Love this story and your talents in delivering such great chapters so fast.



Author's Response: lol. I wouldn't say no if Spike offered to buy me a pizza, shocking though it might be. I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. It was nice for me to be able to take a break from the angst and just let the characters share a tender moment. Thanks so much for the review. :)

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