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Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 07:37 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Well, it looks as if Spike finally got a big enough brick to the head, so that he could have his eureka moment. I am glad that he realizes that he needs help in the pursuit of Buffy, because up till now, he has been sending some really bad messages. I am also glad that someone clued him in to just how young and inexperienced Buffy is. Even though you had not spelled it out until this chapter, I had a feeling that Angel was the one and only until Spike. I had also been wondering when and how you would do the big Willow/Oz relationship reveal. It was a nice touch, making it so matter-of-fact. Like, of course we are together, STUPID. Also, Buffy's shock at his confession of wanting everything from her was just priceless!! She was so busy ranting, I am suprised she caught on that quickly. Although, as another reviewer said, it is a huge burden he has now put on her, being resposible for saving him. I am not sure if she is ready for him to go from just want to get in your pants Spike, to declaring my undying love William....I guess we will see. Again, I love Gunn. The analogy he used about the little boy on the playground has popped into my head more than once while reading this story-once again you and I are on the same wavelength. And a man who mentions marriage-WOW-I am suprised that did not send Buffy running for the hills (even though it was the best friend.) I did like Spike not taking no for an answer...6 weeks is an awfully long time...we might need some loving to make the time pass more quickly.;-) Loved it, as always. Can't wait for the date chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Yup, one brick to the head along with some friends has definetely woken him up. Glad you liked his confession to Buffy. It's quite a thing to tell someone and yes, her inexperience has her doubting the responsibility. Hee hee, yup, we're on the same wavelength as the little boy on the playground sums Spike up perfectly. And of course he's more determined than ever to make things work by not taking no for an answer from Buffy. He knows in his heart she has to see him for what he is minus the crude statements. Dinner should be interesting, *winks*. And yes, 6 weeks is a long time, enough to give Buffy some serious thinking time. I'm so happy you enjoyed the chappy darling. Thank you so much for such a wonderful review. Hugs.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 06:05 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

This was an excellent chapter. Such a range of emotions, and you did them all perfectly. The last scene was great. From Spike's chant to Buffy's "I said no" I loved it. But his “Because you’re the only one who can save me.” just about stopped my heart and made me cry at the same time. Kudos. ; ) More please.

Author's Response: Wow, such a lovely review sweety, thank you. I'm very happy to see you liked all the emotions within the conversations. These two are just so stubborn and clueless they couldn't possibly move forward without a little help from their friends. YAY... I was so thrilled to see you were affected by that one line, that she's the only one who can save him. It was meant to be very impactful, and I'd hope it would portray the depth of Spike's emotions. Again, thank you so much for the lovely reivew darling. Smooches to you.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 05:16 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Wait a minute he's already at the LOVE stage of their "relationship"? Does that mean the story's going to wrap up soon? I'm being selfish here but I was hoping for many many more chapters to come before you got to the end. It's the most fun fic I've read in ages. Honestly.

“`S she the flowers and candy type of bird?”

“Not really.”

My kind of girl! Well, I wouldn't say no to candy, but flowers? Feh.

I like the fight they had in this chapter. It felt very specifically Spuffy-ish in tone and content, you know what I mean? That's why I read Spuffy fanfic - the show may be over but I still need my fix. And truth is I'm kind of picky. *g*

When he says persistence I hope he doesn't mean more stalking. LOL. Once again, poor poor Buffy. Never a dull moment with Spike but with that comes a whole lot of headache and grief to go with it. I'm loving it though - that they both have such strong personalities in this fic.
Here's come the crit (uh-oh): I'm not too keen on you boxing different aspects of Spike's personality as a separate entity by calling his softer side the William part of him. Whatever you want to call him it's still the same one person. -shrugs-

Author's Response: *Tina ducks and cringes*, yup, we're nearing the end of the story. I knew when I began this fic, it wasn't going to be very long, but in trying to produce decent size chapters has also helped to move it along. I am excited though when you said its been a most fun read, b/c that's basically what I was trying to go for... something light and funny, not too much on the angsty note but enough to make it realistic within the setting. Flowers and candy, ah yes. I must admit I'd rather get the flowers than the candy, but hey - either or coming from such a hottie would be welcome in my book, lol. Oh yes indeed, I do know what you mean. The show is long since over but I love reading stories that contain the elements of that special spuffy relationship Whedon created. LMAO, no, no stalkerish Spike, just very determined in that annoying, Spike-like way. Never a dull moment indeed, but Buffy will learn that his headaches can be a most welcome thing - in the end. I totally see your point on seperating his softer side and labeling it William. He is the same person, or rather, his experiences are what shaped who he is today. I did that for the Gunn conversation for the purpose of him explaining his past, but not to implicate Spike would ever go back to being William. That's the one thing I promised myself when I started this fic...... there may be moments of humbleness and a softer side, but this is Spike all the way and the wimpy kind of William has no place in this story, it would sink faster than the titantic, hee hee. Thank you so very much for the wonderful review sweetheart, big hugs and kisses from me and my muse.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2007 - 12:58 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Wow! That was a great chapter. I loved the "what's eating her line" LMAO on that one. And the "In the army we don't steal, we requisition"! Isn't that the truth!

I love where you're taking this. Both Buffy and Spike seeking the aid of their friends to figure things out. Spike finanlly realizing (with a little help from his friends and Willow) that Buffy doesn't need his past brand of wooing. Buffy thinking things over carefully, about Spike and why he might be how she first thought him to be. I also loved Gunn's reference to her knowing Spike but knowing nothing about William.

I like Spike's "take charge" attitude with their "date" and hope that Buffy will go along with it, even though it is still a like his old methods. He just needs to keep it on the right level DURING the date! Then Buffy will have six weeks of "thinking" to do (unless of course you and muse have devised a method that puts her in the same place he's going to be for the next 6 weeks) I guess I'll just have to wait and see, but isn't it rewarding when your tale so stimulates someone elses imagination that they start guessing and second guessing where you might go with it?

Look forward to more. I just get giddy when I see it's been updated and drop everything to read it - between you and jolynn, I may never have to buy another book again! You keep me plenty entertained! Thanks! Hugs and smooches (give muse his share)!

Author's Response: Hee hee, glad you enjoyed my twisted sense of humor, the muse is so wicked sometimes and oh yeah, did plenty of requisitioning in my day. Glad you enjoyed the whole 'friends helping friends' scenes b/c honestly, these two are so stubborn and clueless, it takes their friends to get them nudged along. Gotta love determined Spike in getting her to go to dinner with him. A little like his own methods, but hey, the guy has to work with he's got, lol. I'm very excited that you're guessing what will happen next. You're absolutely right, it's a rewarding thing as an author when you can captivate an audience like that - best feeling in the world. Wow, what a compliment, jeepers I'm really blushing heavily here. It's hard to imagine from my standpoint someone getting excited when I post, (I'm a very self-critical perfectionistic virgo here), but I can't tell you how absolutely thrilling that is to hear. Just having anyone say my name in the same sentence as Jolynn, who of course is someone whose work is astounding and I look up to her example very much, it's just... well, wow. Thank you sweety, you just made my year, *giggles*. My muse is sucking up your hugs and kisses darling, thank you so much for the review, big cyber smoochies from me and muse.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 10:00 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Spike's taking a different tactic. He's not taking no for an answer. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yup, he's still very much Spike, he's just going about it differently this time. Gotta love a determined man. Thanks for the review hon, hugs.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 09:58 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

I was out of town yesterday, so didn't see this until tonight. W00T! Update!

Wow, when Spike decides to start showing some vulnerability, he really goes for it, doesn't he? Not quite sure what girl could resist saving the big bad from heimself - not me, that's for sure. I love how, despite Spike's private and public emotional expresssion, there's still little peeks on the old balls and swagger ("we don't steal, we requisition", and the not quite asking Buffy out on a date). Rome wasn't built in a day, and it rings very real to see that despite a lot more heart on his sleeve, Spike is still Spike.

Loved all the "friends" conversations, but Buffy and Gunn's was really amazing. You've written Gunn as someone who is able to be loyal to Spike and Buffy at the same time. Honestly, I think he's my favorite character in this fic (tho Willow was pretty cute too).

I have a feeling that dinner will bring up some things that really need pondering on, for both Spike and Buffy. So the setup for the 6 week absence is really perfect!




Author's Response: Oh yeah, Spike is being a bit more 'real' but as always, he's Spike. I wanted to be sure to keep a whimpy style of William out of this fic /bc it wouldn't fit, but that doesn't mean he won't have a few 'soft and tender' moments either. YAY, I'm glad to hear you like Gunn so much. I just felt as though he would be the one to be able to remain most neutral because of what he sees. Dinner will be interesting, that much I will say and the 6 week absence will be good for them as absence makes the heart grow fonder. Thanks for the awesome review sweety. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Fia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 01:25 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Great! Can't wait for the next chapter please!! It's such a great story I just want to keep reading!

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so very much sweety. It's my pleasure to entertain. This fic has been the most fun for me to write.

Reviewer: Iza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 01:06 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

My god, I'd missed the last chapter's update. But good, one reading, two chapters. Sorry if I don't leave an astounding review, but I just got out of my sickbed only for you to let you know how much I appreaciated, though my brain and eyes have trouble focusing. I'll do better next time.
I liked the way Spike is trying to ease down his attitude, but doesn't take no for an answer anyway.
"I wonder what's eating her" LOL !!!!!!

Author's Response: But hey, that's kind of good in a way to come back to two chappies instead of one. I like it when that happens to me, *giggles*. Oh no, I do hope you've taken good care of yourself. Drink lots of fluids and read plenty of spuffy, *winks*. Dr.s orders. Giggles, glad you liked the puns - my muse couldn't resist. Get better honey and thanks for the review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 11:40 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

well... that wasn't exactly how a 'asking a girl out' should go but... you can't take out all the spikeness from spike, can you? lol

i'm wondering if buffy will go out with him or not. i mean... right after the bathroom incident, the answer could be just one.but i think that the last meeting with him, and her talk with gunn could inluence buffy's decision.

either way, a 6 week break will be soooo good for both of them... especiallly if they go out together and spike manages to keep his mouth shut all along! lol

smoochies hun! :D

Author's Response: Indeed, Spike is Spike no matter what, God bless him. The bathroom incident is definetely enough reason not to go to dinner with him, but she's also had some time and extra information to chew on over the last couple weeks. I think you'll like what it's store for next chapter, or at least I hope so. A 6 week break will defintely make the heart grow fonder, *winks*. Thanks for the awesome review dalring, hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Kim63 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 08:53 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

That was just awesome. Thanks for the update. I'm not a writer, so not so good with writing a review, sorry lol. You, on the other hand are absolutely AWESOME!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Awww, thank you darling. You don't have to be a writer to leave a review, I'm very happy to see you leave me your thoughts anytime and in any way. You made my day sweety, thanks again. Smoochies.

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 05:54 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Oh will she go to dinner with him I hope she does, I'm glad she got it off her chest to and told him what he was doing was unexceptable. Wonderful update can't wait for the next one Mrs...PS Thanks for letting us know about TE too

Author's Response: Let's just say, she may not have a choice, but it doesn't mean she can't enjoy it, *winks*. I wanted to thank you for recommending this fic out - you're friends seem to really enjoy it and of course its a nice feeling to be able to keep people entertained. Giggles, feel free to pimp me anytime. Yes, TE is in the works, I'm just uber busy these days with some RL obligations and I let the muse choose which fic to set aside. It's hard to concentrate, at least for me, on more than two at a time and with the time constraints I'm currently facing, the muse went for the lighter of the two fics to focus on. Thanks for the review honey, it's always such a pleasure to see you here and know that you're enjoying the tale. Big hugs.

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 05:05 am Title: All's Fair in Love and War

yeah, spike's right. they do belong together, we know that. but... he is trying to show her that in the worst possible way EVER! lol

if she kills him after this last one, no jury on earth will condemn her... (i know i wouldn't! lol)

the camo paint thing was funny... yes, i'll agree with faith. he did accept his apology...!

“Oh my, God, it’s Billy Idol. Please oh please, can I get your autograph, Mr. Idol?” RLMAO!!!!
(i guess his face was priceless that moment!! :D )

hugs, sweetie! :D




Author's Response: Silly boy, I know - such is a man's viewpoint, *sighs*. LMAO, over the jury comment. The camo-paint thing, I couldn't resist, it's catching someone red-handed and soooo embarassing. And naturally Buffy felt the need to knock his attitude down a notch or two with the Bill Idol comment. That is one priceless look on his face and boy did her plan work - glad you laughed at that. Thanks for the great review sweets. Hugs.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 03:52 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

That's a huge responsibility for Buffy - to "save" Spike but seriously who could resist him? Another fantastic update. I LOVE this so much. Please update ASAP.

Author's Response: Yes, it really is a big responsibility. But it's safe to say in the end, Buffy won't mind too much, *winks*. I'm so glad you liked the chapter and thank you very much for the review honey. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: bean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2007 - 02:59 am Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Ugh, you just ROCK! Awesome, awesome, awesome... SUCH a well written chapter. Loved the food analogy that Willow gave and the great talk that Buffy had with Gunn. Perfect ending... thought it did leave me wanting more more more!!

Author's Response: Giggles, I'm so happy you enjoyed the chappy. Willow can be so funny with her little insightful analogies... Beasleysmom came up with the idea, I just had to write it, hee hee. Thanks for the awesome review sweets, hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 11:58 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

I was so excited to see this update. This story makes me anticipate more, I cannot wait to see what happens next. Also Gunn's little talk with Buffy with a whole lot of jive made me laugh out loud. Thanks

Author's Response: Hee hee, glad you liked Gunn's jive. I get a lot of that from my husband and his family and it feels right to have him be like that at certain moments. He's such a doll to write, I just love him. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the chapter and thank you so much for the great review. Hugs you tight.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

LOL!!! "I wonder what's eating her" LOL!!! That one really got me!! Well, it seems the light bulb has finally turned on in Spike's head!!!! Does that mean there might be some William on the horizon? Snarky Spike or William...I love all parts of Spike! And all of Spike's parts, too!! Great update!!

Author's Response: Hee hee, I'm a bit twisted when it comes to my sense of humor. As for William vs Spike, I think it's safe to say he'll always be very Spike-like, but there will most defintely be soft and tender moments, even for a bad boy. Thanks so much for the review honey, I'm happy you enjoyed the chappy. Huggles.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

AWWW HOW SWEET, SPIKE IS PUTTING HIS HEART ON THE LINE TO TRY AND BE WITH HER!!!!!!! i really u hope it works and that buffy sees wat a good person he is and how theyre mean to be together. im so happy that u updated and i love this story. im glad thatbhe didn let her say no to him and ui hope that they have a good time at dinner and she gets to know him better. also i hope that they start to develop a friendship and build form there. please update as soon as u can, cant wait to read more. thanx

Author's Response: Yesm he finally pulled his head out of his ass long enough to breathe and get some oxygen to his brain, lol. He's as determined as ever to make things right and so very Spike-like of him not to take no for an answer. I'll try to update soon sweety, just gotta finish wrting the next few scenes and then decide exactly where I want to cut it off. Thanks so much for the awesome review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Devin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Aww, this was nice-- I love Gunn. :) "But-but, I-I said no!" made me laugh my ass off. :) Glad I got to read this before setting out on the homework marathon that I have this weekend. Update soon, loving this fic!

Author's Response: Hee hee, yeah Buffy is a bit befuddled. Good to see I didn't interrupt your homework. It seems I've been doing that lately to a few people, bad muse, bad, lol. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chappy and Gunn - he's so much fun to write. Thanks for the wonderful review darling. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 10:45 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

hey!!!!! loved it lots and lots. i'm feeling a bit under the weather right now so this really REALLY cheered me up and made me feel better. sooooo glad spike was finally honest with himself and buffy. i think things will start to change for these two real soon. buffy's just gotta be willing to forgive. we'll see what happens. great job, sweets. amazed as always. more soon.

Author's Response: I hope you get better soon sweety and am glad I could cheer you up a bit. Yes, we're at the turning point and the next chapter will be a transitional one on the road to spuffy. Gotta love our stubborn couple, giggles. Thanks for the wonderful review sweets, get better soon. Smooches.

Reviewer: e;;e Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 10:29 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

lol this chapter got alot of chuckles from me, thank you for making me laugh :] im glad that he put his pride aside and that he actually had the will to do it, im impressed,.now hopefully she wont be as dense. gotta love the friends advice update soon sweetheart

Author's Response: YAY, I love to hear that I made you laugh, it's my fav part about this fic is the comedic factor and keeping it light even in the serious moments. Yup, Spike is setting aside his pride and going for the girl, not taking no for an answer. I think you'll enjoy the dinner scene, or at least I hope so. Thanks for the awesome review hon, huggles.

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Date: 03/03/2007 - 10:02 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite story with a new chapter!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next with this date!!!! I love the fact that Gunn is becoming such a good friend, he's such a good influence!

More, more, more

Author's Response: Gunn is adorable isn't he? I so love writing him in this fic as the level-headed guy and neutral friend, even though he's rooting for them both, he wouldn't push. Thanks for the lovely review sweety, I'm very happy you enjoyed the chapter. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Rayna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 09:21 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

He's leaving? For SIX weeks? There are good things and bad things that could come of that. Good? He'd get minorly hurt and Buffy would have to take care of him. Bad? Well... he could get not so minorly hurt. I can't wait to find out which one it is, although I'm definately hoping it's the good one! Lol.

Author's Response: Oh yes, good things to come from that, I promise, but not of the injury sort, *winks*. I'm so happy you liked the chappy darling, thanks so much for the great review. Hugs.

Reviewer: saradane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 08:47 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

I keep expecting you to go trash without interest. So far you have failed me MISERABLY!

I'm not a military nut and excesive angst and PWP move on without me. I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. I keep thinking that you write younger than you are but I doubt my assumptions.

I am rooting for both of them. I would like to see her get some back (IN FRONT OF WITNESSES) but I suspect you'll give it to her.

To me you are new but DON"T STOP.
I'M waiting.

Author's Response: Oh good, that's wonderful to hear. I'm not really one for excessive angst myself, I find it hard to follow and what angst I do write I find hard to do. Probably because I have to get in the trench of the emotions and it's a downer sometimes. LOL. Well, I'm 36 years old, but about 25 in my mind, the saying old enough to know better but still too young to care suits me. I am still very new to the game of writing, less than a year now, but I do hope to get better as the years progress. It takes practice, practice and more practice. That much I've learned, giggles. I'm so very gald you're enjoying this peice and I'll be at work with the next posting. Thanks so much sweety for the lovely reivew. Huggles.

Reviewer: Mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 07:04 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

Another brilliant chapter hun. I really hope this is a turning point. I wonder where he is going to take her?
Cant wait for an update.

Author's Response: Yes, we're at a turning point here and the next chapter will be transitional on that road towards spuffy. I do hope you enjoy the next posting once it's ready. Thanks for the awesome review darling.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2007 - 06:59 pm Title: Treading Through Uncharted Territory

I LOVE THAT HE TOLD HER HOW HE FEELS, NOW IF ONLY SHE WOULD ADMIT HER'S, BUT THAN THAT WOULD MAKE FOR A SHORT STORY AND WE DON'T WANT THAT. HE'S LEAVING FOR 6 WEEKS,MAYBE DISSTANCE WILL MAKE HER HEART GROW FONDER,I HOPE SO. MORE SOON PLEASE, I'M VERY GREEDY WITH THIS FIC , I LOOKED ON EVERY SITE I COULD THINK OF THIS MORNING, GOT BACK FROM SHOPPING AND THERE IT WAS .I WAS SO GLSD.

Author's Response: It was time for him to come around and see the error of his ways. As for Buffy, well, she's had some thinking to do over the last 2 weeks, so I think you'll like what I have in store for dinner. As for the 6 weeks, you're right. It's that needed break to make the heart grow fonder, *winks*. Thanks for the lovely review honey, take care, hugs.

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