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Reviewer: DarkBlue Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2009 - 10:46 am Title: Maybe?

You should really continue this. It's a great start so far. I'd love to read more. :)

Reviewer: Missytheslayer Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 07:27 pm Title: Maybe?

It sounds alright so far... but get a beta. You have a lot of mistakes and parts don't fit together right.. It's pretty good but too confusing. Like I said, beta...

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 - 04:26 pm Title: Maybe?

Loved it! Can't wait til the next update!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 11:47 pm Title: Maybe?

good so far

Reviewer: r Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2007 - 07:41 pm Title: Maybe?

4 words...work on your dialogue

Reviewer: Taylor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 10:33 pm Title: Maybe?

Loved it, can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 05:30 pm Title: Maybe?

Loved the banter; the story sounds like fun :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 04:39 pm Title: Maybe?

OH this could get to be really interesting, why do I feel SPike is the new band player.

Reviewer: mitte Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 02:43 pm Title: Maybe?

I've just finished reading both of your new fics - love the storylines by the way :0)
I just have a little something to ad - its silly really and has nothing to do with the story it self, but is more of a spelling problem;0) remember its guess and NOT geuss
look forward to reading the next chapters of your brilliant fics.

Reviewer: Aqua Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 12:15 pm Title: Maybe?

Great plot... but crap writing. i'm so sick of all this people who have a great plot but can't deliver the story... all the spike w/o a shirt and buffy drolling or vice and versa... you have establish the characters first.

Reviewer: spikey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 11:06 am Title: Maybe?

more please

Reviewer: Katkin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 09:14 am Title: Maybe?

this looks like it's going to be funny! update soon please!

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