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Reviewer: ZzzHollowSleepszzZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Mmm more Spike in bed please!!

Author's Response: lol. Spike in bed always evokes a positive reaction from readers. Thanks for the review. :D

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

ROTFLOL
Anya rocks and isn't ashamed of her past funny how easy Giles and Xander over look that simply because shes a woman and kinda goofy.
Buffy was great in standing up for herself and her choices of sticking with Spike.

Author's Response: That's an excellent point and one I hadn't considered before. That Anya is given a free ride because she is a woman. BtVS was all about female empowerment, which was good, but sometimes they took it too far. Instead of women being portrayed as the intelligent, strong, and worthy individuals we are, oftentimes they were petty, materialistic, bitchy, and abusive ... Buffy's disgusting treatment of Spike was considered okay because she was a woman in pain. Yet Spike's assault on Buffy was unforgivably evil because he's a man; the writers glossed over one and never let the viewers forget the other. Drove me insane. But, uh, anyway, I'm going off on a tangent so I'll just wrap it up by thanking you for the review. :D

Reviewer: vampid cupcake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 08:17 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Great argument part and loved the throwing in the Anya 1000 plus year old demon topic that was never touched on in the show marvelous update.



Author's Response: That annoyed me to no end about the series, so I had to address it here. Judging from readers' reactions, I'm not the only one who despised the Scoobies' hypocrisy. Thanks for the review. :D

Reviewer: You_gotta_love_bite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Oh this was fab I can't wait for more I keep wondering what Spikes job will be maybe a roadie?

=P

Author's Response: lmao. A roadie? That's one possibility I haven't considered, but it's an interesting one. His job will be revealed soon, though. Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2008 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Spike's "work" is making me very nervous. Update soon!

Author's Response: Well, sadly it wasn't "soon." But I did update. Points for effort, right? Thanks so much for the review. :D

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Oh, poor Spike...I have a tingling sensation that his wonderful, thoughtful plans for Buffy and Dawn's wellbeing is about to blow up in his pretty little face. I hope Buffy won't be too pissed about it! Loved the update, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you! It took me a while to update, but a new chapter is finally here. I hope you enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: ochit duzon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Oh what a cliffhanger!!!! I hope there will be an update real sooon! I hope Spike will have more sense to jeorpardize everything he has now with Buffy over money. Please no more hearthaches!

Reviewer: GDO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I like this: If he could have, he would have nestled into the soft bed of her temporal lobe or been held by the pulsing muscles of her right atrium. He would have become so deeply embedded that she couldn’t ignore him or run away.

I'm not surprised with: he might not be doing the right thing.

I would like more sex scenes...it seems you stop when the physical stuff is about to happen.

Reviewer: Jessie88 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

eek-- rather concerned about spike's little business endeavor... and man will it get old fast if he has to run every single action by "his moral compass".

I am so glad to see this story back... is there a posting schedule I'm just not getting? haha. I love your writing and I love this story so much-- I normally don't read WIP's, so I always hold my breath when several days go by without a new chapter. :)

thanks for a great fic!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

What is he doing. I'm dieing to know what Spike has decided is the better plan. Don't quite know how much forgiveness Buffy could have in her, especially when all of her friends turn the other way. Great chapter, please, update soon.

Reviewer: mabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Seven

just started to read this - to be honest was put off by the fact it was set in victorian times then i had a sneak at the newest chapter and thought I'd give it a go!! it's obviously an exceptional story - a gazillion awards!! - so I persevered and here I am in chapter seven hooked!!!! Loved the line ' i've seen him deader!!' hilarious!! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Blue Bell Knoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Wonder where Spike is taking this guy to and what "You know what to do means" if Spike has to lead him to something he must not know where whatever he is looking for is. I am looking forward to seeing what this job is and how it will effect S/B.
The past few pages have had so much detail and goodness it is hard to come to the end of the page.

Reviewer: Mrs_JQuest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Awesome chapter!!! I love this story so much! But please, you have to finish writing the lovemaking! Don't cut us off like that!

Reviewer: Forbidden Loves Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

“No wonder you went mad,” she whispered, mouthing her way up the line of his throat until she found the sweet spot. “You were so trapped back then. Did you love me because I set you free? Because I touched you and let you out of the agony of being a gentleman?”


Hottest thing ever written

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Can this story go on forever? Pretty please! Love it!!

Reviewer: Cryns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I may go blind from reading this on my laptop at work but it be worth it just to see the latest in FtTp Buffy seems to reconise Spike is evil she is not making excuses she is just accepting him for who he was and is in her life.
Now how they will all handle it is a whole other story lol this was great in how it was written

Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

What ever this job is, when everyone else was sitting around talking about what Buffy should do to serve them and take care of them Spike was out trying to take care of her. I hope that goes a long way it always bothered me Giles never offered to help he too just pushed Buffy out to support her friends and save the town at the same time.

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I liked the reference to Wiliams innocence and Buffy sort of admiting she knew it at the time and how Spike has no real control over what he feels towards her. I especially like Buffy being level headed enough to bring up the way they accept Anya but not Spike. Sort of a scale of justice in how they measure evil and past wrongs into who is and who isnt accepted into their little group. Giles is really angry but I hope he takes time to condier or at least all of them do. Let us just hope Willow doesn't pull another spell gone wrong whammy.

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Oh please don't let him ass everything up.

Reviewer: SowyOwl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Lovely!

Reviewer: Guy of Gisborne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 11:38 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Perfect little part with Spike showing his unsure William side to Buffy in trying to make clothing changes to please her and Buffy showing him she just wants him for him and never mind the bullock dockers

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 11:36 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I loved that you made Buffy call Giles on a few things like the fact he himself has lied to her about what he does tell her about vampires always on the show I wanted this kinda thing to take place with the slayer and watcher and it never really happened to the degree this did. Great update and intense chapter.
Please more when you have the time

Reviewer: Gutter Glitter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 11:33 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

I will take a Spiked sprawled out chapter any day of the week!
Finally! Buffy has made up her mind and is not gonna be swayed by anyone in going for who she wants and what she wants in her heart of hearts.

Reviewer: Switchblade Kross Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Oh I could just hug you this was so perfect all the way around seriously the best story on the board.

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2008 - 11:26 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Six

Best story ever!!!!
Please more I know I know demanding fans but I love this!

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