Wow! Intense start - I'm scared already - who is this guy and why did Spike alone survive!? Loved the part where Spike went: "How dya kill a sodding dragon!?"

poor spike. my heart breaks for him.

But yay, on the slayers coming to help. I bet Andrew sent them.

And Melinda couldn't leave spike there. she went back for him. How sweet. But I think I would have left and came back with slayers to get spike out of there.

more please.

spike is so sweet to be thinking of her. That is our spike always the hero. always trying to do right.

I fear on what is going to happen to Spike now.

Love this story It is really well written.

more soon please.

This is a super cool fic. I'm eager to see what happens next. I hope Spike doesn't get it too badly and that he gets rescued soon. But the damage has already been done, has it not?

... just like Spike ... too, too brave ... he,s killin' me. I want to jump in and help him. Then I want to hug him and hold him.

Another awesome story ... that I just found and started reading. Thanks for sharing.

Oh come on DOS, can we get on with the recuing or escaping already , I thank God you update frequently otherwise I would lose my mind. I would love for Buffy to do the recuing , but somehow I don't think your going that way, I see her defeating Siron and painting the walls with his blood for revenge, but it's not my story it's yours and truth be told except for chapter 4, i like it .

Go Spike. And help Melinda. I hope that they can both make it out of there. Although, Spike must be pretty weak right now. But maybe his wanted to save Melinda is enough to give him some strength. You gotta love Spike and him trying to be a hero.

more please soon. this is a great story.

Can i dare hope that the horror show is over , and Spike will now be rescued and reunited with Buffy?
I hope so, now a long road to recovery. Looking forward to next chapter.

I do like your stuff, disturbing though it may be, because it usually does work out for Spike in the end. And that's worth waiting for. But just once I would like Spike to not be broken, to fake it but inside still be strong Spike no matter what. Maybe that's not realistic but I always think of Spike that way.

Looking forward to more.

I really love your stories, I think I've read them all. And I really want to read this one because I think it'll be very good. But after reading this chapter I realize that I can't, at least not for a while. It's just too cruel for me. Don't take this as a negative review, that's not my intention. I will keep looking for updates and when things starts to look better I will start reading again.

all i can say is poor spike. I hope that he is able to escape.

My heart breaks for Spike. And I know that my heart is going to break for him more.

Also, just want to tell you that you may get some negative posts from others. But it is your story. And you write it the way you want too.



Author's Response: thanx for your support, love, and yes, i've already gotten a few of those negative posts -- but to be honest, i expect it at this point....not everybody's going to like my writing, but by this point most everyone should at least know what they're getting into when they start any of my fics :P