Reviews For He's my 2nd
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Reviewer: silverforest11 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2010 - 04:36 am Title: chapter 1

please tell me you'll write a sequel please please please!!!

Reviewer: Taylor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2007 - 12:54 pm Title: chapter 1

Loved it!!!! Hope you make another one!!!!!

Author's Response: yep still have the third to write but I have been busy. I figured post and it will get me to write the third and RL showed up again.

Reviewer: cheysma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/18/2007 - 05:08 pm Title: chapter 1

This is so good. I'm ready for part three as soon as you want to post it. I love it when Angel doesn't know everything he thinks he know! :)

Author's Response: I still need to right it, so it will be a little while, rl is quite busy right now.

Reviewer: Squid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 04:33 pm Title: chapter 1

ok. i think you had a good start, however, be careful about your verb tenses and work on flow. maybe find someone to read your stories and makes suggestions and corrections.

Author's Response: yeah I did that then decided to change some things, and was inpatient, I know I really shouldn't be.

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2007 - 12:18 pm Title: chapter 1

Great iea, not-so-great wording/grammar.

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