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Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:51 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

First of all, YAY you posted this! Secondly, I can't make myself "hate" Spike. He is too deluded to be disagreeable. he is SUCH a guy and I am so glad that Buffy is putting him in his place.

Having said that, the UST is killing me! Please, a crumb because, like Spike, I'm dying here!

:))

Author's Response: Giggles, it is hard to hate Spike even when he's being such a jerk and I do so love to write him like this. Hmmmmm, a crumb you ask for, I may have a plan, just have to think about it. Thank you very much for the wonderful review darling. Hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: TestaALT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:50 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

This is a remarkable story that puts Spuffy in a creatively simple place. Such a great idea, both of them being in the military. It's been done a billion times in Hollywood but not so much in the Spuffy universe. Gives me a certain "fill," makes me feel like the Buffyverse is getting more complete and dynamic. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: WOW, thank you so much for this review. Yes, its been done a million times in hollywood, and when I started this I wondered just how it would do in the spuffy realm. I'm so happy you're enjoying it hon b/c I truly enjoy writing it. Thanks again for the lovely review, hugs.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:46 pm Title: Rules of Engagement

*ahem* okay my turn!!!!! Hun I absolutely adore this fic and I lu-lu-lu-lu-luv workin' with you, even into the wee hours of the night, LOL!!! 'Cause well, theat's when we get the best lines out ;)

Kuddos as always and can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Giggles, the wee hours of the night when we're loopy and laughing our heads off seems to be the magic hour huh? I so love doing it too. Thanks hon, for everything... and guess what. We're going to meet JM, LMFAO.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:40 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

Wow, I actually feel a bit sorry for Spike in regards to the whole kissing thing. I mean, back when they made that bet playing poker, Spike took the higher ground and here Buffy is determined to worm her way out of it when she gave him her word. I mean, ok, granted... Spike is being a royal SOB here, but, I dunno, Buffy's word should count for something right? I mean, couldn't she have given him a peck or something? Not grumbling at you here! More like grumbling at Buffy, lol!

Really good chapter!! Loved it! =D

Author's Response: That's good to hear that you feel sorry for him. He really is nothing more than a silly misguided boy who wants his treat. Not to worry, he'll get his kiss and Buffy will pay up, you'll see. Glad you enjoyed the chappy sweety, thanks so much for the review. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:33 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

THIS CHAPTER WAS GREAT, I THOUGHT HE WAS SO CUTE THIS TIME INSTEAD OF A JERK,LOVE THE WAY HE TOLD HIS FRIEND 'I GOT IT COVERED MATE " WHEN HE OFFERED THE GIRLS A RIDE HOME AND THE CHEESE INCIDENT WAS HILARIOUS,ALTHOUGH I WISH SHE HAD KISSED HIM. I WAITED ALL WEEK FOR THIS CHAPTER AND NOW I HAVE TO WAIT ANOTHER WEEK FOR MORE, IT'S GONNA DRIVE ME CRAZY ,THIS IS WORSE THAN EPISODIC T.V.
ANXIOUSLY AWAITING MORE .

Author's Response: Giggles, a possessive growly Spike is always hot huh? The kiss will happen, but it may take some time and come about in a fashion you may not guess, *winks*. LMFAO, worse than episodic TV, well, I'll do my best to write more soon, just gotta work on my other story this week first. Thanks for the awesome review hon, smooches.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:25 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

Wonderful Please write more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you sweety, I'll try to update asap. Hugs.

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

I've had a crap day and have been checking for this update ALL DAY (not even exaggerating). It was well worth the wait, and totally cheered me up. I don't think Spike was a jerk -- it's cute 'cause he's just so clueless and earnestly trying to get in her good graces. It was adorably funny -- how many times he uses the word "love" in reference to her and doesn't even notice. I love Gunn's little insights. Now I gotta wait all week until the next chapter! :) Thanks for a great one!

Author's Response: LMAO, well I'm glad to see I could make your day a little brighter with some banter. There is something charming about a clueless guy - even if he digs himself hole after hole to fall in, lol. Glad you caught the 'love' word as it was intentional. Of course he doesn't see it for what it is, but he will eventually. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the update sweety and thanks so much for the great review, hugs.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:16 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

loved it!!!! lol. soooooooo great!!!! buffy got a bit of her own back with that cheese incident. he he...so freakin' funny! i can understand why buffy is being so unyielding with spike. afterall he is a big fat jerk with a capital J. at this pooint he wants her just to prove that he can get her. i mean, i detect a lot of lust but at this point getting buffy is just a game to him. he he he. he'll learn. great job. give your muse lots of smoochies for me. as always, i'm a very satisfied reader.

Author's Response: Ah yes, I couldn't let the cheese thing go without Buffy getting some back - it was terribly gross I realize, but very befitting. As for Buffy being unyielding, well, he made her life hell since day one, and then rocked her world - I know I'd be confused and would stay away from a guy like that - even if said guy is a total hottie, lol. Oh no, getting Buffy is not just a game, he wants her and not for just one night - he's just too stupid to see why he wants her around for more than just one night - silly boy. Awwww, my muse is blushing but thanks you very much as do I for the lively review. Hugs and kisses to you sweetheart.

Reviewer: Blax Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:05 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

God, this chapter and the last one has been completely hilarious, they are both so stubborn and..annoying, get on with the kissage already! ;)

great chapter.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad I could make you laugh - they are so funny when they butt heads aren't they? Ahhhhh kissage. It will hapeen, the when is another matter entirely, *winks*. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 11:00 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

Oooh, I loved it. Great banter between the two and I loved Spike being typical male trying to get in her pants. I hope he gets his kiss in the next chapter!

Author's Response: Giggles, glad you enjoyed tha banter sweety - I truly have enjoyed writing it. As for the kiss... well, he'll get it, but when and how is another matter. Sorry, I know I'm teasing here, but I shan't give it away. Thanks for the review hon, kisses.

Reviewer: elle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

talk about test of the wills, why must he be so rude yet so hot? she sure does have a great amount of resolve, hopefully he will be kinder not because he gets something out of it but because its simply what he wishes to do, or is that wishful thinking for his character?lol update soon sweets

Author's Response: Giggles, that's Spike for ya - rude and hot all at the same time. Buffy's resolve is definetely in part due to her experience she had with him during Basic. He was, still is a right ass to her. As for Spike being nice for the sake of being nice, well, it will eventually happen, just not in the very near future. He needs to get knocked around a bit more before he straitghens up, *winks*. Thank you so muchf for the wonderful review. Hugs.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:45 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

Personally, I appreciate the longer updates, even if I have to wait a little longer for them. Says the person who emailed you about an update 3 seconds before this was posted. *hangs head in sheepish shame* That said, onto the review

1) Okay, so Spike's being a bastard at the bar. Is it wrong that I like him when he's being a bastard? After all, he's not exactly, *wrong* about Buffy wanting the yummy goodness that is Spike...

2) Willow bringing up the tampon incident was priceless. I think my eyes were nearly as wide as Spike's - just sitting here saying, "Oh, no she *DIDN'T*!" LOL! :-D

3) Totally enjoyed Buffy having the upper hand in the food court. She made him eat dirty cheese! *snoopy dance* I am really enjoying Spike realizing that her will do pretty much anything for a chance to get Buffy back into his bed. After everything her put her through in Basic, she is so getting her own back and it's brilliant to see happen.

Congrats on the Love's Last Glimpse nomination - if anyone deserves it, it's you!

Author's Response: LOL, I thought that was funny when I got your email and then another after that right when I posted. Too funny. No, it isn't wrong to like Spike as a bastard - I rather like him like this and enjoy writing him this way as well, so count yourself into the club, giggles. Tampon incident - I had to go there and the cheese... oh yeah. Spike sooooo deserved that. Thanks for the awesome review hon, glad I could deliver and thanks for the congrats. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: Dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2007 - 10:09 pm Title: A Battle of Wills

For moi? Awwwww, thankee! *smooches* Have I told you how much I love this story? Because I do, very much so. I love the UST, the pacing, how you throw us little hints as how their feelings are changing even if they're not aware of those changes yet. This chapter was too funny. I love that Spike's such a cocky, dense man and I love that Buffy finally is getting some revenge for all that he did before. Can't wait for more. *huggles* And thanks again.

Author's Response: You know I love you sweety - and you were a huge hekp as my muse kept getting stuck, pouts, stupid muse. I'm so glad you do like the story hon, you've been so good to me over editing/ideas and of course review. A million thanks to you my dear friend. Smoochies.

Reviewer: maraina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2007 - 07:28 pm Title: Rules of Engagement

Heh! Dishonourable discharge *snickers*. Yep, loved that bit though believe Buffy's ultimate payback came with the 'Scream for me, Spike' line...it was a classic LOL. So glad it was demonstrated that Buffy has standards and that, while she acknowledges finding her former DS physically attractive, she doesn't intend to fall over with her legs in the air for him when his personality and behaviour classifies him (in her opinion) as loathsome.
And what's up with Spike anyway still acting like a complete prick towards her? Instead of treating her like she's scum now he's acting like she's a piece of meat that should be thankful for the opportunity to satisfy his carnal appetite or something! Damn that boy needs to look at himself in the mirror (I'm sure Buffy would be willing to help - at least until he catches her ogling him in it again LOL). More soon please?

Author's Response: Hee hee, I do have a twisted sense of humor - I can't help it. Yes, Buffy is definetely not turned on over his personality whatsoever. As for Spike, well, remember that there are although threr are things he admires about Buffy,he is in no way looking for a relationship after being burned twice in marriage. It's once of these scenarios where dumb Spike doesn't see he's actually growing feelings for her because of his stubborness. Alas, he will at some point as will Buffy, lol - it's getting there that's half the fun. I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the chappy hon, thanks for the awesome review. Hugs.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/14/2007 - 07:05 am Title: Rules of Engagement

It's obvious that they're developing feelings for each other, but I'm glad you don't have them instantly fall in love. So much more fun that way. And uh the lusty sex is way hot too. Srsly, loved the PR0N and all the USTY banter. Quintessential Spuffy for ya - making each other's lives a living hell one insult at a time. Yay!

And LOL, what is he a chubby chaser? I mean, geeze, what's the big deal about a few lost pounds anyway? Plus, formerly being married to Drusilla, I would think he wouldn't mind the skin and bones type.


Author's Response: They are developing feelings, but its slowly and of course they don't see it as such. They just love to hate eachother for now, but as time goes on, well, it's inevitably spuffy, lol. Nope, no falling in love right away - would totally be out of place at this point in the story, so I'm glad you see that. Let the insults abound. Nah, he's not a chubby chaser, Buffy was just too skinny - bony looking butt. He just likes something to grab onto rather than bones - probably why he's glad he's not married to Dru anymore? Hee hee. Thanks for the awesome review hon, smooches.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: Rules of Engagement

This chapter was incredibly hot. Full of teasing. Loved the interaction between them and that Tara helped. I hope another chapter comes out soon!

Author's Response: Oh good - I'm glad you liked the teasing and of course Tara's introduction as well. I felt she could be most helpful in this role. Thanks so much for the review darling. Smoochies.

Reviewer: Wikka Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 06:04 pm Title: Rules of Engagement

OMG!!! I love this story, and i want more! Please update as soon as humanly possible k? lol. I really like how this story is going. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Author's Response: Grins - I'm so glad you like it sweety. I promise to update asap, I just have a lot on my plate right now - poo-ey on RL stuff interfereing with my writing time. Thanks for the lovely review hon, hugs.

Reviewer: . Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 03:39 pm Title: Rules of Engagement

FANTASTIC chapter...i can't wait to read more..i think this is one of the best stories i've read in a while and i'm very impressed with your knowledge/research with the workings of the army... makes the story much more realistic. keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so very much. I must admit it's been fun to write, I just wasn't so sure people would want to read because of the setting. Thank you so very much for the compliment and the lovely reivew, big hugs and a kiss to you from me and my muse.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 03:07 pm Title: Rules of Engagement

And again, my review from yesterday:
Ah sorry, I have so much fun reading I get a bit distracted.
So Buffy isn't on best terms with Spike because he left, that's clear *g*. Totally understandable. Good to see that Spike is still yearning for her. Buffy would feel better if she knew this. A bit of revenge, huh? :)
Oh indeed *grins* This battle was won by Buffy with a little (but only a little help of a not so little syringe. Loved the update (and the hot UST).



Author's Response: Awww, thank you hon. Yup, I read this just a bit ago - I've been terrible about answering reviews this week, but well, there's a lot on my plate these days. I am thrilled you enjoyed the story hon, thanks again my friend. Smoochies to you.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 01:45 pm Title: Rules of Engagement

I hope you update soon...I really enjoyed reading this.

Author's Response: I'll definetely try to, just have a busy last couple of weeks going on. I'm very glad you're enjoying the story sweety and thanks for the review. Kisses.

Reviewer: Nanomi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 05:17 am Title: Welcome to Hell

Um, that last A/N was Andrew. Lol

Author's Response: Really? LOL, I swear I had no idea. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: Katriina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 04:01 am Title: Rules of Engagement

I'm so sorry for not reviewing the earlier chapters of this great story!! It really doesn't mean that I don't like it, because I really do :). I've just been in some kind of funk lately (propably due to a cruel winter we are having and me feeling like I would rather be like a bear and sleep through the -30 degrees celcius days and wake up in the spring...).
Spike is definitely an ass in this story, but I kind of like him that way *giggles*...I'm just very glad that Buffy is giving him a hard time (in more ways than one too...) This chapter was so hilarious! It was way funny when Spike thought that Buffy was going to jump his bones and got so hot and bothered, only to be left hanging... I can't wait for his "retaliation" and how Buffy fights back! It's going to be a dirty, dirty war...*hmmm, kinky...*giggles*... Keep up the great work sweetie, hugs and kisses to you and your muse!
-Katriina

Author's Response: Awww, that's okay. I'm just glad to entertain you and that you have enjoyed the story so far. Ah yes, I understand cruel winters having grown up in rural upstate NY with the lake effect snow and all. Winter blues can cause quite a funk but I do hope you beat the blues. I'm thrilled you liked the laughs in this chapter... Spike may have a bit of revenge, but it won't be right away - that's all I can say for right now, sorry. He's an ass in this story - a dumb ass but he'll learn eventually. Thanks for the awesome review hon - you made my day. Hugs.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 03:50 am Title: Rules of Engagement

Wonderful reunion! Love that he was under her thumb a bit in this scenario --- payback's a bitch, isn't it?

Look forward to more. Perhaps Spike should try a bit of charm instead of snide remarks and innuendo. Well, like all men, he must learn!

Author's Response: Ah yes, revenge can be sweet. Hee hee, he might try charm at some point - but will it work? That is the question, lol. Thanks for the review darling.

Reviewer: slayercaro Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 03:15 am Title: Rules of Engagement

I hope so that it will be funny ... and hot. *grin* Buffy was such a naughty girl and such a bad girl. Knowing exactly how much fear he has for needles and coming with such a big one... But the view she had to have been veeeeeeeeeeerrrry good.

Wish you a wonderful week, too, Smooch. Caro

Author's Response: Giggles - indeed the view was most delicious, even if his behavior was a bit, ahem, ass-inined (probably didn't spell that correctly). Glad you liked it hon and thanks for the review. hugs and kisses.

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2007 - 02:16 am Title: Rules of Engagement

Heh hee... She got one over him. :D
I loved this chapter and can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Keep up the excellent work!!

Author's Response: Thanks darling - glad I could make you laugh in this chapter. Getting Spike back was fun to write. Smooches.

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