Giles you evil and yet loyal to Buffy figure. It is true and it is fact and I have no idea how Spike can redeem himself in Buffys eyes after this.

Author's Response: Exactly! Giles' actions are wrong, but his intentions are good and he does love Buffy. As for her relationship with Spike, my lips are sealed. Thanks for the review! :-D

Oh god... I hate Giles. Could you please kill him? Shove him off a building? Or plain bleed him dry? Ok... I'm a little violent right now... but I hate his way. He's manipulating Buffy so much into doing what he wants. And Willow?? Not better, always talk behind Buffys back about her. I would kick her out off my house.
So... but now... before I talk more about these persons... it was a wonderful update. Its nice to know Williams point of view of meeting Buffy. And its nice that he wants to support her. But one question... where is his money? He had a lot when he became a vampire... did he lost it all?
Sadly I wont read your story for the next three weeks because I will not have internet. But right after I come home I will look for a new update :)
Great job so far with telling us your story.

Author's Response: ROFL - I know Giles is being a jerk, but murder isn't really in the cards at the moment. As for Willow ... I agree. If I was in Buffy's situation, her arse would be out of my house. We'll just have to see how things go. Thanks so much for the review! :-D

I loooove the first part. I love Spike, but William I just want to hug. And you describe him so that we see his feelings, see how gentle he is.
Oh, blackmail, Bad council/Giles. So iether Buffy will say no, or else she says yes, but latter she says no.
Oh, gross, kittens' blood. Great chap.

Author's Response: William is a sweetheart, isn't he? I didn't realize how much I missed him until I wrote that scene. Thanks for the review. :-D

Loved it, you showed who Spike really was and didn't soften his character, which way to many people do. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've noticed that some writers tend to gloss over Spike's past, and while I understand that, it's his ability to change that made him such an amazing character. I'm glad you think I'm getting that right. :-D

Oh Dear Lord, this does not bode well for our blonde duo, does it? And here I thought a happy ending was near, but obviously not. We all know that this is going to cause Buffy to rethink her decision to be with Spike, right?

Damn Giles, damn him straight to hell. Grr. And, damn her friends, too. Righteous bastards. Now I'm all pissy. Blech.

I will, however, wait patiently for the next update to see if maybe...just maybe Buffy will keep her head from crawling up her ass. Toodles.

~Serenity


Author's Response: ROFL - Buffy's head does have a habit of doing that, doesn't it? However, the main difference between my Buffy and the Buffy of canon is that mine has learned that she *isn't* incapable of tenderness and love. William taught her that. It may take her a while to fully remember the lesson ... but it isn't something she has forgotten for good. Thanks for the review. :-D

Oh God. This just breaks my heart, both for your characters and all over again for the original show. You, my dear, are a wonder.

Author's Response: You are so kind to say that. I have to admit, I'm obsessed with angst and the Spuffy relationship offers so much potential for it. But I'm also a romantic at heart, so I strive to achieve the type of story worthy of that title as well. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

This is really a different and wild story not what I was expecting going in but wow blows your mind with how good and indepth it is. If you read no other story here read this one.

Please more I gotta see what happens next

Author's Response: Uniqueness is something I strive to achieve. There are so many wonderful stories out there, so many that I admire, but I don't want follow in anyone's footsteps. Those stories have already been told and told well; I want to achieve something different. Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Little weirdness with the blood but they seemed to work it out. I had to giggle at Spike having club soda on hand and the injustice comment. And I love how Dawn keeps nudging at Spike towards Buffy it is cute to see her trying to matchmaker them together. Willow I almost feel bad for cause there is gonna be some kinda falling out there or reality check coming her way and Giles I think is spying on Buffy or something with the cold shoulder hes giving her. Once more you surprise me in where this is going and I am enjoying the ride.

A perfect moment was seeing Spike go William like to fall apart at the thought of causing Elizabeth-Buffy pain Spike has the same reaction to seeing Buffy in tears he cant stand it and has to go to her and make it better. I love reading this cause every time there is a update there is always one part of it that touches your heart as a follower.

Friends are not..... i would think she would worry more about her sister instead of feeding freeloaders who decided BUFFY should find work instead of them.

That's one thing i hated in the series. They left Buffy with all the bills and just left her to work at the Double Meat Palace. At least Giles pulled through in the end, kinda. Although i'm not even sure about that anymore. I've read so many fanfics that i get mixed up.

Spike is like the voice of reason here so I am hoping he does not blow it and offer to go rob a museum or something this ends in such a way you just dont know what he's gonna do or say and I'm hanging on till you add more here.

LAME WILLOW LAME! A workout center? Who can like on under 10 bucks a hour???
Get your witchy butt out there and start working yourself before Buffy Ty-Bo's your butt into the street!
Cant wait to see what comes next in this

Injustice League!!!!! Oh I loved that!