

Date: 08/27/2008 - 07:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Well, I hope it won't be another 13 months until the next update! And I really want to see what's next!

Date: 08/25/2008 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Buffy can die the presumptious cow. I'd like to see her get a beating while helpless now. I never thought reading a Season 4 fic could inspire the old season 6 anger for Bitchy Buffy.
Aside from that brief rant, your writing style is good and very readable, hard to find good grammer in the world of fanfic.

Date: 08/25/2008 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
Buffy can die the presumptious cow. I'd like to see her get a beating while helpless now. I never thought reading a Season 4 fic could inspire the old season 6 anger for Bitchy Buffy.
Aside from that brief rant, your writing style is good and very readable, hard to find good grammer in the world of fanfic.

Date: 08/24/2008 - 02:25 am Title: Chapter 3
What an intriguing and fresh concept you've come up with! I'm very anxious to get some more pieces of the story, and to see how Spike and Buffy will come together on this one :)

Date: 08/24/2008 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 3
I like this story already, and I can't wait for more.

Date: 08/23/2008 - 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
*rereads first chapters* Oh now I remember, even the big cliffhanger where you've stopped. :)
Good to see an update again :) And even more that there will be another chapter soon. Looking so forward to find out more about that little vampire. A very young demon... well that doesn't fit to his age. Because I hope he will still grow. I'll wait and see :)

Date: 03/28/2008 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great fic so far love the mini vampire.
Update Soon!!!...please

Date: 08/03/2007 - 06:41 am Title: Chapter 2
I am kinda confused but I love it so far and hope that you will update soon.

Date: 07/12/2007 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
No prob (comments). And oh! Cool banner :) Didn't expect a gif but very neat :)
Buffy and the little vampire kid are cute together (took the poll). Mini camp is cute; almost as if he is really a child, the demon too. The Anointed One was a grown demon in a child's body.
Oh Spike is at Giles'? A very bored vamp and not in a good mood. He feels a familiar signature? Thought so..
And the kid didn't need an invite if I read right. Uh-huh.. Buffy is pissed off because she thinks Spike turned the boy? Wrong conclusion *g*
Looking forward to more :)

Date: 07/12/2007 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great update!!! Loved it!!! I'd vote for "Billy", short for "William".
How did Buffy get him inside if he needed an invitation???

Date: 07/12/2007 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, I like this story. Keep up the great work and update soon ^^
Talk atcha later
-Becky

Date: 07/12/2007 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Awesome, glad you're back to working on this, I can tell its going to be good! Just a question though... how did the as-yet-unamed kid get into Giles' place without Giles being there to give an invitation?

Date: 07/12/2007 - 07:11 am Title: Chapter 2
This is a brilliant start, I hope we don't have to wait long for more! (I'm very impatient! :-P)
I think Lucus, but with the nicknames I prefer Jake to Luke, so I'm going with Jakob.
Please update!

Date: 07/12/2007 - 06:45 am Title: Chapter 2
no no no i cant believe u stopped there... well i can but i hate that u did lol
please pleasewrite more soon

Date: 07/12/2007 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooh, new chap! First I'd like to say that the banner is absolutely amazing! Uh oh, things don't look too good for Spike now, Buffy is going to think that he has killed and sired a little kid, she's gonna freak! Great update, can't wait for the next one! :)

Date: 07/12/2007 - 04:19 am Title: Chapter 2
here we go again, loved it just like on the other site.
More please.

Date: 07/12/2007 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter 2
loved the update, but it didn't seem to fit the page properly, made it hard to read.
love your writing style and hope RL lets you update soon
how obvious do you want the relationship to be? how about wil, or alex, or even clem?
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)
It fit the page not properly, like too wide or something? I just checked again and everything seems normal to me...
Hmm, yeah Will sounds nice, I'll definitely consider this one.
Thanks again

Date: 07/08/2007 - 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, I love the start of this. I see that it was a while since this story was posted, but I really, really hope that you haven't given up on it. I'd love to read more of this, please update again soon!

Date: 07/01/2007 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mommy? oh you have to update this soon... please?

Date: 04/23/2007 - 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm wondering if he's temporally or dimensionally misplaced. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hope I'll have more to post soon. :)

Date: 04/23/2007 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start - can't wait to see where you go from here!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Date: 04/22/2007 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, gotta hear more! I hope that you are going to update VERY soon.
Author's Response: Well, it probably won't be very soon, sorry, but I hope I'll have chapter 2 finished soon.
Thank you very much for leaving a review, I'm glad you like it. :)

Date: 04/22/2007 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh I need more, love it.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I hope I'll be able to update soon

Date: 04/22/2007 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice start , I can't wait to see where this goes
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

Date: 04/22/2007 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
HMMM< I wonder who daddy is?
Author's Response: Well, you'll have to see :D
Thanks for reviewing ^__^