

Date: 11/29/2005 - 02:16 am Title: The Battle
That was a original idea how to fight the first. Nice the way all the scoobies , Angel and Spike bound themselves to Buffy to help increase her strength.

Date: 11/29/2005 - 02:04 am Title: The Battle
Excellent! i really liked it!

Date: 11/28/2005 - 06:41 pm Title: The Battle
Love the story very nice spin on season 7.

Date: 11/28/2005 - 03:55 pm Title: The Battle
Wow great chapter, loved the final battle. That was definately an original way to take the First down.
Date: 06/03/2005 - 12:10 pm Title: The Strategy
I loved the chapter , and i loved the idea of concentrating the power in Buffy.. could we have a better twist of Chosen? HopefuL... Glad that you've updated!
Date: 06/03/2005 - 08:02 am Title: The Toll
I always start reading your fics because I think you're a really talented writer, and then have to stop when every single one seems to become "Buffy learns a lesson about being mean to Spike when he was soulless". She wasn't obligated to love soulless Spike. She had a ton of reasons not to. So I just cringe when I read stuff like "Buffy should have loved soulless Spike just like I do." It reminds me of the Xander fans who think he deserved Buffy just because he was loyal all those years, and it kind of creeps me out. And I don't know, but to me, writing a fic to prove that soulless Spike is just as good as soulled Spike is almost proving all the Spike-haters right. They thought his soul made no difference and Buffy was stupid to forgive him. I guess I do think it made a huge difference, and I loved that he made the decision to get the soul.
Author's Response: And that is of course your perogative. I've said a thousand times I think the soul was a ridiculous cop out on the part of the writters. If Buffy is ever to feel anything real for Spike I believe it has to come from forgiveness and acceptance. He's asouless rapist, she's the sort of girl who would beat her boyfriend to a bloody pulp. They both have some growing to do I reckon
Date: 06/03/2005 - 07:24 am Title: The Prize
It's "price"
Author's Response: Nah. The Prize is the first chapter (The Scythe). The Prize is the second chapter what has to be paid for it.
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:42 am Title: The Strategy
Great chapter Bear, thanks for updating. I would've liked a Xander smackdown, but after the great ending I can't complain!!!
Date: 06/02/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: The Strategy
Hee, I was just thinking about you last night wondering if an update was in the future. I should think about updates more often. I love their interaction at this point. It's tentative but I have hope for them. As always, looking forward to more!
Date: 04/29/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: The Other
Have just caught up with you as an author so please don't give me hard times for not reviewing (have been reading mostly your complete fic so far). Just have to tell you that I love the way you look outside the box. Also love that you get Spike without a soul. Always thought that was the worst thing they could have done for him - why would they think that would work? And even more I like that you're a fellow Brit - but not in Watcher Council style! LOL. Wanna biscuit and a cuppa, luv? Will be supportive now that I've found you. You rock and then some. Straight into my Top Ten authors! Thanks ever so.
Date: 04/14/2005 - 08:21 am Title: The Other
Brilliant chapter , brilliant and captivating twist on the fight between Caleb and Buffy , with Spike possessed with the need to kill his Slayer.. The power of your descriptive style is just as exciting as ever. Great interaction between Angel and Spike : I never understood why the writers didn't show how much he was in pain after all he had lost. Looking forward to the next part.
Date: 04/14/2005 - 08:05 am Title: The Touch
I was so glad to see that you decided to finish this amazing story :I was left so hungry at the end of the summer. This part was excellent , I greatly enjoyed how you wrote your own version of the original episode , and the way Spike pushes Buffy to find hope again. Their kiss was a wonderful moment , and Angel's interrupting them..ahgrr! But the harmony with which they go into ' the lion's den' made my heart swell.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 03:58 pm Title: The Other
well, in my wishverse; cordy wakes up...and I am strongly urging writers in a s6 angel group I'm in that if angel shanshues to give him back cordy as a reward...it's the romantic in me wanting a happy ending...and you did perfect on the timeline..i didn't watch ats until I wanted to be more informed being a part of this writers group. And great job on understatement of giles and thanks for not having him be a jerk! Now if you could only help S/D relationship this would be perfect.
Date: 04/09/2005 - 02:18 am Title: The Other
another update yay!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 08:33 pm Title: The Other
Ok, I will start getting my humble requests in now. Please save Spike from dying. I know you can do it. You are wonderful, insightful and full of great ideas. If this praise is not enough, I promise to review every chaper with outmost praise if you save Spike. lilpuff
Date: 04/08/2005 - 07:42 pm Title: The Vineyard
Just picked up your story today. Excellent so far. I'm only on chapter 11, but I wanted to review to let you know what a great job your doing. I can't wait to finish reading the rest of the chapers. lilpuff
Date: 04/08/2005 - 01:04 pm Title: The Other
Wow. Amazing chapter again! I loved the intense action in the beginning and the introduction of a new force - the black and amber scythe. Wonderful twist! My goodness, where do you come up with these? My jaw dropped when Caleb came out of the shadows with a twin scythe in his hands. You just know how to ratchet up the angst yet another level, don't you? Incredible angst moment, when Spike caught the twin scythe too. I knew you wouldn't let Spike kill Buffy, but it was still harrowing seeing his internal struggle. He shows, yet again, what it means to love. I wonder if Angel could handle that weapon, even with his soul. Especially in the head space he's in now, after experiencing so much loss. I think you wrote Angel beautifully. The heavy weight of grief, sadness, despair, and loss came through loud and clear. I'm so glad DreamGirl inspired and reminded you of A/C, so that you could include that in this chapter. The inclusion of that, which was neglected on BtVS, just made this an even richer chapter. You have a way with action, dialogue, imagery, characterization, and human emotion. The fact that you can capture all of that and provide us with amazing plot twists and turns just boggles my mind. Brilliant update again! I can't wait to see the next turn in the bend for these warriors, and the next confrontation with this stronger Caleb.
Date: 04/08/2005 - 11:57 am Title: The Other
I love the twist of the "dark scythe", but I love that Spike was able to resist it even more. Buffy's faith in him is wonderful. It also makes sense that seeing Buffy wouldn't be enough to lessen Angel's loss - they're grown too far apart for that. And, his kind words to Spike are what I think Angel Season 5 was leading up to. All in all, an embarrasment of riches. Kudos on a wonderful chapter.
Date: 04/08/2005 - 08:34 am Title: The Other
Really excellent chapter! Peace overtures and a new scythe. I like the depature and look forward to seeing where you go. Thanks!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 08:24 am Title: The Theif
Another really good chapter - I like the interactions.
Date: 04/08/2005 - 08:20 am Title: The Aftermath
Loved this chapter! Finally, Buffy is willing to let Spike close to her again - she neds him to much to hold him back like that. Great story!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 08:16 am Title: The Vineyard
Really good job at capturing the voicesof the SG - although I generally loath all of them!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 08:12 am Title: The Warning
Blind Buffy - still very frustrating. I think its interesting that they assume the right to curse Spike, as if he has no rights to chose. Such arrogance - and you capture it so well!
Date: 04/08/2005 - 08:08 am Title: The Enemy
Ahh, so now it comes out - Buffy's hipocrisy knows no bounds, although I'm glad that she's fessing up to her true feelings to Willow. SNarky Spike is still the best
Date: 04/08/2005 - 07:52 am Title: The Return
This is the Buffy I hate - the one who is so balck and white and can't see anything but her narrow view, the one who doesn't ever appreciate Spike's sacrifices. Arghh!