[Report This]Date: 06/24/2007 - 11:47 am Title: Phone Calls
I should think they'll be peeling Angel off of the ceiling after that conversation and Buffy and Spike should forget about trying to be just friends - it ain't gonna happen. Nice update.
Author's Response: Lol, yeah that's true, but it wouldn't be a story without the stubbornness would it? :) Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2007 - 04:41 pm Title: Ain't no sunshine
Drusilla seems to be in Spike's past but not in the present. That's good ;-)
Lily.. so Buffy was guessing right that she was abused (hit). Hopefully Buffy can do something about it to change it.
Author's Response: Kinda good, huh? We don't like Drusilla in the present, do we :) We'll see what Buffy can do about it, check out later this weekend and you might find out... Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2007 - 10:42 am Title: Ain't no sunshine
Great update! Poor Lilly... More soon, I hope! :)
Author's Response: Thank you :) Yep, it'll be more this weekend!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2007 - 03:23 am Title: Ain't no sunshine
Nice update.
Author's Response: Thank you, Sam!
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2007 - 03:00 am Title: Ain't no sunshine
LOOOOOOOOOOVE IT. i love spike's character in particular. --and very interesting plot going on with Lily, can't wait to see where it goes
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much :D You really put a smile on my face! Glad to hear that you like Spike's character, I was a bit worried that I made him too... soft maybe :)
Thank you again, Janice :)
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2007 - 11:09 pm Title: Ain't no sunshine
LOVED IT!!! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm so happy to hear that, I'll post a new chapter this weekend, hopefully on sunday. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2007 - 06:14 pm Title: Ain't no sunshine
So Lily broke down infront of Buffy, that was good, she most likely need that.
Author's Response: She probably did, and we'll see how she's doing in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2007 - 05:34 pm Title: Ain't no sunshine
The Dru interaction was interesting, I don't blame Buffy for making a quick exist. Poor Lilly, I hope Spike and Buffy can help her. Loved Buffy's Fruedian slip... lol! Her backpedaling about the date remark was cute. :D Great chapter!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, you made me smile :)
Yeah, we'll see how they can help Lilly... Maybe you'll find out in the next chapter? :)
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 04:50 pm Title: Dinner
Uh oh! Dru's on the scene, I can't wait to find out how she interacts with Buffy. Loved the Spuffy interaction, the cheek kissage was sweet. :D Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, you're always so sweet :) I'll update soon...
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 03:59 pm Title: Dinner
I love it please update.
Author's Response: Thank you, Casey, I'm really glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 12:23 pm Title: Dinner
Oh interesting.. Buffy and Spike got along well; both at the dinner and the surf lesson. Just then Drusilla arrived. What now?.... Waiting to find out.
Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see... for a few more days :)
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 10:00 am Title: Dinner
It was all going quite nicely and along comes Dru to throw a spanner in the works. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll update soon again!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 09:42 am Title: Dinner
Noo! Why did she have to show up just then, things were going so well! Spike doesn't seem too pleased about Dru showing up though. Great update, can't wait to see what's gonna happen next.
Author's Response: Dru is always in the way, huh? :) Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 09:32 am Title: Dinner
It was so nice... until Drusilla showed up. Guess a good story always needs to add a little angst .. and that would be "she".
Enjoying.
Author's Response: Yeah, and since I love a little angst there has to be some, but I promise it won't be too much :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 08:48 am Title: Dinner
OH please oh please tell me she is an ex and he is single, which I believe he is witht he way you are writing it and the Willow and Tara matchmaking.
More please love it.
Author's Response: Well, you just have to wait and see, but I guess you know you're on the right track :)
Thank you, I'll update soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2007 - 08:37 am Title: Dinner
oooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhh.......i like it............
Author's Response: Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 06/17/2007 - 05:13 pm Title: Getting To Know You
Plotting Wicca, love it, I wonder if it will happen.
I love the story, but on a side note, college is spelt with and e not and a.
Sorry just thought you should know.
MOre please.
Author's Response: Thanks :) And thanks for noticing the college thing ;) I didn't think of it.
Another chapter will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: Getting To Know You
I enjoyed Spike and Buffy's conversation, I think it's great they're taking the time to get to know each other. I also loved that they've decided to be friends. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, MidnightGirl! I'm very happy you liked the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 11:34 pm Title: Getting To Know You
I love it so far so please update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, I will update again soon :) I just sent chapter 5 to my beta so I guess it'll be up in a few days! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: Getting To Know You
Asking questions was a good way to get to know the other better. They don't have a lot of chance with Willow and Tara wanting to play matchmaker :)
Author's Response: Thank you Cordykitten! Haha, you're right, they really want them together huh? :)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 11:31 am Title: Getting To Know You
Um, okay, first of all, this story does have a lot of potential, but the writing needs some work. There are too many mistakes, which can be distracting for the readers:
“Summers. Why doesn’t people call you William?”
That should be don't, not doesn't.
“Ho said I blaamed o?”
Was her mouth full or something? It was hard to even tell what that's supposed to be. I have to say that it sounds like Buffy is drunk here, just with the way she's talking.
And also, it's college, not collage. I notice that a lot of people make that mistake. Sorry, I'm just strict when it comes to this stuff, but I do think you have a good idea here. Just reading it over more carefully, or getting a beta to help you out would make it a lot better.
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing the wrong spellings. I just talked to my beta and she missed that part, but everyone makes mistakes :)
As for the spelling, I'm sorry if it bothers you but I can't write everything right since I'm not a native speaker. I'm doing this because I want to train my english a bit, and of course because it's fun to write. But I hope I'll get better later.
Thank you for the comments!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 08:02 am Title: Getting To Know You
L-o-v-e it! you shoule post the rest of the story like... now!
I think you have a really good start here.
Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, the whole story right now? No, that's no fun :) But I'll post another chapter in a few days. I do have pretty much the whole story finished but I need to rewrite some things. Thank you for you review, Aidan!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 06:27 am Title: Getting To Know You
Good start weldone!
Author's Response: Thank you, Katkin :) I saw that you said you were gonna read this story, means a lot you did :) I haven't had any time to read The Superstar and the Single mom, I have just read the first chapter but I have to soon! I loved Her shoulder to lean on!
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 06:25 am Title: Getting To Know You
Ooh, it just keeps getting better! I can't wait to find out more about Spike's past, it seems like there are a lot of things he doesn't want to talk about yet. Great update, you're a very good author! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You just put a big grin on my face :) That makes me really happy, especially since it's coming from you, you're absolutley one of the best authors on the site! Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2007 - 06:23 am Title: Getting To Know You
Nice interaction between both couples. I see Tara and Willow are going to help the situation along a bit oh and I've always loved Willow's resolve face.
Author's Response: Oh me too! She's so cute when she does the resolve face in the series :) Thank you for the review!
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