

Date: 06/25/2007 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it so far; interesting premise. It might be easier to write in past tense than present tense. I don't think an 28 year old and an 18 year old is statutory rape; I know in the states, at least, the age of consent borders from 16-18. Looking forward to more. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice.

Date: 06/25/2007 - 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like it so far. but why do writers always make spike the older one? i love older buffy and having spike as her boy toy. haha...
but i look forward on reading more of this. keep up the wonderful work.
Author's Response: I gues we do it because he is older, he was over 100 when he was with Buffy so hence the old guy younger girl.
So if you were to read a young Spike older Buffy what ages are you thinking of.

Date: 06/25/2007 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh how cute this fic is soo far
please keep up the good work
waiting for more
Author's Response: Thanks

Date: 06/25/2007 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw Honey the proof reading was nothing and it shows I'm no beta because I see something I missed ....But this is a good story please carry on with it....~Jeanette~
Author's Response: Yeah I know I need a beta, but can't seem to have luck with them.