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Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2007 - 08:02 am Title: My piece of heaven

I guess every mother is worried if her unborn child will be healthy. Buffy and Spike have to worry a lot more because they are both supernatural, even if they know through Kirsten that their kids were okay.
Oh! Travers had video surveillance? Bad if you don't know that and tries to hide the fact that somebody is still alive.
Buffy wants Spike's chip out... but it doesn't sound as if Riley would let that happen at the moment. One more player in Sunnydale soon.
LOL Dawn would have even more embarrassed if she knew that Buffy and Spike were so in tune with the other that they couldn't resist said other *gg*
Oh no, the Council found out about Buffy being pregnant and even guessed the father right. Can't be good.
But good chapter!

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2007 - 12:35 am Title: My piece of heaven

Geat chapter nia...Not good crazy riley is back to hurt our spike and not good at all that travers know's about buffy pregancy

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 08:35 pm Title: My piece of heaven

You're a naughty genius. That's all I'm saying.
cheers
mikim

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 07:58 pm Title: My piece of heaven

Wow, leave town for a minute and return to 2 chapters of one of my favorite stories. I love the direction this is headed in, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 07:35 pm Title: My piece of heaven

Oh, Lord.....Council wankers sticking their nose in where it doesn't belong....again!

Who and where will be the new Slayer from Faith's "death"?

Clueless Riley.......

Well, that's definitely a unique pre birth class!!!! Those two are insatiable.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 06:58 pm Title: My piece of heaven

Ooh, great chapter! Damn that creepy old Travers and damn Riley straight to a faraway hell dimension. Looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Wen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 06:19 pm Title: My piece of heaven

Update Update Update!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 05:20 pm Title: My piece of heaven

As always can't get enough of this story. More nemesis for Buffy and Spike. I like the part about Finn. That was especially good. The reveal to Travers was great. Can't wait to see what is going on with Faith.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 02:27 pm Title: My piece of heaven

Great chapter! :D Loved it!

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Date: 07/06/2007 - 01:47 pm Title: My piece of heaven

*thud*

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 01:12 pm Title: My piece of heaven

Oh, please tell me you're going for a PERFECT trifecta and bringing the Council to its knees? Because that would be just SWELL! :) But I love where you're going, and I love this series---truly phenomenal writing!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 12:37 pm Title: My piece of heaven

Oh no...Travers knows now. This is bad. They'll have the council and Riley after them now. I hope they make it out okay!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 11:47 am Title: My piece of heaven

I anticipate a really nasty surprise for Riley and his men.

And did Buffy go and fufill some prophecy by getting pregnant?

Great update.

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 11:18 am Title: My piece of heaven

ahem! ' peace'. *slinks off quietly*

Reviewer: Aeryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 11:15 am Title: My piece of heaven

Oh boy! Are they ever going to get any piece. The council and now Finn both on their backs. Loving the continuation of this story.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 10:45 am Title: My piece of heaven

travers?? RILEY???? oh this is gonna be so good. hot scene. really loved it. more soon. great job.

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2007 - 10:23 am Title: My piece of heaven

ACK! Riley's return is imminent. *sigh* Angst for our lovely couple, huh? I just hope you give him the smackdown he sooooo richly deserves. And Travers, ugh, why can't he keep his nose out of Sunnydale?? He needs a smackdown, too.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2007 - 12:55 pm Title: Real life, depicted in song

Wow, my eyes are just about ready to fall outta my head. I've just read the entire Origins series over the last few days. You are an AMZAZING author. I really, really loved reading them. Sure, they were long, but in a good way. It's not dragging on or getting boring. It just seems to keep getting better and better ^^
Well, like a said, awesome story. Keep up the excellent work and update soon ^^

Talk atcha later

-Becky

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2007 - 06:14 am Title: Real life, depicted in song

oh, you are so wonderful!!!

Thank your muse for me for encouraging you to write.

sounds like things could get very interesting very quickly. Already you have so many questions I can't wait for you to answer.

Keep it coming :)

Reviewer: Julianna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2007 - 07:45 am Title: Real life, depicted in song

Gracias!....sopresa tan agradable.el capitulo excelente como siempre!.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2007 - 12:56 pm Title: Real life, depicted in song

Always glad to see more of this verse. I do enjoy the characters.

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 10:06 am Title: Real life, depicted in song

Oh I am so glad that your muse refused to give you a break on this story. This was a very good starting chapter and I eagerly anticipate more updates!!!

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 11:49 pm Title: Real life, depicted in song

Wonderful!!! So glad your muse wanted you start immediately; starting off with giving Faith freedom, Jenner better be paying. And getting rid of Xander for Anya a stroke of greatness, she truly deserves more than just sex she is worthy of love. A waddling Buffy must be sight to actually see, Cordy was bad enough when she was pregnant. Thanks for beginning do you have a feel for how many chapters this will be and does Kris their daughter have anymore stories we should look for?

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 06:09 pm Title: Real life, depicted in song

Excellent start to the new story. The hospital scene was intriguing. Are they trying to get a new slayer so Buffy can have maternity leave? You've set up Connor's relationship in the family, even as you've spelled out his feelings of guilt by proxy. Anya's speech was a long time coming, and it was delightful that she had such strong backup from the gang. Now Willow and Xander are the outsiders, a decided change from canon.

I'm looking forward to wherever you're taking this.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 03:54 pm Title: Real life, depicted in song

Ohhhh! Faith is quitting her job so to say. I didn't expect Faith to be the one on the table. Sounds as if they did it on purpose to get another girl called.
Connor feels the 'sins of the fathers'. He may be Angel's and Darla's by blood but he is Buffy's and Spike's by heart.
Xander still didn't change his ways.. sadly but right, Anya won't come first for him rather Buffy or Willow. No way to treat your girlfriend/wife.
Wonder if Willow changed.
Loved to see the new story :)

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