[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
The way Giles told Spike that Buffy went to see Angel, this was the one that was hurting Spike the most. I'm not sure if he didn't do it on purpose.
And Buffy didn't see that Spike was only very very jealous.
I'm very glad after the talk they are better now. Even if it was very emotional and hurting first. Not to hurt one another again though? That's good.
Maybe giving her the ring and the poem from book helped a lot with that.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Finally!!! I hope this works out. I know it won't and can't be easy, but hopefully they'll make it through. Can't wait for more!!! Happy holidays.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
I was hoping and hoping for some goodness to come and it has, great chap. this is a huge step for them
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
She is talking to him like he is William I think that is a great start and they are communicating again one on one without anyone butting in or running off. I am excited!
More please with Spike on top
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the chapter. :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Pleeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeeeee more!!
Author's Response: lol. Well, better late than never. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. :-)
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Still loving it! More! :)*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad that you do.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
My favorite moment in this is Buffy being upset with herself that she her hit William ---- that she finally sees he is still there inside of Spike and that she is upset with herself that she struck him. It was like both of them forgave it other and came together now it is killing me to see what will come next. A baby? Will she take the ring? Will they both accept each other in their life? I have one million questions only the next posts can tell. Please please post more soon.
Author's Response: I'm happy you're still enjoying the fic. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
I have been reduced to a puddle of Spike and Buffy love.
I'm gonna have to go back and read the page 30 more times today from just how great this is.
More please after the holidays :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
By the end of this page I needed a box of tissues and a box of chocolates. Do you plan to go on and write books? Cause if so I think I'd follow your writing just about anywhere. I love at the end here you have them both coming together and comforting the other and not wanting to hurt each other anymore.
Author's Response: I am hoping to become a published author, yes, so I am so happy to know that you think I'm capable of succeeding. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Can I clap and giving a standing ovation to this?
Would that seem hokey?
Reading this made my heart jump for joy
Author's Response: Not hokey at all. I greatly appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
~BEST FANFICTION EVER WRITTEN~
Author's Response: :::hits the floor in a fit of shock and flattery::: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Better then I ever hoped to imagine the story going you never cease to amase me with how good your telling of this story is.
Author's Response: How nice of you to say! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Christmas comes early this year and Forward to time past delivers it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:44 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
I started reading think thinking Oh nooooo Giles shut up and go away and Spike come in for some tea and then by the next part I was so excited I was cheering at my laptop screen. I started pooring tears with the ring box and the folded page from his book. Lovely just lovely makes me fall in love with Buffy and Spike all over again.
Author's Response: It's wonderful to know that you felt so strongly about the chapter. I feel a bit mean saying I am happy to make you cry, but ... well, in this case it is flattering for me know. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Oh God you have me crying at work! This is a spectacular chapter!
please more pretty please!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Well this was just so good I think Spuffy Realm musta had a earthquake when you uploaded this to post.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Well my mascara is running and my heart is all a flutter this little part cut me to the quick
(Buffy narrowed her eyes, and she was arguing more with herself than with Spike as she said, “It’s stupid! It would be stupid. Maybe you are. Maybe part of you is. But it would still be stupid. You’re still a vampire. You don’t know how to be good; you’ve forgotten how to be good. You don’t even know wrong from right—”
She started to turn away then, but he grabbed her arm and held her back.
“Then, teach me!” he said hoarsely. Desperately.)
This whole page makes me desperate for more soon please!
Author's Response: It was an emotionally charged chapter for me to write, so it's wonderful to know that it affected my readers just as much. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
More, more, more, more, more!!!!! PLEASE!!! And, ASAP!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry I wasn't quicker with an update, but I hope you enjoy the new chapter. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
He gave her the ring!
He gave her the ring!
He gave her the ring!
He gave her the ring!
He gave her the ring!
Author's Response: lol. I love the enthusiasm! :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:32 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
OMG! I'm dying this was too good!
He darted down the length of the cave to where she stood, grabbed her by the wrist and pried her hand from the ladder. “Look here”—digging into the pocket of his jeans—“You bloody look at this, and then you tell me I don’t love you. That I didn’t spend every minute of every day for a hundred and twenty-one goddamn years thinking about you.”
Author's Response: That was my favorite part of the chapter; I'm happy you enjoyed it just as much. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
This is so well done I can see the whole part of this play out in my head just like a episode in how they would fight.
I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to hear that you do. :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Yes!!!! Yesssssss Yesssssssss! They finally talked!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I like that enthusiasm! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
I have tears in my eyes.
Author's Response: That's what I was hoping for. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol. I'm glad to make you happy. :-D
[Report This]Date: 12/19/2007 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter Fifty-One
Now I can't wait for the new year - this was like a lovely little Christmas gift for me!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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