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Reviewer: survenante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:50 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

I'm going to join the rest of the world and say "More please!". The story is original, fast-paced and highly entertaining. It's a real treat...

Author's Response: YAY, thank you so much honey, I'm thrilled you're enjoying it b/c I'm having a ton of fun writing this one. Thanks soooooo much for the great review, smoochies to you sweety.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:31 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

First blood? *gg* Yeah, Buffy did that. *g*
I had to grin while reading that Buffy checked out Spike on her way to the shower.
So Gunn got tired of babysitting? After seeing how Lindsey used the opportunity of Spike gone and Gunn distracted? I can only say Spike is right to watch him.
Loved the little scene with Spike and Lilly & Logan and his slip "bloody ponce he taught them. *gg* And that he was smiling, showing Buffy another side of him she didn't know yet.
Fun too when he tried to stop thinking of her and slapped himself *grins*
I wonder if Spike will be transfered again before Buffy's training is over (she has nine weeks, we're at week six that means three left. That's around the time Spike will go).

Author's Response: Hee hee, I couldn't help it - she needed a nickname after surprising the hell out of everyone. Oh, Buffy ain't blind, I mean, this is Spike we're talking about here - yummmmmmy. Yeah, Lindsey has the potential to cause some trouble, but it does bring out Spike's possessive/protective streak, which is a good thing. Yup, Buffy needed to see a softer side of Spike, and his interaction with Gunn's twins was just the ticket. As for Spike's transfer - that will come into play in a most unique way, you'll see. Thanks so much for the lovely review hon, I always look forward to yours - big smooches to you.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:29 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

good update

Author's Response: THanks sweety, smooches to you.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:20 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Really didn't think I was going to like this but I LOVE it. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Squeeee, I'm thrilled you're enjoying it sweety. I think this has been my fav to write so far. Thank you so much for the great review, smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:14 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Love this story.........finally a softer side of Spike. When is he just going to give in to it??? Spuffy soon please!

More more more!

Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked seeing his softer side. Wellllll, it's gonna be awhile before he gives in - politics and all that of his position. Just trust that it will most definetely be happeniing. Just got to let them reach the boiling point first so the sparks really bring the house down, giggles. Thanks for the awesome review, hon, hugs.

Reviewer: tananore Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:13 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

I was prepared not to like this and instead found that I lolved it and want more to see where it goes. Excellent job
4 Stars this is orginal :)

Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad this turned out to be something you can enjoy. I love to entertain people thru stories and humor. Thanks so much for the review sweety, the next chapter should be up by the end of the week. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:11 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Wow. i was in such a bad mood after reading the latest updates to "His dirty little secret" (which i was glad to see) and "love island" (which latest chapter is the reason for my bad mood) I found your update and am feeling much better now. Althoigh I miss TE this fic IITAN as me enthralled but how is it going to work if Spike is reassigned? can't wait for next update.

Author's Response: Awwww, I'm sorry you were in a bad mood sweety. It's hard to read fics that have angst in them and you really want to know what's going to happen next. I'm just glad I could lift your mood a bit for you. Yes, I need to get back to work on TE. The muse, for whatever his fickle reason, needed a bit of a break. Hopefully by next weekend I can update that and perhaps even LFL. As for Spike being reassigned, not to worry, I have some pretty cool plans for our couple beyond basic. Thanks so much for the lovely review hon, kisses.

Reviewer: spuffygurl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 04:00 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

good story thus far. Keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: You got it sweety, hopefully by the end of the week. Glad to see you're enjoying it hon, thanks for the awesome review, smooches.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:59 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Oh, wow! I've just started reading this and I am so thoroughly glad that I have! This is superb.

The first chapter did an excellent job in laying the scene and allowing the reader to build empathy for the characters, Spike included. The sparring in the second was wonderfully cathartic and vivdly written. For that moment, I was Buffy.

I'm pleased that Buffy is now getting to see more of Spike(!) in terms of the different nuances of his personality as well as in the more literal sense. And the scene with Xander: hilarious! In fact, I am still on a high...

Just to make it abundantly clear: I am loving this story and can hardly wait for more!

PS. The banner is all kinds of sublime.....mmm




Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you decided to read and am thrilled you're enjoying it honey... this has definetely been my fav fic to write so far. I think the first chappy was the hardest b/c of the dry material, but I'm glad you understood it served to set the atmosphere for the story to take place in. Oh, I loved writing the part where Spike gets his comeupance - he soooo needed it. Yup, little glimpses here and there for our couple, getting them to think, even if just a little bit, about one another in a different light. Oh the banner, once kitty finished it and sent it to me, well, let's just say its my laptop wallpaper - totally droolworthy. I'm very pleased you like it so far hon, and I hope you like ch 4 once it's ready. Thanks for such a wonderful reivew, big hugs for you.

Reviewer: lidija Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:50 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

this was so funny, slap slap, oh, and like he is gonna forget about buffy, bet he is gonna imagine her in that porno. cant wait for next chapter, slap slap hahahhaha

Author's Response: Hee hee, I loved writing that little SLAP himself back into his senses part. I could so see it happening. Glad I could make ya laugh, sweety. Thanks for the review and I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. Smooches

Reviewer: Jaesha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:41 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Have I mentioned how wonderful your writing is...? I know I've been horrible about reviewing, but I gotta tell ya, I love your work.

I'm happy you decided to post this. It's moving along really well, the pace is perfect. Keep up the great word-slinging and I look forward to your next update.

~Jaesha

Author's Response: Awww, thank you hon. I'm far from perfect but I practice by writing at least a little something everyday. I'm so thrilled you're enjoying my work, I love to entertain, especially using humor as the main tool. Thanks a million for such a lovely review, hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:41 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Great chapter, and even though it didn't cover a long time span, there was a lot going on! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Good, glad the little slow down in time didn't detract from your enjoyment, I needed certain things to happen within a certain time frame... you know, plans within plans kinda thing. Thanks so much for the review darling, hugs.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:38 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

I'm so glad you're updating this frequently I love it! This chapter was great! I can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Oh, I have been having too much fun writing this, I can't help myself, I get so excited when I finish a chapter sooner than anticipated so I had to post. So glad you like the story thus far honey, thank you sooooo very much for the great reivew, hugs.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:32 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment


Slap. On purpose, he used the open palm of his right hand and struck his cheek hard, trying to get that image out of his head. Slap, slap... SLAP! Apparently it was going to take more than one.

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh wow!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! give me a minte hon!! lol......................................................okay, i'm good. that was absolutely perfect. you are soooo funny!!!!!! and spike's got it bad. oh yeah, he's got it REAL bad!!!!! lol. great job sweets. as always, your muse delivered!!! wonder how spike's gonna get over his little crush. that's exactly what it is. he just doesn't want to admit it or he's just so obliviously stubborn that he doesn't know. i know it'll be a while before things heat up between them but the wait is soooooo worth it. more soon sweets!!! loved it very much

Author's Response: Hee hee, I just thought, yeah, Spike knows he shouldn't be having those thoughts, so he really needs to SLAP himself out of it, literally. Glad you liked that part. He has it baaaaaaaaaaaaaad, you know it. It might be awhile before things get, well, smutty, but you're right - gotta build it up and pick just the right moment. So glad you liked the chapter hon, thanks for the awesome review. Hope you like the next one once it's ready. Big smoochies to you.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 03:00 pm Title: A Stayfree Moment

Hee! I have so much fun reading this chapter. So many parts that I loved, maybe too many to mention, but the one where Buffy is oggling at Spike and he catches her , the moment where Spike is interacting with Gunn's twins and Buffy starts seeing him in another light and the part where Spike is slapping himself at the end, they made me go Guh, awwww and *rofl* . ;) Wonderful chapter, honey! Looking forward to more. :D

Author's Response: I think was definetely one of the funnier chapters so far, thanks so much for helping me out on such short notice sweety, I reeeeealy appreciate it. Glad you liked the additive of Gunn's kids - gave Buffy a chance to see a softer side of Spike. Thanks for the review hon, chat with ya soon, kisses.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 04:48 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

Hehe (because Spike doesn't know why it bothered him that she knows Angel's face now when thinking about Buffy has a boyfriend) :)
Uh-huh.. Lindsey. Thank god for Spike's protective streak.
And I bet that works all the time with the inductees in the boot camp: Letting them eat as much as they want and then taking them to the gas chamber.
Mmm something is off; Buffy was crying when she phoned Angel?
Oh bad break up. And Spike is happy to know Buffy is free *gg*. Now I wonder what he has in mind to let her feel better. Distracting her with another mean drill thing? It's so funny (yet not for Buffy) that Spike is using everything to mock Buffy / turn her words around. (Like when she felt for him in the true sense of the words *g*.) Oh! Channeling Buffy's anger. *nods* She'll feel better after this. ~ Loved the update :) And a good day to you too.
To your question: After reading the second chapter I still love it. BTW got an announcement from the new story of yours; it worked again. And I wanted to mention that you'll see the updates on the RSS Feed from the update site too. I added it to my F-List so I see it.

Author's Response: Oh yes, Spike is very happy Buffy is single - makes him feel a tad less guilty over his lusty thoughts, giggles. Angel simply had to go - what can I say. They really do let you eat whatever you want before the gas chamber, at least they did during my experience. Lindsey will add a little flavor to the fic, bring out the possessivness in Spike. Glad you enjoyed the ass-kicking scene, Spike so deserved it. Thanks for answering my question sweety and I do hope you have a great weekend. As always, thanks for the lovely reivew, you're such a doll, smoochies.

Reviewer: Tessa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 01:47 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

Great chapter, I was surprised to see her break up with Angel so soon though. Also glad to see her and Spike evolving, and her being finally able to get back at him a bit. Although eating cheese off the floor? Can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Well, it sometimes happens like that, where people's boyfriends/girlfriends break up with them while they're away at basic. It's, unfortunetely, a lot more common than it should be. LOL, the cheese incident - he's a real bastard in this one, knows no bounds when it comes to Buffy. He is evolving a little, but he fot his butt served to him for his efforts. Thanks so much for the great review hon, smooches.

Reviewer: fyreburned Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 04:17 am Title: To Serve or Get Served

Loving it! Just like your other fics, loving them! You've very rapidly become one of my favorites!

Thanks!
fyreburned/K.


Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much, my muse is blushing profusely from your kind words. Glad you like this little ditty, had this plot bunny on my mind for a couple months until the itch just had to be scratched. Thank you for the wonderful review sweety, smooches.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 08:31 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

NICE!! Great way to end the chapter. Love this story....update soon and give us some Spuffy!

Author's Response: Awesome, glad you liked the ass-whoopin. I'll do my best to update soon, that's a promise and thanks for the great review sweets. Hugs.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 08:17 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

Okay can I say again how much I freakin' loved this chappie.

"I wear the cheese, it does not wear me..." LMAO!!!! Oh I just couldn't help but giggle ;)


Ahhhh, my favorite part...Spike gettin' his ass served! I loved that he let her get all that frustration out, but I bet he never thought he would get his ass handed to him like that ;). The Bob Barker moment had me ready to pee my pants!

Girls as always, Your work blows me away and it is such an honor to get to meld minds with you. I bow down at your feet, LOL! You're the bestest, Kuddos!

Author's Response: I sooooooo love that cheese part on btvs. I feel like such a weirdo cuz that part had me falling out of my chair, it was so bizarre but it struck a funny bone. Oh, you know Spike had it coming. Bob Barker moment indeed... the price is WRONG.... BITCH... classic Adam Sandler. Oh I love plotting with you, it's always a bright spot in my day to chat with you. We are 2 peas in a pod you and I... Love ya girl, thanks for the help and the reviews.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 08:12 pm Title: Welcome to Hell

YAY!!! I am so glad you are postin' this for all of us to enjoy ;)

The Spike you have depicted in this fic is absolutely EVIL, and we LOVE it, LOL!!!! I don't know what it is about a man in uniform that makes me all weak in the knees *sighs*. Hmmm, could be why I married a soilder myself, LOL!!! Well hon, I love how this is playin' out so far and can't wait to see what kind of UST will stir up between our fave couple. Kuddos!

Author's Response: Hee, the muse insited I at least tried, you know how excited I get over new ideas - naturally cuz we talk on the phone for like what... 2, 3, 4 hours at a time, LMAO. And I love every minute of it too. Oh yeah, I love me some evil Spike, BIG time. And men in uniform??? HOT, how could it not be??? Thanks for the review and all your help my dear friend, smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 07:29 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

This is really quite a fascinating view into military life. Except for three Air Force pilots, and only one of them ended up making the military a career, I have had almost no contact with anyone in the military. So this is a most interesting peek into something very foreign to me. I must say that I'm really impressed that anyone makes it through basic training--wow! That said, I have some questions. Obviously I understand that someone in basic training cannot get involved with someone in Spike's position. And I know from TV shows (not that TV is always that accurate) that officers cannot be involved with noncommissioned soldiers right? But what about when Buffy gets out of basic training? Would dating someone of Spike's rank be acceptable or not? Just curious.

Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad you like the angle for this story and the insight into that kind of life. You'd be surprised by how many make it through basic, I mean sure, it's not for everyone but it really does make you a better person. It makes you really, really, REALLY believe in yourself and capabilities to handle situations full of stress with quick thinking and in a calm manner. In answer to your question, the military regulations now state that officers and enlisted personnel cannot date or marry. I lucked out in that when my husband and I dated and married, the rule was different - it was fine so long as the enlisted person is not in the officer's direct chain of command. My hubby is an officer and I was enlisted. He was in a totally different unit than I was so it was perfectly legal. As far as Buffy and Spike getting involved now? The boot camp situation is a no no. Now, if they were stationed somewhere else in a regular unit then yes it's fine b/c they are both enlisted. As for right now, the only way she could date him is if he wasn't her drill sergeant and velonged to a different unti. I hope that answered your question. NCO's can date lower enlisted, that's not illegal insofar as I know. Thanks for such an awesome review hon, I really appreciate it. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 07:00 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

Yee-haw! Go Buffy!!
Great depiction of what it must be like in the army. I'm soooo not made for the subservience, but we need all kinds of folks for all kinds of jobs, I guess.
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Giggles, she did get him good, huh? I didn't think I was cut out for the Army either, but once you get thru basic and school, it's not so bad, you get used to it. Thanks for the lovely review sweets, hugs to you and have an awesome weekend.

Reviewer: BloodyLuv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 06:39 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

really, really enjoyed this chapter, more please??!!

Author's Response: Awww, thanks hon. You bet, more to follow soon, I promise.

Reviewer: mjspuff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 03:19 pm Title: To Serve or Get Served

woohoo buffy !! love this story so far.

Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked the ass-kickin part and enjoy the story so far hon, thanks for the review sweets, smoochies to you.

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